Date: September 09, 2008 07:02 am Title: Money
This was a very believable depiction of how their relationship healed, I thought you captured Jim and Pam perfectly, and the inclusion of the episodes was seamless.
Very enjoyable read!
10 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2008 07:28 pm Title: Money
LOVED IT.
(Perfect bedtime story for me, haha)
Please change your mind and do like 38 more chapters. Loves it. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I should have started each chapter with "one upon a time..."
9 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2008 07:13 am Title: Money
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. I think that you really captured the mood of the episode. Nicely done.
Author's Response: It was a hard chapter to write for some reason. Thanks so much for reviewing
9 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2008 10:29 pm Title: Money
I really enjoyed all six chapters. I liked how you followed the episodes, so the events were familiar, but you added in extra bits. Nice story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2008 09:17 pm Title: Launch Party Part 2
Jim's book was the most perfect present! I love how Jim's feelings finally dawned on Pam as she worked her way back through the book. And the delivery guy shouting "Dunder Mifflin Sucks" was priceless!
Date: February 04, 2008 10:39 am Title: Launch Party Part 2
aww...hope that we can get more episodes to write about soon!!
Author's Response: I certainly agree with your hope. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 03, 2008 11:24 pm Title: Launch Party Part 2
Ack, I can't believe Roy did that to Pam in front of the pizza boy! Poor Pam! That's terrible. But once again, super sweet Jim -- I love how he put all that together. =)
Author's Response: I know it might have been something of a stretch, but I know guys who do things like that do their girlfriends and I wanted a counterpoint to how Jim's treating her. Besides, I was curious as to why Pam didn't interact with Michael or the delivery dude during the episode. Thanks for reviewing!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 03, 2008 08:06 pm Title: Launch Party Part 2
Love this! As usual, another great chapter, filling in the blanks for the great stuff we already saw. I can't wait for the next bit :)
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with the story and for reviewing. Glad you liked this bit - ml
Date: February 03, 2008 07:47 pm Title: Launch Party Part 2
I've loved this whole series!! I'm a little sad it's over. It's great to read season 4 fluff, we've had so much angst that this is refreshing.
Author's Response: Well, there's probably one more bit. It seems logical to stop this with the Money episode. Glad you liked the fluff. Thanks for reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2008 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
This is great. A lot of cute little behind the scenes moments between them. I hope there's more soon!
9 [Report This]Date: January 21, 2008 11:00 am Title: Chapter 4 - Launch Party (Part 1)
Yay! I love to see this story updated :) Great Romantic!Jim moment with their "anniversary." Can't wait to read the next part!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The anniversary theme seemed to work with the second half of this episode. I'm a little nervous about getting it right, hope it's not a disappointment.
Date: January 21, 2008 12:16 am Title: Chapter 4 - Launch Party (Part 1)
Awww anniversary-of-the-day-they-met flowers!! Why must Jim be so perfect? lol
Author's Response:
I think Jim would be the type of guy who buys flowers. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 21, 2008 12:13 am Title: Chapter 3 Dunder Mifflin Infinity
Kevin and Meredith? Interesting... Love all these extra scenes and moments in season four. =)
Date: January 21, 2008 12:09 am Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
I'm really enjoying this! LOL the stripper knew Ben Franklin? That's hilarious.
Date: January 21, 2008 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Heehee, very cute. I always wondered why Pam would be downloading a celebrity sex tape at work. lol
Date: January 20, 2008 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Launch Party (Part 1)
Fun! I don't mind it broken into two; it just means we get more fun later.
I especially liked how Dwight's man perm screamed professional, and Dwight eating the apple. (Which was not a Garden of Eden reference. Eww.)
Author's Response: Could you imagine what it would have been like in the Garden of Eden? Not sure we'd have ever recovered as a species from that. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 20, 2008 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Launch Party (Part 1)
Um, October 4th is my birthday :) I forgot that episode aired that day...and I was so excited about it! Great story, by-the-bye, haha
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. Happy belated birthday. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 11, 2008 11:00 am Title: Chapter 3 Dunder Mifflin Infinity
Wow, Kevin and Meredith. Question: Does Meredith remember? Further question: Is this why "it's complicated" between Kevin and Stacey? What a fun little thing to throw in there.
I enjoyed this, and I like how you subtly had Jim re-asserting the Chinese food.
Get to the next chapter when you can get to the next chapter. Most of us are patient and understanding. :)
Date: January 11, 2008 05:59 am Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
I really liked how you worked Kevin's super stealthy spy moves into this. He was one of my favorite parts of Fun Run.
10 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
This is really making me smile-- the whole way through. It's cool to imagine some of these little scenes actually happening. Great job with the characterization as well! I hope you continue :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2008 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
I LOVE the way you tied everything into "Fun Run," haha the sextape thing has bugged me ever since.
plus it was a good read. kudos. or JOB WELL DONE! or zippy-de-do-dah!
Date: January 08, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 3 Dunder Mifflin Infinity
That was perfect. I love the way you've blended what we saw with what we didn't see.
8 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 Dunder Mifflin Infinity
Enjoyed this. Sorry to hear you've been ill and hope you're feeling better. My coworker had the same symptoms and hers ended up being gall bladder.
7 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fun Run
I enjoyed the backstory about Kevin being a diversion. I thought Pam giving Jim the finger was a little OOC for her, but that's just me.
8 [Report This]Date: January 08, 2008 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1 Pre-Fun Run
Oh no, the blue screen of death! (That's what we call it at work.) Great backstory to Pam's ordering the sex tape - what a cute idea she had to get it for Jim's BD. And I loved that Toby helped Jim fake the letter from the CEO.