8 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2007 08:00 pm Title: I Won't Say I'm In Love
"Okay, universe, you win. I'm in love."
I loved how Pam kept trying to explain away her feelings for him until the end when she finally admitted that she was in love with him. I didn't like her calling Jim "nerdy and geeky" but I guess I can forgive her/you for that since she/you also mentioned he had a penis, which of course I knew, but to see it in writing, sigh....
8 [Report This]Date: December 28, 2007 07:46 pm Title: All These Things
"A smile that entangled him and made him want to hold on to the moment forever because he could see the happiness that started so deep inside her and radiated so far past her."
This was beautiful. Great job matching the lyrics with your story - so well done.
Date: December 28, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Don't Give Up
Aww this gave me shivers. I love how Jim woudn't give up and how he tried his hardest to win Pam back. I also love the ending with the Addie.
Date: November 10, 2007 01:58 pm Title: All These Things
so great. excellent description and thoughtfulness.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
8 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 06:02 pm Title: All These Things
That had so much heart. Really sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate that! I try and write my stories so they have some depth to them, so I'm really glad that you picked up on it and thought it did. Next chapter tomorrow!
8 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 04:27 pm Title: All These Things
for some reason i couldn't get the mp3 to stream on my computer..but even without the music and lyrics, i could feel the melody. very touching take on jim's perception of pam :)
Author's Response:
Did you try downloading it? I'm not sure you can actually stream it with the link I gave? If you don't mind downloading it, it's a great song. One of my favorites. And it's got a cute melody! I'm glad you feel that my writing helped you imagine the melody--that's such a great thing to hear and is really a compliment! Thanks for reading!
Date: November 09, 2007 03:56 pm Title: All These Things
<i>The risk was always worth it with Pam.</i>
I loved this line.
I loved the entire story. The song choice was perfect- and now I'm a little bit a lot obsessed with it!
Can't wait for the next chapters!
Author's Response:
I like that line too, not to float my own boat... Because for a while in the series, it's not true. And then all of a sudden, it is.
Are you a Stephen Speaks fan? This song made me one! There will probably be more of him coming up later!! I'll post a new chapter tomorrow :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 03:52 pm Title: All These Things
This was just beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your review!