Reviews For Beautiful
Reviewer: 09imagine09 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29, 2008 05:02 am Title: She is beautiful
Date: February 29, 2008 05:02 am Title: She is beautiful
I liked this! It's very sweet. Great oneshot!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 
7 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2007 07:45 pm Title: She is beautiful
7 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 07:45 pm Title: She is beautiful
I like the list format but it reads kind of stilted. I know next to nothing about writing but maybe there is some way to soften it up? Anyhow, the concept is great and I like how you have Jim thinking Pam is beautiful even when she is rejecting him.
Author's Response:
oddly enough I know very little too
but I don't know maybe it looks better now?
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2007 11:52 am Title: She is beautiful
Date: November 05, 2007 11:52 am Title: She is beautiful
she is always beautiful. really sweet.
Author's Response: thank you so much!