Date: December 29, 2016 04:45 am Title: Authors Note
Pam is a self centered bitch! (See Kramer vs Kramer). No way should Jim take her back, but he is such a wimp, who knows.
She'll do it again. "once a whore..." Jim you can't trust her
10 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2007 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 8: The decision
Ahhhh the 16th!? Oh boy, this will be difficult. I'm excited for what lies ahead. =)
Date: December 03, 2007 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 8: The decision
AWWW! screw finals! i want this story!
Author's Response: haha believe me I would much rather be working on this story than on King Henry the IV, but I have to pass stupid college lol.
10 [Report This]Date: November 28, 2007 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 7: Time to talk
Hahaha Roy and Kelly! Wow, did not see that one coming! And Jim with Mattie, thats precious.
Ahhh I really wanna see what they have to say to each other!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 6: Thoughts on forgiveness
aw poor Jimmy, just like his daddy.
MORE! lol
Date: November 26, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Thoughts on forgiveness
The kids album is adorable... Hehe. And I love this story, so update soon.
Date: November 26, 2007 07:01 am Title: Prologue
I will admit that I couldn't read this at first due to the fact that I can't believe Pam would ever leave her kids. After finally giving it a try I am very happy I did. I am looking forward to what lies ahead and hoping for a happy ending.
Date: November 25, 2007 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 5: Uncomfortable Phone Conversations
I like how this story is going. Even though Pam left Jim he still loves her after all these years thats so sweet. I also like how he is slowly forgiving her.
The pictures are adorable, they look so much like them, especially Jimmy and Mattie.
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2007 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 5: Uncomfortable Phone Conversations
Aw, I hope Jim regains her trust soon. Excellent idea for the kids album thing! That helps a lot! Thats how I pictured the kids! Especially Mattie, she looks alot like Jim and Pam.
Date: November 24, 2007 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 5: Uncomfortable Phone Conversations
Wow, two updates in one day! Thanks! I really liked this chapter. I continue to enjoy the shifting perspectives, and think this most definitely adds to the storyline. I must say that I really enjoy conflicted Jim. He is justified to make Pam suffer a bit for all the suffering he has gone through, but it was also very sweet that he is slowly letting his guard come down. He did the right thing to let Janie stay with Pam.
Awwww, love the whole special assistant special pancakes bit. Loved the visual of the snuggling mom and little girl.
The pictures were very cute. I love little Jimmy's hair, how it flips up over his ears. And Mattie, soo sweet. Thanks for the visuals. :)
I wonder who this 'unexpected someone' will be?
Looking forward to the next update!
10 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 4: Mothers and Daughters
Uh oh! Jim and Pam, round 2! Aw.. Janie.
I loveeee the names! 'Ryan Scott' sheer brilliance.
More!!!
Date: November 24, 2007 08:24 am Title: Chapter 4: Mothers and Daughters
I really like that you are showing the reunion from differing perspectives. Hearing Janie's conflicting reactions and feelings to the situation is very interesting, and shows that while not everything is perfect, there is still a lot of love there. I hope we get to explore this from more of the other kids perspectives, too.
I also think that Michael named one of his kids "Ryan" is absolutely hysterical. And the poor Schrute kids being saddled with those names, and so many of them too! What happened to Angela's dream of a pair of small well-behaved boys? ;) Looks like Dwight won out there.
Good work, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: haha, yes I thought it would just be so like Michael to name his child after his obsession. And as for all the children Dwight and Angela have. I just invision Dwight incisting on a lot of children so he would have plenty of extra hands on the Beet farm. And Angela being the type of woman she is seems like she would submit to her husbnds wishes.
Date: November 24, 2007 08:04 am Title: Chapter 4: Mothers and Daughters
I think the best part of this chapter was finding out that Michael's baby's name is Ryan! Lol.
Date: November 21, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sorry
Yay for the update! Yes, Pam needs ot face the fact that she hurt a lot of people when she left. I can't even begin to think about how her older children feel about all of this. Jim had every right to react the way he did; sadness, anger, shock. He must feel completely dumbfounded knowing what she left over, and that he has a little baby girl he never even knew about. Wow. I hope that he at least wants to meet Mattie and know about her (very soon!), despite his anger at Pam he should still want to see her.
Have a Happy Thanksgiving! I'll be looking forward to a Black Friday update, (after I come home from shopping @ 4 in the morning, lol).
Date: November 21, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sorry
Ooh the angsty Jim! Haha, I love it so far.
I need more!!!
Date: November 21, 2007 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Sorry
you run such a high price!
and I love this story!
please continue on friday...or else?
haha
Date: November 21, 2007 01:21 pm Title: Prologue
Very interesting story!!
I registered just so I could review it. I wanna see where this goes! Cute children names too.. all very fitting for Jim and Pam.
Date: November 21, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 2: Face to Face
Yay for Pam coming home. I think its so funny that Angela would threaten Jim to not let his daughter corrupt their daughter. So like her! Please don't leave them hanging like this on Thanksgiving! I want a reunion now, darnit! :) Looking forward to the update.
Date: November 21, 2007 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1: The Letter
I'm relieved that Pam is keeping in touch with the children. How awful that must feel to not see your babies for almost three years. It's hard for me to believe that Pam's mom didn't knock some sense into her, seriously.
Date: November 21, 2007 11:15 am Title: Prologue
I haven't reviewed the chapters, so I will do each one now (in an effort to get that fourth chapter posted, lol). This first chapter absolutely broke my heart. How in the world did Pam think that abandoning everyone would make things better? I feel so bad for all of the little children and Jim. Please make it better for them. :(
Author's Response: I can't see Pam leaving either however, when fear is involved people will do some strange things. So I palyed on Pam's fears, and having her not come back because she had realized what a huge mistake she'd made.
Date: November 21, 2007 10:21 am Title: Prologue
I keep thinking "Pam would never leave" but it is an interesting story.
Date: November 21, 2007 07:55 am Title: Prologue
interesting premise.
7 [Report This]Date: November 21, 2007 04:57 am Title: Chapter 2: Face to Face
An intriguing story. With 4 kids already, I'm not sure why a 5th was such a big deal that Pam had to leave but I can't wait to see what happens next.
10 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: Face to Face
OMG! what a cliffhanger! I was really get into it and you just ended it! [i]TWSS[/i]
Author's Response: lol, well if I get some more reviews by tomorrow afternoon then I promise to add another chapter. And I promise it will be wirth dealing with my evil cliff hanger.
Date: November 19, 2007 11:17 pm Title: Prologue
this is so sad!
i can't wait to see where you go with this.