Date: November 07, 2007 11:37 am Title: Sooner or Later
Oh no you did not just end it there!! Man. Kudos to shan21 for the awesome Dwight and Creed suggestion. Loved those interrogations. Can't wait to find out why Creed came back in the night before!
Author's Response: oh yes i DID! lol yeah he's a sketchy one. thanks for the review.
Date: November 06, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Sooner or Later
Oh my God!!! The end of this chapter makes me all kinds of happy. I can't wait to see what Jim and Pam do! And this?
DWIGHT’S SUSPECTS:
- Bears.
- Wolves.
- Jim Halpert
GENIUS.
And thank you so much for dedicating the Dwight and Creed stuff to me! It totally made my day! I'm still totally hooked on this story. Squee!
Author's Response: lol I thought you might like that ;-) Glad you're still enjoying!!!!! More to come soon, I hope.
Date: November 06, 2007 07:56 am Title: Psyche
This is a "morning after" review in that I read this chapter last night and I thought you might want to know that I spent more than a little time last night in bed thinking through my list of "suspects". This is now officially a mystery story in my mind... and how P just walked in: cause she is so mentally not there after the "confession" in the stairwell...Awesome writing. Jim will save her! Also really enjoying the MSR- that was the only thing that ever sucked me in about X-files. Good choice for a cross-over because it's such a good opporitunity for a compare&contrast between the two relationships. Very enjoyable read!
Author's Response: Yeah I'm loving making the comparison between the two couples. Also, thanks for the compliments and for officially "getting" where I was going with this last chapter and why Pam would just walk into the shelter etc. I really appreciate this review so much because of that. Keep reading and keep me posted on your thoughts!
Date: November 06, 2007 07:07 am Title: Psyche
oh my goodness! scariness!!! and Jim just found out she's in love with him!!! sadness!! ok, so obviously i'm invested in the story and cannot wait for you to update! it's really great!
Author's Response: yes to being invested!!! I'm so excited by that! Hopefully I'll have more up by tonight or tomorrow.
Date: November 05, 2007 11:06 pm Title: Psyche
So, I was clearly channeling Michael Scott after finishing this chapter because I definitely went "Oh man, I bet it's Toby." What the hell is wrong with me?? haha
Great chapter- I don't think it messed with the flow at all. It actually brought me back on topic I think. I got really caught up in the JAMnes of last chapter (because apparently even though JAM in real life are living happily ever after, fic JAM still makes my heart ache). Okay, would you like real words now?? I'm so excited for the next chapter. And for the kidnapper to not be Toby. Please don't let it be Toby.
Author's Response:
haha well clearly I can't comment on the identity of our kidnapper, but I'm so glad you enjoyed this and you don't think it ruined the flow!!!! Oh and careful channeling Michael Scott, I wouldn't want you to hurt yourself ;-) TWSS... Damn now I'm channeling him too...
Date: November 05, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Psyche
Basically I love this story. I'm not gonna lie, I've never watched the X-files but this is tempting me to give it a shot. i hope you keep those updates coming because i'm loving the story!
Author's Response: yay thank you!! And yes give the X-files a shot (especially like seasons 4-7) It's pretty entertaining stuff. I'll try to keep the updates comping.
Date: November 05, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Psyche
Unbelievable! Very well done and really creepy. But now I have to wonder who it is..... *biting nails*
Author's Response: hmmmm who indeed... ;-)
Date: November 05, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Psyche
Oh my goodness. Are you kidding me? It's true, this didn't flow like the other chapters, but this was AMAZING. I actually got chills up my spine. I am reading this in the wee hours of the morning, though. You are...wow. This was great.
Author's Response:
oh good glad you liked it. I know the flow is different...but when writing from the POV of a kidnapper I guess if it turned out the same as a chapter told from Pam's POV we'd be in trouble ;-) Keep reading and letting me know what you think!!!!
Date: November 05, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Psyche
OMG, I may die if you do not update soon. That is all.
(Or, not quite all... I'll try "using my words" now. I am loving this. Let me count the reasons: Jim knows! Now, Pam in danger! And as a bonus, Scully about to jump Mulder! You have justified the use of many, many exclamation points.)
Author's Response: lol!!! thanks for using your words. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: November 05, 2007 05:02 pm Title: Psyche
Oh my god! This is so creepy! But good! But really scary!
I hadn't logged-in in forever but this really freaked me out and I wanted to say you need to update this really soon! Save her, Jim!
Also, I am looking forward to some more hot Mulder/Scully action...
Author's Response:
oh me too. Hopefully I'll have another update by tomorrow. I'm kind of cooking now ;-)
Date: November 05, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Psyche
Creepy, definitely creepy. But that's to be expected of a crossover X-Files fic (that being the only show that's ever caused me to sleep with a light on. Creepy spiders. Scared me silly).
Also, I knew basements couldn't be trusted. Good chapter- the atmosphere really adds to the overall story.
Author's Response: You were so right about basements. And yeah I hear you on the creepy spiders. I'm so glad to hear the atmosphere works. I was nervous about this one.
Date: November 05, 2007 04:22 pm Title: Psyche
Oh, also? I'm officially scared.
Author's Response: yes!!!! I love that!! ;-) Thanks so much for the reviews. Keep me posted as things progress.
Date: November 05, 2007 04:19 pm Title: Seven Missing in Scranton, PA. Local authorities baffled.
I am like 99.9% sure who it is. In fact, I posted it on here saying "OH MY GOD IT'S..........." but then I figured that might ruin it for some people. I can't believe it's who it is. Why would Pam willingly go in there? AH.
Author's Response: lol like I said in my response to your first post... no comment. The guy was waving around a knife and stuff so...Pam didn't have THAT much of a choice. ;-) Just keep reading. All sorts of things will reveal themselves.
Date: November 05, 2007 04:15 pm Title: Psyche
Oooh, now that was creepy! I have a few theories as to who the captor is and I'm excited to see if I'm right ;)
Author's Response: lol yeah I'm trying my best to keep it mysterious. Hopefully that's working.
Date: November 05, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Sooner or Later
Wow! I was not expecting that! Great job! And good luck with your NaNovel ;)
Author's Response:
thank you. I'm glad something about this chapter surprised you!
Date: November 05, 2007 12:08 pm Title: Sooner or Later
wow, I'm loving this story, even though I've never seen X-Files...
very well written, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: oh GOOD!! I'm so glad it appeals to the straight up office fans too. Thank you for this review I really appreciate it!!!!
Date: November 05, 2007 11:30 am Title: Sooner or Later
Silly, silly Pam. You don't go into the basement alone when people are disappearing!
Excellent chapter, as usual.
Author's Response: lol thanks. And we'll blame Pam's silliness on emotional distress. That way things can get interesting ;-)
Date: October 31, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Bagel, anyone?
Holy fuck woman, are you trying to drive me to seek out X-Files fanfic?! That ironing scene was so delicious it took me a while to shake it out of my system before I could concentrate enough on the rest of the story. Wowsers.
I really like the subtle psychic woman bond that seems to have developed between Pam and Scully. Pam is very intuitive when she cares to be.
Date: October 31, 2007 10:46 am Title: Jealousy or simple discomfort.
Excellent little dip into the shallow end at the beginning. And good ol', creepy ol' Creed. *shakes head* This is so much fun!
Author's Response:
it IS fun! I'm having a blast with it, glad I can share my excitement ;-)
Date: October 31, 2007 10:37 am Title: How They're the Same
Wow. I'm not a fan of angst but that was such an immaculately pattern chapter! Love the circular logic. And really, Mulder's ass. Nice.
Author's Response: thank you so much, I'm excited that you're reading this fic!
Date: October 31, 2007 10:31 am Title: It's not aliens.
Oh my dear lord I love you so much for giving Mulder and Scully talking head interviews!! BWAH!! This is fan-fricki-tastic. Loving it. This: "Jim decided these people were weird." was priceless, especially compared to the Dwight and Michael interactions immediately following it. Mulder playing along with Michael has got to be one of the funniest things ever - and totally in character for both of them!
Author's Response: lol that was something that I thought when I first started writing this. "I HAVE to give Mulder and Scully talking heads." It was like totally an obligation. ;-) Glad you enjoyed it. And yeah "Jim decided these people were wierd" makes me chuckle every time too, cause like...really?
Date: October 29, 2007 09:35 pm Title: Jealousy or simple discomfort.
I am so in love with this fic! Seriously, you have them all down and I think the parallels you've drawn are brilliant. Great work.
Author's Response: thank you! (ps: two days till NaNo!)
Date: October 29, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Bagel, anyone?
Hi, have we met? I'm your new biggest fan.
Okay, where to start? First, the entire scene with Mulder and Scully and the touching of the back! You write the most amazing UST. I mean, I've been on gossamer a lot lately checking out some old-school X-files fic and this tops all of it.
The kiss. I just love how their mouths were so close for so long. Again, just wow. And this line--"her voice cracked with the fractures of sexual tension." LOVE that phrasing.
Now, Pam thinking what the hell about Jim's sweater? Best callback to casual Friday ever.
And finally, the talking heads were brilliant once again. Angela with Sprinkles! Meredith's "what kind of question is that?" Priceless.
What did you mean by "hopefully this isn't too soon for this." Your updates can't come soon enough!
And side note-- I think both Creed and Dwight would have very interesting things to say about any of Mulder's more "out there" theories.
Author's Response:
lol, hi biggest fan! Nice to meet you ;-) Glad you love the crossover business as much as I do, I'm having SUCH a good time writing this!!! (gossamer? have you read Worth Breaking? THAT is some amazing XFiles fic, right there.) UST is my life and I can't get enough of writing it, hence both pairings being set in circumstances that just scream tension.
By hopefully not too soon I just meant that I'm a little worried that things are moving along a little too fast, maybe? I'm just writing what comes out, so hopefully the pacing is ok. Your review makes me think it can't be too bad!
And side note-- I am definitely writing Creed and Dwight and Mulder conversation into this story ASAP because I totally agree with you ;-)
Date: October 29, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Bagel, anyone?
Oooh, pent up Scully, Jim's black sweater and quick updates. I love it. In a perfect world Pam would come back from lunch wearing her pretty blue Casino Night dress.
I'm also thinking the Mulder's TH could really end every episodes of the X-Files.
Author's Response:
Thank you!!! I know, who doesn't love that Mulder/Scully tension? I mean honestly. And I thought I'd try to get that to seep into Pam and Jim a little bit with the throw back. Glad you liked it ;-)
And I agree, basically the TH is Mulder's thoughts on pretty much everything lol.
Date: October 29, 2007 03:50 pm Title: Jealousy or simple discomfort.
I've never watched X-Files. I was a chicken when I was a kid. it freaked me out. that's not important. What is important is that I love this. I love how you write the characters, I love their voices and their conversation and the story's just really interesting. I'm frustrated that Jim is being ridiculous, but then I remind myself that in this time frame that's sensible. And what would Jam be without a little angst? just bffs. anyways, I will be anxiously awaiting updates. sorry my review's so long but i've been storing it up over 4 chapters. :)
Author's Response:
I LOVE that your review is long!! Also, I love that you're reading this even though you've never seen the X Files and that you're still enjoying it! I've been a fan for like eight years or something, so it's hard for me to step outside of myself and see whether the fic is readable to someone who's never seen the show. I'm so glad it is. Also sorry about the angst ;-) Warning? It'll probably get worse before it gets better. But once it's better it's gonna be REALLY good. (it's a promise) Thank you again for the review!!!!