1 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2017 01:42 pm Title: Four Stars
This has to be one of my favorites, I'm just a huge Jim and Pam fan.
1 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2017 11:24 am Title: Lost In Translation
Wow!! That was amazing! I felt like I was reading off actual scripts from the show. Especially loved the Jim and Pam ones! Really great writing, you should take up script writing. Hope to see more.
Date: September 29, 2011 02:34 am Title: Dummies
I meant sorry to review so late!
Author's Response: Hi, Sudoku! Yes, as you can tell, I have not been on this site in quite awhile. Thank you so much for the kind review! I do inch ever closer to writing a new one but then usually something comes up and I forget. I had promised two of my buddies on the Life In The Office forums that I would. I better hop to it! Thank again for the review. I'm sorry I'm so late in responding!
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2011 02:33 am Title: Lost In Translation
This is by far the best story I read in this site. You wrote the characters so well. It's unfortunate I found this story at work, then I become an addict who said one more chapter, then one more until the last chapter. I'll make up for it tomorrow at work.
I love all your C/O and my favorites are usually the ensemble chapters. It seems you haven't written any for a while. I hope the new season can bring you new inspiration.
Sorry to review your late, I'm a new fan of the Office.
Date: August 29, 2010 10:48 pm Title: Lost In Translation
AWESOME. I wondered if these were made up! Glad to hear they are not. My grandfather has had wacky sayings my whole life. Maybe I'll write a book too one day. :-)
Author's Response: You should! A friend over on the Life In The Office Forum site recently read "S!%# y Dad Says" and despised it. I was just laughing at his post. Yours would be, no doubt, MUCH better! And thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2010 09:03 pm Title: Dummies
I LOVE when your cold opens pop up in here, Kev! They are always so hilarious! I hope inspiration strikes you again soon! I think I may have to go back and read these again for a good chuckle!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Yeah, it's been a while... I'm trying to get back into the swing of writing these. When the season starts I'm sure I'll be more inspired. Thanks again!
Date: August 21, 2010 05:17 pm Title: Lost In Translation
Kev! So glad you're feeling inspired. This was a gem--so funny. Great characterizations. And did I say it was funny? It was funny :D Btw, my dad would have been 89 in June. A toast to both of them :)
Author's Response: Wow! Definitely, Nan! I know they both had quite an effect on us. And thanks, I'm really glad you liked it!
Date: August 21, 2010 07:22 am Title: Dummies
Yeehaww - when I saw you'd written a new one, I was grinnin' like a cat eatin' bumblebees and I up and opened it faster than fresh grass through a goose. I loved the character Jo (yes, I'm from the South) and of course Kathy Bates, and this is perfectly in character.
Also, I love the sayings. I grew up with my grandmother (who was born in 1887) and she was a wealth of these. Every once in awhile I'll use one and my son looked at me one day and said, "Where do you GET these? Are they for real?" I just smiled. My personal fav of my grandma's was "It don't amount to a fart in a whirlwind." It applies so very often.
Thanks for another hilarious Cold Open. We've missed you this summer - you've been scarcer than hen's teeth, and your pieces are finer than frog hair.
And if you stay gone again this long, I'll jerk a knot in your tail.
Author's Response: LOL.... Jazzy, those are GOOD ones! (I'm stealing the "Fart in a whirlwind" one... lol) You're really making me think of my dad with these. And I'm glad you thought these were very "Jo". I heard her voice when I wrote them and they just sounded right. Her Talking Heads sounded like Jo to me, I felt pretty good about her "Voice". I'm glad to see you liked.
"Finer then frog hair"... lol! Thanks again!
Date: August 20, 2010 10:07 pm Title: Lost In Translation
Glad to see you haven't deserted us, Kevin. I loved all the "Jo-isms." I could hear Kathy Bates speaking as I read. I love that they've now been passed on for three generations too!
That book is hysterical, BTW. If your own dad wasn't like the dad in the book, one of your friends' dads certainly was. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! No, I haven't deserted MMt... just harder to get time to write,,, and harder to be inspired. We'll see what this season brings (which should be the last in my opinion... no MIchael Scott?!?!?!?) And I'll have to check that book out. It sounds funny. Thanks again!
Date: August 20, 2010 02:20 pm Title: Lost In Translation
Love your dad's sayings! I especially like the buzzard one! ...And it's nice to see someone else including their dad in their story. :-)
Author's Response: Gotta honor them somehow, right? I have to catch up on Cardiac Care, I haven't been on the site in awhile. Good stuff. And thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2010 07:59 am Title: Secret Agent Number Two
I want this to be on the show so, SO bad! This is pure genius! Wow!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I really appreciate that!
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2010 04:03 am Title: Secret Agent Number Two
BAHAHA! now THAT was awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2010 08:26 pm Title: Secret Agent Number Two
This is made of AWESOME. So, so funny and in character. Right on!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: March 15, 2010 10:56 am Title: Secret Agent Number Two
LOL...and ewwwwwww : D Thanks for the Monday afternoon grin, kev.
Author's Response: Thank EWWWWW, Nan!
Date: March 15, 2010 09:22 am Title: Secret Agent Number Two
Bwahhahaha. You are a genius. Thanks for improving my Monday morning about 3,000%. I snorted tea when I read this:
DWIGHT
No! No... I can....
(beat, then sigh)
Alright.
(low, peeking at Jim)
I have a small package.
Author's Response: Lol.. Thanks, Jazzy! Glad I could make ya snort!
Date: February 21, 2010 03:24 pm Title: Pigs in (Office) Space
That's awesome - Pigs at the Office!
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought that was kind of a stretch but... I couldn't help myself.. lol... Thanks!
Date: February 21, 2010 02:37 pm Title: Double-teamed
Well, this chapter is way more enjoyable if I substitute Emily for Donna, but still, awesome!
Author's Response: Lol... feel free! Thanks!
Date: February 14, 2010 02:39 pm Title: Halpert in the Middle
Awesome! Plus, the ones with the nuts are the best!
Author's Response: Lol.. my wife feels the same way. Thanks!
Date: February 14, 2010 02:35 pm Title: Slick Days
Hmm... love sick days. I like the idea..... however, is there a sick of love day? Cause, I'm presently single, and therefore, am sick of all the Valentine's stufff.... gotta look into this
Author's Response: Sorry to hear that! But, just when you are completely sick of it... that's when someone pops into your life!
Date: February 12, 2010 11:59 am Title: That's What She Meant To Say
How dare you have a life? I'm so glad to see you have one of these up again. *cue Michael* Nobody writes Michael quite as well as you do, and Jim's talking head was hilarious as well.
Viaggravation, maybe? *giggles* Okay, maybe not. Awesome CO.
Author's Response: Ah, thanks Jazzy! Viaggravation is not bad, I may use that for another C/O!
Date: February 11, 2010 09:06 pm Title: That's What She Meant To Say
I have missed these so much! I was excited to see a new one. You never disappoint!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! It's too easy to say TWSS there, so I won't. Lol...
Date: February 11, 2010 04:57 pm Title: That's What She Meant To Say
Hey, Kevin! Are you snowbound like me? Always great to see a new CO. Jim's convo re the cable was so cringe-worthy. Oh, how I would loooove to hear that on the show...lol :D Great job, as usual.
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! Yeah we got about 12 or 12 inches out by me... Oh boy. Now everything sounds like a TWSS... Lol...
Date: February 11, 2010 12:46 pm Title: That's What She Meant To Say
BRILLIANT. God, you should write these for the show. I loved every moment of this, and laughed out loud several times. Jim's TH full of double entendre was HILARIOUS, and I love when he got some embarrassed about the thick cable in his bedroom....
This was perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wasn't sure how this was, it's been a while since I wrote one. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: November 29, 2009 04:59 am Title: Route 476 to Middle-Earth
I love that Hank got involved. And considering Night Out, 15 wasn't a bad deal. :)
(and 2 minutes late isn't a big deal! Maybe the light just took too darn long to change.... or maybe I've been 2 minutes late to work a bit to often)
Author's Response: Lol.. yeah, me and you both. Thanks!
Date: November 29, 2009 04:57 am Title: Roy
Yeah, that 'attempted murder' thing tends to hang around.
Author's Response: It does, doesn't it? So unfair... : )