Date: December 02, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
I LOVED THIS!! Great take on how everything unfolded from their private perspective...can't wait to read more!!
Date: December 01, 2007 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
Aww cute!!!!! I love this story
Author's Response:
I was going for cute, hoping to cut things off just this side of precious. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: December 01, 2007 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
Very nice! There's one little typo here: "he had blown in big time", and naturally Ben Franklin's name wasn't Skip, it was... Gordon (all right, I had to look it up, but I knew he said it! He looks more like a Gordon than a Skip or a Ben, really.)
It's nice to see all of this. It's like seeing more of the episode that we didn't get to see, and adding in some Jim and Pam stuff before and after work!
I love how Kevin was just a diversion, and the little snippets of the other characters besides Jim and Pam. This is just a lot of fun - thanks for writing it!
Author's Response: Hey. Thanks for the corrections. I have to admit I still have trouble watching Season 3 with the whole Jim and Pam separation thing. To me, Ben Franklin was kind of a low point. But I really appreciate you letting me know and I have made the changes you pointed out. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: December 01, 2007 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
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this is just adorable ! why can't there be guys like Jim out there in the world ?! (:
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this bit. Sorry you can't find your Jim. If it's any consolation, I'm still looking for a girl like Pam.
Date: November 30, 2007 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
lmfao, very funny ending. LOVE it! Please continue soon.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. The second chapter is a little longer, but I should have it up soon. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: November 30, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
this is so funny
I never noticed the Roy Anderson Pam Anderson connection
Author's Response: You have to wonder about that. With all the names they could have given to Pam's ex, why Anderson? I had to come up with some reason why Michael never made mention if what should have been an obvious joke for him (and he's all about the obvious, as Fat Halpert can attest to. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: November 30, 2007 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
This is amaaaazing!!! No seriously I love it. It's so cute, and really ingenious, with the Pam Anderson thing!!! I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the really nice review. I'll try to have the next bit up soon
Date: November 30, 2007 10:35 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
I always love away from the cameras stories and this is a great beginning! Fabulous explanation for Pam's sudden porn -downloading-at-work thing ;) Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response: I like trying to work within canon as much as possible, so the behind the scenes things are kind of fun. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and I appreciate you taking the time to review this.
10 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2007 09:45 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Bwahahahahahahaha.....Love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: November 30, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
"Very nice."[/Borat] Seriously, I liked this alot. I gotta tell you, I loved how you incorporated the sex tape part of the premiere so much I felt I had to go back and watch the beginning of Fun Run because now as far as I am concerned, that set up in canon :) Good job. *Off to watch Fun Run!
Author's Response: I thought that some of the folks who watch the Office probably enjoyed Borat. I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2007 06:22 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
I love this, it is so cute, that is just such a funny idea for the motivation behind Pam's little p()rn surfing habit!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the beginning. Hope I can keep if funny. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 30, 2007 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
I really like this idea. Especially since I am going through Office withdrawals. Very cute how Pam was trying to do something nice and now it kinda backfired! More please.
Author's Response:
I know what you mean about going through withdrawal. And to make matters worse, I loaned my season 1 and 2 DVDs to a friend. Does that make the Office tv heroin? I'm glad you liked the idea. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 30, 2007 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Great - this is a superb reason for the sex tape scene in Fun Run (which never made much sense to me - Pam doesn't seem the type...although it is always the quiet ones.)
Author's Response: I don't know, sometimes it's the noisy ones, too. Thanks so much for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2007 05:06 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Haha! love the ending. And I totally never realized the Pamela Anderson thing until Pam said it in Fun Run!
It was a bit confusing, toward the end though, when you said Jim had "taken one step back." It makes it seem like he's moving away from her, not toward her. Might want to change your diction for that. :)
Good story! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out where things went a bit off. I've tried to edit that section. I really appreciate the feedback!
Date: November 30, 2007 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Ha! It all happened so fast... ;)
I like the description of how things have changed over the summer. All we saw on the show was that Jim was back. It's nice to see there was a progression, and it makes sense.
I look forward to Fun Run.
Author's Response:
I hope to show the progression through the first few episodes, particularly through Money. Thanks for reviewing
Date: November 30, 2007 04:17 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Ha! This is my favorite theory so far to explain the whole Pam-buys-a-sex-tape-at-work plot point, because that always seemed pretty odd to me.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. This was the best reason I could come up with as to why Pam was buying porn. Will add the next bit soon.