Date: September 30, 2007 12:22 pm Title: 2:00 AM
Loved it! The dream sequence was realistic. I liked that it was a bit weird and jumbly. I think if you had made Jim dream the exact scene as it happened, it would have been strange. I liked that it just had a tiny bit of the actual Casino Night feel. Keep going this is great!
Date: September 30, 2007 11:09 am Title: 2:00 AM
There is no need for tomatoes! you did a great job with it. The dream did feel pretty real. I was wondering how you'd get through these late night hours w/o them sleeping. Pam on a caffeine high should be pretty darn entertaining. can't wait!
Date: September 30, 2007 10:35 am Title: 2:00 AM
AWESOME!!! Please continue! I'm curious to see whether they end up together!!
Date: September 30, 2007 09:12 am Title: 2:00 AM
Ooh, I was wondering if the 'Pam at Jim's desk on the phone' scene was going to make an appearance in this AU. I like how this amps up Jim's nervousness and inner turmoil. Can't wait to see where this leads.
Date: September 30, 2007 09:04 am Title: Prologue
I am loving this so very much. I love how you take the reader on the journey with Jim and Pam. You can feel the time passing and the inevitable parting approaching. This is so lovely and real.
The dream sequence was awesome as well. No need to be nervous there.
Looking forward to more hours!
Date: September 30, 2007 07:50 am Title: 2:00 AM
Oh, Swiff... that was FANASTIC! No, I don't think I'll be grabbing the tomatoes, unless it's to make them into a tasty marinara sauce for the Italian dinner I feel I should make you as a way of saying "thanks" for such a great chapter! :)
I had no doubts whatsoever that you'd safely navigate these two kids in a realistic and believable fashion through these uneasy and unsure wee small hours of the morning, and this chapter is proof that you're doing that in your usual brilliant way. Bravo!!
Date: September 30, 2007 07:09 am Title: 2:00 AM
“Damn. You’re a little hardcore right now, Beesly.” Hahaha. Awe-some.
Date: September 30, 2007 06:37 am Title: 2:00 AM
You're doing a great job with this story, Wendy. I was a little out of breath by the end of the dream too. Love how Pam just takes charge of the coffeemaker, and chugs it down black. Guess she really, really wants to stay awake, hee.
Can't wait to see where our heroes are off to next!
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2007 06:04 am Title: Prologue
Hi!
PLEASE DON'T STOP! i meant to review earlier but i'd forgotten my password, i completely love your story! Please keep going!
Date: September 30, 2007 05:28 am Title: 2:00 AM
Absolutely loved this. You did a great job with Jim's dream...I felt that panicky feeling of not being able to move or talk and all the images flying at him...really nicely done. And it looks like FNB's in charge now! Look out, Jim!
Date: September 30, 2007 04:53 am Title: 2:00 AM
I'm saving the tomatoes for my sandwich later. ;) Loved what you did with the dream - very vivid, and I loved the lengthy, run-on sentences - it made it seem much more like it was a trail of subconscious thought. Great job!
And I was mildly worried about how you'd end the movie in less than an hour, but perfect! You made them sleep! And let them be adorable over coffee! You win, Wendy Blue, you win.
Can't wait for the next hour. :D Or ultimately perhaps I just can't wait for some Jim/Pam!kiss-goodness.
10 [Report This]Date: September 30, 2007 03:04 am Title: 2:00 AM
I finally sat down and read this story just now. I've been meaning to FOREVER. And it's quite excellent, and I'm enjoying it a lot - even the dream sequence. ;)
Looking forward to the next part!
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2007 09:04 pm Title: 1:00 AM
I really am enjoying this fine story of yours. MORE PLEASE! :)
Date: September 27, 2007 09:16 pm Title: 1:00 AM
Short review: wonderful. Nothing to say besides keep up the good work. And thanks for submitting your own 'all-time favorite' guess. *still in TIZZY*
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 08:47 pm Title: 1:00 AM
I love this I love this I love this.
9 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 04:11 pm Title: 1:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this!! I hope you have Pam come to her senses in the next few hours. This IS AU, right?
Date: September 27, 2007 02:50 pm Title: 1:00 AM
It was an excellent chapter (I'm a sucker for Princess Bride, like almost everyone else) and the fact that you mentioned Ben Savage was cute, I loved Boy Meets World! Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!
8 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 01:57 pm Title: 1:00 AM
The Princess Bride is an awesome flick. Nice choice.
Date: September 27, 2007 12:12 pm Title: 1:00 AM
i LOVE this fic!
Date: September 27, 2007 11:40 am Title: 1:00 AM
Oh, what a cute image of them cuddled up on the couch watching TPB! Great job!
Date: September 27, 2007 11:24 am Title: 1:00 AM
That's a very sweet story. Initially, I thought you might take them on a roadtrip, but snuggling in Jim's apartment is also a perfectly acceptable option. ;) I'm looking forward to more.
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 10:48 am Title: 1:00 AM
Aww, really sweet. I love this
Date: September 27, 2007 07:47 am Title: 1:00 AM
Oh, my. Pam wearing Jim's clothes and snuggling with him on the sofa. Dead. I'm dead.
I know if I finish that question, my voice is going to crack like I’m 13 and there’s just no need for that kind of humiliation tonight. Jim's nervousness is so freaking adorable. I heart S2!
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 07:11 am Title: 1:00 AM
Awesome chapter, as usual. He's so cute :-)
Date: September 27, 2007 07:05 am Title: 1:00 AM
That was lovely; such a warm and cozy feel.