Date: September 21, 2008 01:52 pm Title: Climax
Wow, I'm floating on air after reading that last part. The tension you establish is so delicious. I can totally identify with Pam here!
I love the concept of the Halpert/Beesly Friendship 2.0. Poor Pam is trying so hard. They're so obviously into each other, it's so frustrating that they can't see it. I have a feeling that's about to change, though. Really looking forward to the next part!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 01:47 pm Title: Climax
My heartrate was just as fast as Pam's (if not, more) when Jim pulled her down onto the couch. Wow that was exciting! I'm glad you're bringing this story back and I hope updates come fast! Oh and congrats on your first real job!!
Date: September 21, 2008 01:39 pm Title: The Setup
I forgot ... congratuations on your new job!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 01:37 pm Title: Climax
Whew! MAN was that worth the wait!!!!! Such sweet tension ... es delicioso!
I'm thinking 5 - 6 more chapters, myself! C'mon, you have it in you!
9 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 12:54 pm Title: Climax
Wow. The slow build here is killing me! You must update soon!!!!!! Great story! Exclamation Point!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks, Desslok! I'm working feverishly on chapter 5. I promise it won't be another 11 months between updates!
Date: August 04, 2008 02:22 pm Title: The Setup
I just discovered this, and I've loved what I read. I really like your characterizations and dialogue. I hope that you come back and finish it off one of these days, because it's just getting good. I mean, it was already good, but it's getting gooder.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I've finally updated, if you're interested :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 11:20 am Title: The Setup
Oh, amazing post-benihana fic, I miss you so! Update? Please? Pretty please? ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I finally, finally updated. Hope you like it!
Date: April 22, 2008 12:51 am Title: Rising Action
Ooohh! Have you abandoned this story or will it be updated some day? It's great, I'll cross my fingers for another chapter or two!
Author's Response: It's not abandoned! It was just on hiatus for a long, long time. But it's back! I hope you like chapter 4 :)
Date: April 04, 2008 08:50 pm Title: Rising Action
Oh, I can't resist saving fairies' lives. I'm clapping for them and for you. This is great. Cant wait for next chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks just-once! On behalf of myself and the fairies :) Chapter 4 is finally up!
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2008 12:02 pm Title: Rising Action
Egads, shan21 -- I'm at the edge of my seat, here . . . do you have more of this??? It's like a drug!
You capture Jim, Pam and Dwight so perfectly. I'm green with envy. You're my hero!
Author's Response: Your hero! And then I left you hanging for another...7 months. Ack! I finally updated. Forgive me?
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2008 04:11 am Title: The Setup
Oh you can't end there you just can't! Really love this and hope you update soon! :)
Date: November 20, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Rising Action
I'm definitely willing to contribute to the grade-improving, fairy-life-saving endeavors, mostly because this was fantastic. I don't really like manipulative Jim, but I can see how it's a valid interpretation of the character; otherwise, I loved every line of this story. You write Dwight perfectly! Scream therapy? Spot on.
Author's Response: Hehehe, I love writing Dwight into all of my fics. He's so easy to write, which probably says something bad about me. Don't worry too much about Manipulative Jim. Our Jim could never be all that bad, right?
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Rising Action
Wait, how come this isn't finished? It's really great.
Author's Response: Thanks :) It isn't finished because I'm such a procrastinator! It's terrible. But I've finally updated!
8 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 08:50 am Title: Rising Action
i knew it - they are so going to make out. i love this. there's this light touch to this fic, i can't really explain, but i just think it's dawsome.
Author's Response: Dawesome, huh? Well, I can't really ask for a better compliment, can I? As for their making out, well I just posted chapter 4, so I guess you'll just have to read and see :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Rising Action
Great story! I hope you find time between classes to write the next chapter! Get to the sofa...
Author's Response: Thanks! Hehehe. I found time to update... 11 months later. But I did it! And we finally get to the sofa :)
Date: October 31, 2007 06:06 pm Title: The Setup
the mark of how good a writer you are is being able to successfully transport us back into the angst of season 3, with all the magnificent dialogue and POVs and DWIGHT and the huuuumor! and daring!jim and assertive!pam and oooh, please, give us more, this is a thing of beauty. off i go to find your other stories. thank you for this wonderful series.
Date: October 31, 2007 07:21 am Title: Rising Action
Clapping saves fairies lives? Awesome.
Anyway! Great chapter, great fic! Ooh, that table's are turning. :P Come on, one of you say something! Confess your love! :P
Karen smells. :)
Update soon!
Date: October 31, 2007 07:20 am Title: Rising Action
Clapping saves fairies lives? Awesome.
Anyway! Great chapter, great fic! Ooh, that table's are turning. :P Come on, one of you say something! Confess your love! :P
Karen smells. :)
Update soon!
Author's Response: Karen does smell. And I heard she has cooties too. lol, thank you for the review! I've finally posted the next chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 05:52 pm Title: The Setup
Shan21, you rock my world. This story is great! This is my first review I've ever submitted. I created a username just to beg you to post chapter 4. More angsty goodness, please!
Date: October 30, 2007 12:18 pm Title: The Setup
I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story yet but if not.... I LOVE IT! You capture Jim's thoughts perfectly, and I'm loving all this anticipation. That line, "we've gotta try out that sofa" or whatever it was gave me chills. Please update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Rising Action
how can I resist improving a mid-term score. I cannot wait for more of this story! I'm a pre-season four addict and you are TOtally feeding my addiction in a really delicious kind of way. More soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think your feedback helped my midterm score too, because as it turned out I did fine. And now you can feed your addiction a little more, because I finally updated :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 10:39 am Title: Rising Action
I like how you switched perspectives halfway through. Also, incorporating the new butterfly charm was great! At this point in S3 we still hadn't seen all the growth in FNB so using the new charm was a great way to hint at that. I hope in the next chapter you can find other ways to hint at her growth (maybe in her thought processes). Anyhow, awesome chapter as usual. You really have a knack for the conversations!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great compliments, str! I hope you like chapter 4!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 10:26 am Title: The Chase
Dwight and the fuzzy navels, his version of scream therapy, being a licensed (well, not) counselor - hilarious! You write Dwight well and, of course, Jim and Pam, too. Great chapter!
Date: October 19, 2007 05:31 pm Title: Rising Action
ack! That was dawesome! I gasped when Jim examined Pam's butterfly necklace...I like to think that in the show, he gave it to her :) I really like this story...sorry that's ruining your GPA.
Author's Response: Thanks secondrink (LOVE the name). My GPA actually turned out okay, lol. And I've finally updated, so yay!
Date: October 18, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Rising Action
great chapter! I hope you didn't kill yourself writting it (don't get me wrong its good...just not dying good:) good luck with your mid term, hope you did better than you think...that has to happen sometime, right? Anyway - great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Donnelly! I finally put up chapter 4, btw. And you're right, I did better than I thought on the midterm :)