9 [Report This]Date: December 27, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Cleaning House
What a pleasant surprise! More, more, more!!!!
Date: December 26, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Cleaning House
awhhh ! keep going, keep going ! :)
Date: December 15, 2007 10:26 pm Title: The Terrace
Okay, is it just me? Or is it pretty hot to think of Jim saying the word fuck. Sorry, just had to get that out there. On a more civilized note however, I truly am enjoying your story and really looking forward to the next update:)
Author's Response: No, I completely agree! It seems like something he would say a lot, especcialy if he were semi-drunk. Thanks for the review!!
8 [Report This]Date: December 15, 2007 08:29 pm Title: The Terrace
"She could feel the warmth of his arm through the thin white cotton of his shirt, and could only hope that he was the next course."
Great line.
And I think you meant to say "wondering" here - “Karen. Probably wandering where I am.” Unless of course she is actually walking around right there. :-)
Author's Response: Thanks! For the review and the correction. Karen walking around amidst our lovely couple would really bring down the mood.
Date: December 11, 2007 08:37 am Title: Interactions
this looks like its gonna be fun
Date: December 10, 2007 09:57 pm Title: Interactions
Very interesting take on the events of PW...I like that you put in all those cute little moments. Looking forward to reading more :o)
Author's Response: This was the point in season 3 that we lost the playful Jim and Pam that we know and love, so I liked writing them. Thanks for reviewing! It really makes my day.
Date: December 10, 2007 07:32 am Title: Interactions
Oooooooohh I like where this is going...so keep going!!!
7 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 08:06 pm Title: Interactions
"Karen, catching on, turned in mock disapproval, “Jim if someone else is on your mind, then I should just give up now. Really, I can’t compete.”
Great line - is that what's called a self-fulfilling prophecy?
Author's Response:
Thanks! This line was going to be a lot more foreshadowing/stating of fact than it is nowbut I figured it was a little too over the top, even for my imaginary universe about imaginary characters.
10 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 05:43 pm Title: Interactions
loving this story! cannot wait to read more!
Date: December 09, 2007 05:04 pm Title: Interactions
Really, they were so cute together. The all-American couple. They’d be on a commercial for wedding rings or condoms.
I love that line. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was having trouble describing Karen and Jim because I was so biased (words like 'wrong' and 'eww' come to mind), and this line popped into my head.
Date: December 09, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Interactions
great story. I never liked how that episode ended and this was adorable. I can't wait till the next chapter
9 [Report This]Date: December 09, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Interactions
Looking forward to the next chapter - always happy with a new ending to that wedding!! ;-)