Reviews For in so many words
Reviewer: elly Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 09, 2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
jim is a douchebag! i'm very upset at him! thanks for the added clarification...it makes it ten times clearer now!
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 09, 2007 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
ah yes, the explaination helps a lot. still heartbreaking.
Author's Response: terrific! i'm glad the explanation helped :)
Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 09, 2007 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww. its sad. i am not totally clear (jim and pam breaking up?) but its sad
Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback! i've added an explanation in the story's end-notes to make the idea clear.
Date: December 09, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't understand. It's "in their apartment" so it's not Jim and Karen.
Is it supposed to be Jim and Pam in the future, living together and/or married? And Jim's not happy and is breaking up with Pam?
I think it would be better if this were clearer.
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback! i've added an explanation in the story's end-notes to make the idea clear.
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: December 08, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: thanks for commenting, and that's exactly the feeling i was hoping to convey
7 [Report This]Date: December 08, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
55 words of heartbreaking sadness.
Author's Response: thanks for commenting, and that's exactly the feeling i was hoping to convey
Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 08, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. Ouch!
Author's Response: Yup. Exactly. ;)