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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2023 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice!

Reviewer: meeeg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2007 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't Jim say in "the secret" that he had a crush on pam when SHE first started there, and then in this episode it seems like she was there before him... who was there first? Pam...

Author's Response: Yep, there's some discussion of that on the NBC forums. Previously, we thought Pam started after Jim, but in the latest episode, Launch Party, Jim made it clear he started after Pam. Chalk it up to continuity error I guess!

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2007 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Now that you have the first one done...you have to keep going!  Give the people what they want!



Author's Response: You're a big part of that Sweetpea! Your suggestions really added punch to my story. Thanks again!

Reviewer: jacsonian Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2007 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it! Excellent, excellent stuff. The whole thing felt so convincing - in my head I can see Pam looking in her bin then swinging her glance over to Jim's desk with a curious grin on her face.

 Is this a one off or a series? I'd love to read more!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was just going to do this one but you all are giving me so much confidence I might try another! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: andromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really wonderful. You should continue with more of the back story of JIm and Pam.

Author's Response: Thanks andromeda! I might respond to the "Meeting the Parents" challenge. That could be fun!

Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2007 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was sweet.  Very good job on your first story.  I really enjoyed it.  :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love JAM fluff. They are so cute!

Reviewer: Mr Bill Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16, 2007 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nicely done!  Excellent job of weaving the actual dialogue into your background story and so very true to Jim and Pam.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! That's exactly what I was hoping for!

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