Date: December 16, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was lovely. A perfect proposal indeed.
Date: December 12, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so adorable and so them I can definitely imagine Jim doing this, all nervous and such. And the ring is beautiful, I've always preferred silver.
Date: December 12, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! It read so easily, and I think you really conveyed the relationship that Pam and Jim have well. Jim has always been a kind of bumbling idiot around her, and I think it's absolutely true that he would plan something fantastic for her and then be absolutely taken aback by how naturally beautiful she is that he would just leave all of those on the wayside. Brilliant job--I loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and thanks again for the beta.
I agree with you about Jim. He seems to have it all together but when it comes to Pam it just spontaneous.
Date: December 12, 2007 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
The ring is gorgeous and the story is cute! Awsome :D
Date: December 12, 2007 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
awhhh ! this is perfect ! i love how jim was trying to plan it all out and then it just... happened (: great job !
Date: December 12, 2007 10:27 am Title: Chapter 1
this was so cute! "I was thinking -- well how about -- so, uh -- maybe we should, you know. What do you think?" it's just so them! and i totally remember that from runaway bride! now i kinda want to go and watch that movie... hehe
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you picked out the runaway bride proposal. I saw the movie a few weeks ago and just couldn't get it out of my head how it would fit Jim and Pam. Also i think it is the perfect way to be proposed to, nothing big and fancy just simple and if it is meant to be the other person will know exactly what you mean.