10 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2009 07:43 pm Title: Hummer Madness
There are very few updates that make me shout out, "YES!" when I see them. This was one of those moments :)
LOVED it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate that!
Date: July 09, 2009 01:54 pm Title: Hummer Madness
Kgreene! Always a joy when you come to visit. You don't give yourself enough credit, sir. First off, the title made me snort. I imagine my mind probably works a bit like yours ; )
Fine. When the two of you and your progeny are
trapped in a ditch and a bear is ripping the roof off of your...
(waving hand, thinking)
Toyota Crap-Box, you'll be screaming "Dwight
was right!!! Dwight was RIGHT!!!"
Ha! I'm a Toyota owner and that still made me grin. Fun, fun, fun :)
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! I'm really glad you liked it! I was a little worried. And no offense towards Toyota owners. They make a nice line of cars. But Toyota Crap-Box sounded funny to me... lol...
Date: May 19, 2009 10:57 pm Title: Knocked Up and Locked Up
THIS is hilarious...absolutely believable. I could see this playing on the show. Totally reads like canon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: May 18, 2009 05:43 pm Title: Knocked Up and Locked Up
haha GREAT!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: May 18, 2009 12:01 pm Title: Knocked Up and Locked Up
First off, I cannot believe that this is #63! Wow. And all such fun. I'm hoping so much that we get to witness Jim and Pam informing their co-workers of the pregnancy. To think of all the fun that's in store makes me even happier than I already am if that's possible. Thanks, Kev.
Author's Response: Thank you! To be completely honest, as much as I love Jim and Pam and the thought of them having kids, I am not a fan of Pam being pregnant now. I'd much rather they be married first and then getting pregnant. But that doesn't mean I can't have fun with it... lol...rnrnYeah, Number 63. That's crazy. I never thought I would write 23 of these things, much less 63. Thanks Nan!
Date: May 18, 2009 08:43 am Title: Knocked Up and Locked Up
They really should be paying you to write for this show. You know this type of scene is going to happen, and I can't see them getting it any more right this what you've given us.
JIM
(nervously)
Don't call him... um... Surely
And
Unca Dwight
had me howling, but really the whole this is utterly believable. Glad you're back and onto this one.
Author's Response: Thanks! I would love to see a scene like this. And I'm glad you found it true to form. Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2009 09:40 am Title: Starting Over
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS You're back! This was really cute, and really funny (Dwight). So intense eh? Poor Pam....
so glad to see you back writing :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Dasani! Yeah, it's been awhile with the writing... I hope to keep it up.! (TWSS) { : O
9 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2009 03:14 pm Title: Starting Over
This is great! You've got the three of them spot on! I am totally unable to pick out the parts I like the best because ... it's the whole thing! This is one of your best opens yet, kgreeene!
Just one thing threw me a little. Dwight starts with "number 1" then goes on to "number two." I don't know, I guess I watched too much Star Trek: Next Gen or something but I thought the "number two" was referring to the person of Pam or Jim. I kept rereading it thinking he was addressing Jim with number two and Pam with number three. Maybe it's just me. Probably it's just me. But I think I would've been less confused if you'd stuck with either arabic or spelled out numbers.
Author's Response: I admit, I can never see the phrase "Number 1" and not hear Patrick Stewart's voice in my head but I didn't think it would a problem here. That's interesting. I don't know if anyone else had that same reaction. Hmmmm..... well, thank you for the kind words about the rest of it, I really appreciate it!
9 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2009 02:34 pm Title: Starting Over
This was solid gold. :D Your Dwight was so hilariously in character. Wow. As always stellar work, kgreene, thanks for the read.
Author's Response: And thank YOU for the nice comments!
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2009 10:07 am Title: Starting Over
Haha brilliant. Sweet and funny. If only we got these kinds of Jim and Pam conversations going in the actual show!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'd like to see a bit more sweetness between Jim and Pam as well... but they have to be careful with that. Then people will get sick of it. They do a good job, overall, I think. We've seen some nice moments between them this season. Who knows what the season finale will bring?
Date: May 06, 2009 08:59 am Title: Dummies
P.S. Jazzfan and I pimped you over on the MTT forum :)
Author's Response: Wha?? Putting me out on the stroll and I don't see dime one! lol... Did you really?? Thanks, I'll check that out! You guys are good to me!
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2009 08:30 am Title: Dummies
Seriously: WHY don't you write for the show? They need you! These are too good!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wish they felt the same way!
Date: May 06, 2009 07:14 am Title: Starting Over
Welcome back, Kevin! So glad you're inspired. This was one of your better efforts IMHO. I mean, they're all good, but you know what I mean ; ) It was fun to envision this playing out. Looking forward to whatever else you have in store.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! I hope I'm inspired enough to write over the hiatus. I definitely want to get my summer Office writing in. Thanks again!
Date: May 06, 2009 07:01 am Title: Starting Over
Woot! I'm so glad you're back, and this is hilarious! I can just see the look on Pam's face at the end. I sure hope the actual show explores this dynamic.
Author's Response: Thanks Jazzy! It's good to be back. I think they will have a great deal of fun with the Jim/Pam/Dwight troika (love that word). I know I have a few more ideas in that vein.... Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks Jazzy! It's good to be back. I think they will have a great deal of fun with the Jim/Pam/Dwight troika (love that word). I know I have a few more ideas in that vein.... Thanks so much!
Date: February 17, 2009 11:11 am Title: Candid Camera
Oh no! Love knows no bounds I suppose? Ha! Yet another smile from you, kev. Thanks : )
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! And yeah, you'll do really kooky things for the woman (or man) you love...
9 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2009 09:46 am Title: Candid Camera
Very cute, as usual. Thinking it's going to be a "no cookie" night for Pam though... I'm beginning to worry about you if you're having dreams of Jim in makeup, kgreene. Everything okay? *grin*
Author's Response: LOL... That's good, Jazzy. Actually, I had to make that part up later, my dream didn't have a real ending. Wise guy... lol...
Date: February 17, 2009 09:19 am Title: Candid Camera
Okay, I'll have you know I'm risking "what website are you looking at?" so I can leave this review at work. I'm having a kind of crappy day. This helped a little. *grin* A lot, actually. Thank you for that.
You should have Office dreams more often. :)
Author's Response: I'm having the exact same kind of day, Callisto, risking the same thing to post this. And I am so glad that it helped you deal with the day a little better. Your review did the same for me. Thank you. : )
Date: February 05, 2009 06:03 am Title: Dummies
You're not rusty at all, I was really excited to see you were "back". I can see Michael in every. single. scene. How do you do that?
And this was inspired:
CREED
Insulin? Insanity Clause? Intubation tube?
Everyone stares at Creed.
CREED
I used all those the other day.
Author's Response: Thanks, jazzy! I'm glad you liked! I don't know, I just felt like it wasn't flowing well... I'm happy you didn't think so.
Date: February 04, 2009 10:48 pm Title: The "IN" Crowd
Excellent ensemble banter! Kudos to you and your comedic skills.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks!
Date: February 04, 2009 06:08 pm Title: The "IN" Crowd
Tuna! You're not rusty. This was an excellent ensemble piece. Nothing to worry about. As with many of your CO's, I could picture it in my head as I was reading.
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! You made me feel better about it!
Date: February 04, 2009 04:26 pm Title: The "IN" Crowd
Creed is awesome.
Author's Response: lol.. he's fun to write, that's for sure... thanks!
Date: January 19, 2009 11:52 am Title: Holding The Bag
OK now that one I could totally see happening. It was spot on.
Author's Response: Thanks Belsum!
Date: January 16, 2009 06:39 am Title: Brothers Gonna Work It Out
This chapter reminded me. Where I work, there is a family of hispanics living next door. One of the kids was shouting out "I just want to ask the african americans a question!" and kept running over to the fence to climb over. It took me a while to explain to him that 1) he is not allowed on the fence, 2) they are hispanics, not african americans!
Author's Response: LOL... wow. That is interesting... lol.. personally, I don't mind if someone calls me black. "African American" is nice but a bit too PC for my tastes. Oh well... it doesn't insult me, I guess...
Date: January 15, 2009 10:58 am Title: Sex and the Silly
Wow... those suits.... rather disturbing. Well, better to be safe than sorry. Haha.
Author's Response: They are weird, aren't they? I think I'd take my chances with "sorry"... Thanks, EH!
Date: January 15, 2009 10:56 am Title: The Invitation
That is so a Dwight prank. Sad and pathetic, but hilarious. And also, Jim is such a dork, he totally loves all the same things as Dwight, just doesn't admit to them. Ah, Jim. Embrace the dorkiness....
Author's Response: lol.. yes. He and Pam definitely have a closet dorkiness going on... the first step to fixing a problem is to admit you have one.. thanks, EH!