Date: September 27, 2017 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweetly, achingly, perfectly beautiful. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: December 26, 2009 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, that was beautiful! I love the little elements, how Jim makes Pam repeat herself 'not in third person' - I loved that. The handkerchief at the wedding was lovely, too. Beautifully done!
Date: November 28, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh I LOVE that you revisited this moment! I always thought about how cool it would have been for Jim to have seen THAT moment and what might've happened. This was great.
Author's Response: Thanks LoveFool, I really appreciate the review and that you enjoyed me revisiting a moment from season three. Thanks for your encouraging words!
Date: November 25, 2007 11:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Very nice. I agree that there were many moments in Season 3 which could have (and should have) gone a different way. I love what you have happen with the handkerchief. Sweet.
Author's Response: My grandma actually carried them in her waistband and my dad still carries them. ;) So, it was a heartfelt connection for me...I'm glad that it seemed to translate to this story. Thanks so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2007 07:40 am Title: Chapter 1
don't worry about "revisiting" a story that's been done before. When it's revisited well, it's better than second drink! I really enjoyed this!! Keep writing. :)
Author's Response: WOW, time4moxie....thank you so much for an encouraging review. I have no idea if I have even one more story in me, but I really appreciate the encouragement nonetheless. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you again!
8 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2007 07:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome. Just perfect. Fluffy angst/angsty fluff is the best!
I don't think I could ever get enough of the alternate possibilities for the Back from Vacation storyline.
Really, great job on this.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad to know that there are others like myself who almost always want Jim to walk through those doors. *sigh* I appreciate your kind words!
Date: November 25, 2007 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2
This was incredible! It was fluffy and angsty and perfect. If only those two would have gotten it together sooner we might have ended our last ep with a wedding.
This was my favourite part:
He was staring straight at her. His eyes....she thought that she had seen just about every look of his expressive face, every nuance and shading that always gave away exactly what he was thinking. But this, she had never seen. Not even when he was standing in a dark parking lot in an even darker sweater, not after he had kissed her beside his desk, not even as he let go of her hands and walked away.
I really hope that you write more fanfics. You have a great writing style. You could do a series of "near misses" alternate universes. I would read every single one!
Author's Response: Beeswax, thank you so much! I have no idea if I have even one more story in me, to be honest! But I SO appreciate that you would read if I do. Thanks again for your supportive words.
Date: November 25, 2007 05:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I so wanted Jim to be the one who found Pam crying, instead of Dwight. I really liked this, Ra!! The ending made me tear up...the whole handkerchief scenario was awesome. Thanks for the read! Now can you work your magic with Casino Night?
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. Wow, Casino Night, the granddaddy of all endings....not sure I have any magic there. ;) Thanks for the review!
8 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute story! I wasn't expecting it to switch to first person, and I thought it was pretty neat that you did that. Especially after Jim called Pam out on talking to him in the third person.
And I officially think I'm an idiot, but I was a little confused on the ending until I came here and read EH's review. For some reason, I thought you had written Pam as the bride, so I was a tad lost for a second. But now I get it, and I like it very much.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out, you're not an idiot! I wondered about that too...and have cleared up the wording a little bit.rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing.
7 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOVE IT.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you did! It was fun to write, for sure. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 24, 2007 03:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, RA, what a nice take on the BfV storyline. Of course it wouldn't happen because the season had to last until May, but I'm sure we all did wish at the time that Jim had found her crying instead of Dwight. But now Pam and Dwight have an "understanding" of sorts too, that continues to this day.
And I got teary-eyed at the end when I realized it was their daughter's wedding...awww. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the kind words. Yes, the good thing about the way BFV actually ended was Dwight being so protective...in his Dwight way. It was fun, though, to explore another option. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww....how adorable! Loved every minute of it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review, and for reading!
7 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
great job, I loved this! and I still hate that Jim didn't get to see her cry that day. Bo'well!
Author's Response: Yes, the brilliant Office writers had a plan for season three, which awesome. :) Still, it's fun to try out some different scenarios.rnThanks for reading and reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2007 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this, please continue it soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! It's my first fic, maybe my last...I'm nervous. Gah! But it was fun. :)