1 [Report This]Date: December 13, 2020 12:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Man, you just had a really good handle on these characters and their inner monologues. This feels exactly like what would have been running through their minds during E-mail Surveillance – Jim’s mind-racing, off-kilter and debating if he should and wondering if she wants him to, and Pam, giddy as hell and not coming within a mile of the reason why.
8 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
"He has to remind himself once more that every little moment that turns his world upside down means nothing at all. Wishful thinking is just that." I loved this episode and loved your take on it. Very nicely done!
Date: November 17, 2007 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love reading your stories that look back on my favorite moments from various episodes. Hope there are many more to come.
Date: November 17, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really liked this. I wasn't sure if you were veering off in to AU or not. This would fill in the blanks nicely in the email surveillance episode. Great job!
Date: November 17, 2007 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
“My mother is a very skilled woman,” made me laugher harder than it probably should. This made me happy :)
Little thing, though: 'frat girls'--did you mean sorority girls or frat guys' girls?
Author's Response: Yikes! Thank you for pointing that out, I'll correct it stat. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 17, 2007 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really sweet, and I liked how it was so understated. Just a quiet little moment between the two of them. Very in character. Well done!
Date: November 17, 2007 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww, Jim! This is so true: He has to remind himself once more that every little moment that turns his world upside down means nothing at all. Nothing like a little S2 angst to start the day.
Date: November 17, 2007 05:30 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great story. I love "E-mail Surveillance" fics with all that awkward bedroom intimacy. So different from the workplace. These lines were great:
As he turns out the light and shuts his bedroom door, he takes a second to wonder how many times he’ll replay that particular scene in his head, imagine all sorts of different endings, and whether he can count that high.
Nice job!