Reviews For desperation's on the phone
Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2007 11:42 am Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
Date: November 26, 2007 11:42 am Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
Ouch. That hurts my grief bone. But it's very, very good.
Reviewer: CallieJames Signed 
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Date: November 26, 2007 09:29 am Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
8 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 09:29 am Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
I love it. I love the angst and yet the hope in Jim's silences and in his words. I love Jim trying to picture Pam on the other end, effectively torturing himself even more. I LOVE IT.
Reviewer: Keds Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2007 09:01 pm Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
Date: November 25, 2007 09:01 pm Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
I must be a glutton for punishment, because I love "Merger" angst. Thanks, this was great.
Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2007 07:21 pm Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
Date: November 25, 2007 07:21 pm Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
So happy to see something new from you. Love Jim's thoughts throughout and the silences and Pam's last statement before she hangs up. Great voices and a wonderful piece of angst. Thanks for this:)
Reviewer: Abigail Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2007 06:19 pm Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
9 [Report This]Date: November 25, 2007 06:19 pm Title: there's a sign that says 'you're finally here,' and, 'welcome home'
This is good! I hope there will be a chapter 2!