8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dwight's section was just perfect. Such awesome details and so darn funny! This was my favorite part, by far:
"Mose sat in the back, playing with a pack of matches and whistling the same tune he'd whistled since his parents had died in that horrific carnival accident three years before, leaving their son orphaned and unable (unwilling?) to communicate except through snatches of calliope songs and interpretative mime."
Amazing job!
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Actually, it was written at MY request, BUT THIS STORY IS SO GOOD I DON'T EVEN CARE!!! :D
Date: November 26, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think I read this on LJ when you first posted this wonderful piece, and I don't know why, but I can't remember reading Michael's! But oh my god, I laughed out loud at his, because it's so MICHAEL and oh, Jeff.
"I think her kids really liked candy." It's so Michael and it's so Jim and Pam and Angela and Dwight. You, lady, you of the Pamanifesto (Pamifesto?) should singlehandedly write us the remaining episodes of The Office this season. You have such a knack for character! And now I'm done. I'm just making up for all the feedback I haven't left you before. :D
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm out of adjectives. Fantastic details, great insights into what resonates with each character about their first time.