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Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 09:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay! Your stories are always so amazing and hot, but they almost always leave me hanging, so this makes me too happy for words. This is so cute and so sexy; Loved it.

And this made me laugh out loud: "she reminds herself that when she turns around, it should be because she's going to try to score. A basket."

That was great.



Author's Response: Thanks, proposals! Believe me, I'm usually as frustrated as you are, so I gave in with this one. AU is a nice cop-out sometimes ;)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Two of my favorite things - Jim and basketball - in one charming story. Delicious.

Author's Response: Thanks, Colette :)

Reviewer: OldSchoolDool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 06:39 am Title: Chapter 1

"Amen."

"Your mom."

 Hee!



Author's Response: Glad you liked that, OldSchoolDool ;)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Very nicely done and I loved all the basketball tips.:)

Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona! :)

Reviewer: kyrafic Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 06:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, I liked this -- especially Pam's version of the oath.  Hee.


Author's Response: Glad you liked that, kyrafic ;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 06:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Who knew basketball could be so hot?  Fun and well written as always.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Morning Angel ;)

Reviewer: Jodithgrace Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Oooh..sex and basketball. I don't know enough about basketball to aprreciate the game stuff, but the Pam/Jim stuff came through just fine. Excellent.

Author's Response: Thanks, JodithGrace :)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1

What a great way to start my day -- that was awesome, as usual!  Every time you write these two (even in the 30's!) they are so perfectly in character that it's like watching an episode, I swear.  I cackled out loud throughout the whole basketball oath thing, too.  Good god, woman -- you are so talented!  Now, not to be greedy, but, um, could you start writing little short ones like this like, on a daily basis?

Author's Response:

I love writing the short ones as often as possible, so...I'll do what I can! Thanks for the awesome feedback, girl7 ;)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 04:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Now that's what I'm talking about.  Hee!  Welcome back Shan!

Author's Response: Thanks, Krissy - good to be back :)

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 04:20 am Title: Chapter 1

<>So. Many. Awesome. Lines. 

Can't. choose. one. to. quote.

<> Rock on with your bad self! <>

Author's Response: Thanks, Jen74! :)

Reviewer: justy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Niiiiice. Hee!


Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, justy! :)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 24, 2006 02:07 am Title: Chapter 1

Tee hee.  If lack of willpower brings such lovely fluff as that, I will not complain. 

Author's Response:

Hee - thanks Lissa_Maylee :)

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