Date: January 01, 2010 03:31 pm Title: Snowballs
oh my god, that was adorable, and the previous chapter with roy was just heartbreaking! please continue! why did you stop???
Date: December 28, 2009 11:12 pm Title: The emptiness I feel...
OWW I ALMOST CRY WITH THE THINGS PAM SAID..=,( THIS STORY IS PERFECT FOR THIS TIME OF THE YEAY =) ...AND KAREN CHEATIN ON JIM!! WOW
10 [Report This]Date: December 02, 2007 04:01 pm Title: Snowballs
finally another chapter was added, i've been going crazy waiting! (now i'll be going crazy waiting for the next one!) :] awesome story :]
Author's Response: hahaa, did you know that you are amazing? thank you so much for your sweet review!
Date: December 01, 2007 06:35 pm Title: Snowballs
Okay "pleasee review! constructive critisism is welcome!" You typed that really fast, didn't you. I love how this chapter turned out. Like the uncertainty and the absence of rancor. If you want me to look at the next bit, just let me know.
Author's Response: yes i ded! hahaa, and tank you. i will def. be asking you to review my next chapter because you are amazing at those sort of things [:
Date: December 01, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Snowballs
I really enjoyed this chapter it was adorable!
Don't leave us for so long again!
Author's Response: hahaa, i wont, i promise [: thamks for your kind words!
Date: December 01, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Snowballs
I loved this chapter. I was so happy when i came here and saw that you had posted another part to this story.
I loved the whole snowball fight (definitely something Pam and Jim would do).
How many more to go?
Author's Response:
maybbe... 1 or 2, but i will see how it goes [:
i tired to email you so you could help me beta this one, but i lost your email. would you mind sending it to me again?
i'm glad you enjoyed this one too! you are simply amazingg!
Date: December 01, 2007 01:53 pm Title: You will be visited by 3 ghosts
Thank you for coming back. I have been missing this one. I loved the snowball fight!
Author's Response: thank you! i had fun writing it, and i'm thrilled yyou enjoyed it [:
10 [Report This]Date: November 14, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Change
I'm not sure how much longer I can wait for the next chapter. Hurry please! This story is AMAZING!!!!! :] (Well, except for Pam dying. Not too happy about that, but you know what I mean.)
Date: November 03, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Change
It looks as if you are having some problems whith the format in your lastest chapter. It's all jumbled together, and it's kinda hard to read. I just thought you should know.
I've really enjoyed what I've read so far.
Author's Response: ahh i thought i fixed that! i don't understand why it's doing that...dangg. i will try and get it back to normal soon! thank you for letting me know!
Date: November 03, 2007 11:50 am Title: Change
poor pam! I'm loving the angst though! I only wish that Jim could've reached in and saved her hehe
great work!! can't wait for more
Author's Response: i wish he could have too! hahaa! thank you for your generous support, it makes me SMILEEE!
10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 09:25 am Title: Change
Great chapter. I'm really impressed with all the other stuff that was added.
Reading it again it made me even sadder. I can't wait for chapter 5
Author's Response: ahh hthank you! and i can't thank you enough for your help! it means a lottt and i will be emailing you again soon!
Date: November 03, 2007 08:49 am Title: You will be visited by 3 ghosts
Wow!! So intense! Excellent!
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: November 03, 2007 08:32 am Title: Change
absolutely amazing. but PLEASE finish it! i always read completed ones and this may be one of the first not in a long time...please finish!! :]
Author's Response: i haven't had time to start writing it, but i'mg oing to try to today! thank you so much for your amazing encouragment!
Date: November 01, 2007 09:38 pm Title: The emptiness I feel...
I love this story!
I think it is the combination of The Christmas Carol and The Office two of my favorite things!
thank you!
Author's Response: thank you Jamlover101! I love reading your reviews. you're simlply AMAZING!
Date: November 01, 2007 08:16 pm Title: You will be visited by 3 ghosts
Please update dark or not!
Author's Response: hahaa (: it will be up sometime tomorrow! thank you SO MUCH! my beta is helping me with some last minute changes, but before i change them i'm going to bed. i'm about to fall asleep right here on my keyboard (: thank you for you kind words!
Date: November 01, 2007 07:33 pm Title: You will be visited by 3 ghosts
I think that I have lost my mind. I know that I read the 3rd chapter today and now it is not here. Waaah. I reallly like this story and need the next chapter. Seriously... this is a good story.
Author's Response: crap it's not? let me fix that right away!!!
thanks for telling me that you enjoy it so much though. it made me smileee (x
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 04:49 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
very interesting idea, i love it! more more more :)
Author's Response:
thank you thank you thank you (x hahaa!
i have written the next chapter and i'm going to wait until tomorrow to put it up (:
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 06:04 am Title: Back to Yesterday
This is freakin' awesome! Keep it up!
Author's Response: that made me smile! thank you so much (:
Date: October 30, 2007 08:25 pm Title: You will be visited by 3 ghosts
I can't wait to see shat each ghost reveals to Jim. Please hurry back.
Author's Response:
i have some good things up my sleeve for the upcoming chapters (:
thank you for your kind feeback !
Date: October 30, 2007 08:03 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
"At that moment, he wanted nothing more then to be with the curly haired receptionst that used to be his best friend."
how cute
great story!
Author's Response: thank you so much ! it meas a lot (: the next chapter may be up sometime todayy
Date: October 30, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
I was so excited to see this chapter up. I can't wait to see the Present stuff. I don't remember the book exactly, but doesn't the ghost show what other people are doing? I to read about what Jim sees when he visits 'present' Pam.
Keep the christmas stuff coming.
Author's Response:
yess it does (:
in the book, Present takes scrooge to all of the people that are spending christmas happily, like the cratchit familiy or his cousin fred. but scrooge doesn't find happiness in it so the ghost shows him some sad stuff.
thank you so much for everythign you have helped me with and said (: it has really helped me feel more confident about my fanfic.
8 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
I think this chapter turned out great! It did everything it should have - the Ghost of Christmas Past showed Jim enough that he finally admitted that he still had feelings for her.
However, I think you meant to say Ghost of Christmas PAST here "The Spirit of Christmas Present was suddenly gone"
PS Hope you feel better soon!!
Author's Response:
OOPS! haha, i need to go back and fix that right now (:
thank you for those kind words! it is really nice to know that you are supporting the way i am taking this.
I'm glad you enjoy it!
Date: October 30, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Back to Yesterday
Great chapter, once again! Just FYI, i think you're typing "know" instead of "now"
Author's Response:
haha, i just noticed that too and i'm preparing to fix somethings.
i always think i have it edited, but as soon as i post it and read it again i see somethings that can be added and changed.
i just wrote some new paragraphs in the end if you would like to take a look at it (x
thank you so much for your reviews (:
Date: October 29, 2007 06:08 pm Title: You will be visited by 3 ghosts
darryl's part was hilarious!
please contnue I can't wait to see where you go with this
Author's Response:
thankk you !
i didn't know how that would turn out. i'm glad you thought that was amusing (:
thanks for the kind feedback though! i really can't thank you enoughh!
7 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 04:50 pm Title: You will be visited by 3 ghosts
Poor Pam! My grief bone took a little hit when not only wasn't she invited to the Christmas party but she could overhear Jim and Karen talking about it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I felt bad for her during the whole third season
but now that the fourth season has been going so well, it makes me feel betterrr (x
i just finished writing it and i will post it soon !
thank you so much for the feedbackk !