Date: December 04, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Into the Rocks...
OMG! Although I think them meeting this way is so much better than meeting over a dinner table. Please update sooooon!! I'm on the edge of my seat - again!
Date: December 04, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Into the Rocks...
Wow! I wasn't expecting that! I LOVE that I know this neighborhood and I'm a little creeped out how Pam found her way here. How I love that you used "agita" and I'm really hoping Molly's a hometown girl. Thank you so much for the longer chapter. I am dying to know what happened with them 8 years ago, but you can take your sweet time getting to it, because the story is so good and your writing of it is so beautiful. More!
Date: December 04, 2007 06:53 pm Title: Into the Rocks...
Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: December 04, 2007 06:51 pm Title: That will send us crashing...
I was going to go crazy with the short chapter, but you added a longer one after this, thank God. This story is killing me, Shassafrass. Honestly, this conversation is so perfect...they've been apart for 8 years, but it's like they saw each other yesterday. I can't take Jim's panic and desperation. This is so, so good.
Date: December 04, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Into the Rocks...
OOooo cliffhanger. Great writing! My favorite part:
He's just hung there, a blinking fixture, a silent and defunct satellite, a lesser moon orbiting a minor planet, its gravity just barely strong enough to affect her inner tide.
10 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2007 03:37 pm Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
My heart is just in my throat reading this...I can't take it any more..Yes...yes I can..I need it!!
Date: December 04, 2007 03:19 pm Title: Into the Rocks...
ahh!!!!! if you want to add more chapters tonight, that would be great because i'm in love with this story and every time you update i get happy!
Date: December 04, 2007 11:22 am Title: Into the Rocks...
OOH! Nice.
Date: December 04, 2007 09:44 am Title: Into the Rocks...
HOLY SHIT!!!!! I am dying here! Wow.
Date: December 04, 2007 09:40 am Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
Oh my god!!! I knew it! I'm so excited they've finally met. This story is getting SO good! Please update soon :)
Date: December 04, 2007 09:40 am Title: Into the Rocks...
::gasps:: :o you need to finish this right now!! guh you're going to kill me with the suspense!
Date: December 04, 2007 09:33 am Title: Into the Rocks...
OH MY GOSH!! seriously? i love this story so much. this is intense and... wow. I can not WAIT to see how she deals with it. woah. i bet it's gonna be good.
10 [Report This]Date: December 04, 2007 07:52 am Title: That will send us crashing...
OMG....Jim just do it!!!!
Date: December 04, 2007 07:43 am Title: That will send us crashing...
oh good god, the angst! Just the thought of going through that.. wow.
Great job! =)
Date: December 04, 2007 05:38 am Title: That will send us crashing...
"Oh...Well, I have that dream all the time." She laughs uneasily. Great line. Thanks for the fine update, Shass.
Date: December 03, 2007 09:29 pm Title: That will send us crashing...
This is so heartbreakingly vivid - I could just feel Jim's pain and confusion. This can't end well. Please update soon!
Date: December 03, 2007 08:45 pm Title: That will send us crashing...
ommmmmmmmmmmmmg, soo good. i was so excited to see you updated and now i need more! pleasepleasepleasaeplease update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2007 07:52 am Title: ...of a Beautiful Friendship...
Wow, I'm hooked on this story! I can't wait for more!
Date: November 27, 2007 05:14 pm Title: ...of a Beautiful Friendship...
Thank you so much for updating! I couldn't stop thinking about this story. I like how you're writing Molly so far - and I know it's juvenile, but I just love the phrase "rub one out." And did you really have her use the word "chippie?" So awesome. If she really does invite them to dinner...well, I just can't wait for that chapter.
Date: November 27, 2007 02:41 pm Title: ...of a Beautiful Friendship...
I was so excited to see the new chapter! Awesomely done!
"She’s a remarkably stubborn woman and has very clear sentencing guidelines. He knew exactly which transgressions earned what penalties, and he’d become pretty good at avoiding doing anything that incurred her cold wrath."
Wow. Molly's kind of a bitch.
8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 02:33 pm Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
Wow. This angst is pulling me in. I have to say, I love the whole Jim and Pam never got their shit together and got together thing. But the fact that his wife is more than aware of Pam, and the way Jim feels about her is so ... wrong and so right at the same time. I am on the edge of my seat for the completion of this one, not that i want it to end. Keep updating!
Date: November 27, 2007 02:26 pm Title: Of all the streets, in all the cities...
i love the angst and the drama! i was squeamish when Molly called Jim out. please update asap!
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 12:18 pm Title: ...of a Beautiful Friendship...
Oh.My.God. I did not expect this to go down this road and I love that it did. Molly inviting them over to dinner and knowing what Jim was doing in bed? Perfect! I was so excited to see this title pop up again. So good!
Date: November 27, 2007 12:09 pm Title: ...of a Beautiful Friendship...
Holy Moses! You're good with the surprises, Shass. Did not expect that. I hope you're inspired to update again soon. I'm on the edge of my seat!
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 11:45 am Title: ...The Beginning...
Shass... I LOVE your stuff. Wow. Oh.. by "stuff" I meant your writing.... ; )