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Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2008 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

aww! so cute!
i love it!

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2008 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 6

Buuuuuuuuuuuuuullllshizzzle.  Come on, Makemesmile!  You and I both know curiousity would get the better of both of these kids.  Don't take the moral high ground here!! lol.

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 03, 2008 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

I would totally not have the will power Pam just had. I would have stripped Jim's body nekked in record time!!!! Oh yeah, I said it and I'm not ashamed either...

Reviewer: skeber Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 5

I'll beta! If you still need one!!

Author's Response: That'd be great. Email me at makemesmile108@hotmail.com if you're still interested.

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oh no!! Wonder how they're going to get through that problem. LOL! Awesome story. =)

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 3

Loved how sweet Jim was for not looking at "himself" while he's in Pam's body. LOL at Jim's "red curls bouncing behind him", that's so funny!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

All right, so I haven’t shaved my legs in a while, but I didn’t think it was that bad.

LOL that's so cute! Really want to see how they react to each other at work. =)

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30, 2008 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really interesting start, off to read the rest. =)

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 3

This is awesome! Can't remember the last time I was so excited to read a story. Very well written.

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2007 08:00 am Title: Chapter 3

I really like this story and where it's heading.  I think you have to include something about Jim (as Pam) checking his new body out, and visa versa.  To ignore such a thing would be to ignore a very obvious thing that not just Jim, but any male (and female) would do in that instance.

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

that was hilarious!

I don't know why but this line did it for me:


With that he strode out of the office, his red curls bouncing behind him.



Author's Response: haha that's funny because when I wrote that all I kept picturing was Jim with a red wig on.

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 09:46 am Title: Chapter 3

wow. this is hilarious !

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2007 09:25 am Title: Chapter 2

this is AMAZING. wow. you have such a creative mind, i'm jealous ! i can't wait to see what's next !

Reviewer: kitesflyhigher Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 2

First I was like, YAY! QUICK UPDATE!  Then I was like, NO! SMALL CHAPTER!

I need more!  This story is so awesome so far.  I love the concept.  I have to know what happens next.  I can't wait to see Jim and Pam's reaction to seeing eachother naked for the first time when they have to change and shower and stuff.  Hah!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2007 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'm so excited...and I just can't hide it! (couldn't resist).

Reviewer: impish1 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2007 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

What a great concept, if it's anything like the Freaky Friday ones - I can't wait to see what happens next ;-)

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2007 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see where you take this. It should be interesting and good.

Reviewer: BeckySue Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06, 2007 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

So cute. Very well done.

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