1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2021 06:22 am Title: Prologue (or: Jim Has An Idea)
I LOVED the first one of these. I’ve read it multiple times. Didn’t realise you’d written a sequel, which I found this morning, slightly randomly. And it’s awesome, and I’m guessing we are heading for a proposal. But I get to August and then I’m saying out loud:
“Where’s the ‘next’ button?”
PLEASE come back and finish this. It is so well written and just hits all the right shipper spots!
Date: July 14, 2018 10:42 pm Title: August
I don't know if you still read reviews on this or not. I just found this story after having read through "My True Love..." several times over. It's such a wonderful story. The creative ways you show their love for each other and the walk through the year you've created are vivid and easy to see. I hope you read this and remember what you had planned for the rest of the tale because it deserves to be finished.
Date: March 19, 2017 09:08 pm Title: August
I really love this series, I could read it over and over again and never tire of it.
If you were ever to come back and write again I hope it would be to complete this story. Just 4 months left and hopefully an epilogue.
In my mind he proposes on New Years and her wedding dress will be the same dress she wore when she revealed herself as his true love, only she'll have her friend Abby make it in white. And for a wedding gift she'd have created some sort of scrapbook that would include both of their 12 days.
I just wish I could read all the amazing details you'd include to complete the story.
Date: June 15, 2009 09:25 pm Title: Prologue (or: Jim Has An Idea)
Ok, so you HAVE to finish this up!
I enjoyed "My True Love Gave to Me" and was pleasantly surprised to see you had continued with it. I see it's been a while since you updated it and I just hope you haven't forgotten about it.
Date: August 08, 2008 07:49 pm Title: August
Oooh, lots of fun happened in August. Hmm...we could have the "christening of the conference room" fic and the "camping in the promised land" fic. Ha! I'm all for the details, Mox, you know me. Anyway, I hope Pam isn't really jealous of Parma. She knows Jim well enough by now to know he only has eyes for her!
Date: August 08, 2008 11:11 am Title: August
As lovely and sweet and charming as I found this chapter, I think my favorite part was the throwaway line that if Angela had been counting... Hee!
Date: August 08, 2008 08:56 am Title: July
Wow. I'm a bit stunned by those pictures to remember what I was going to write about the actual chapter!
Something along the lines of believable fight and nice to see Jim's dad presented in less than favorable light than the usual fic cliches and I can remember driving home in those conditions and...*shudder* Seriously. Scarred for life after seeing that statue!
Date: August 08, 2008 08:11 am Title: August
Since I suck, I have not been reviewing recently, til now! I am glad you are writing again Moxie. Good chappy's here!
10 [Report This]Date: August 08, 2008 08:03 am Title: August
Jealous Pam is kind of fun. Can you blame her? ;) I do think Jim would completely enjoy that, too. I know I've told you before, but I'll tell you again. I am loving Jim's letters. Excellent job, as always.
9 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2008 06:58 pm Title: August
Guiding star...that's so touching. Really enjoyed this chapter, Mox. Keep going!
Date: August 07, 2008 11:40 am Title: August
Hee. The story of how Pam & Jim christened the office would make for a great one-shot. (TWSS). I think I'll just read that one in my mind. Ahem.
Love the compass. HH just got back from some nerd conference and one of the swag items was a compass. A real one -- not your cracker jack box issue, but Jack Sparrow-style. Cool, huh?
I guess this should nudge me along in creating that August calendar page. Hmm....
Date: August 01, 2008 07:53 pm Title: July
Oh yeah, Pam definitley chose a creepy place to stop. It seems like the kind of place The Addams would like to go ;) I love how deeply you let Jim delve in his letter this month. The fact that he could write about it so candidly to her shows how comfortable he is in the state of their relationship. And who doesn't love that. Thanks for sharing.
Date: July 30, 2008 10:46 pm Title: July
I am so glad to see you back writing. This story...in general...anything! This story is great!
Date: July 30, 2008 09:54 pm Title: July
Really interesting layers you've done here. I kinda like that maybe Jim's dad's kinda a jerk and not everyone is all happy, smiley in both families.
Great introspection and revelation about the fight. I really liked this letter because it actually seemed necessary. The other letters have been more expository (more for our benefit than for Pam's it seemed to me), but this one seemed to lay out things that Jim couldn't actually tell Pam when it happened. Really nice.
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2008 08:48 pm Title: July
This story deserves a ribbon. :)
Date: July 30, 2008 07:15 pm Title: July
So that's where your Scarfinski went -- Jim gave it to Pam!
Granny's restaurant is truly horrifying, BTW. And the moving in story is sweet. Now, about that shower...
Date: July 30, 2008 06:25 pm Title: July
Yikes! Still recovering from that photo of "Granny." Mox, it's apparent how much time and effort you put into each chapter. I, as a reader, really appreciate it. The details are amazing. I love the emotion that "Jim" puts into each letter. Great job, as always.
Date: July 30, 2008 06:24 pm Title: July
I've read all of your stories (first discovered them on FF.net), and I have to say that I absolutely love all of them. This one is no exception! You put such great detail into your work, you make us feel like we're right there with Jim and Pam. The added links to the pictures, and in the case of this story, the charms, is a very nice touch. Looking forward to more. Very well done, thanks for sharing!
Date: July 30, 2008 05:23 pm Title: July
Enjoy - and thanks ever so much for the reviews. It keeps me going when otherwise I want to tell myself "Why bother? Just keep it all in your head." In the immortal words of Jim Halpert "Take that back!" "unforgivable" "unforgivable" Mox In my opinion you are the best writer on this site. I thoroughly enjoy your work. How else would a crime fighter unwind? LOL Seriously your writing is awesome I hope you never stop.
Batman
Date: July 30, 2008 04:40 pm Title: July
I'm so glad you included a pic of Granny's, I was wondering if you had actually stopped there on one of your many road trips. I used to travel I-81 all the time when I went to Gettysburg, and I remember passing Frackville. If I'd only known...
And Jim giving Pam a Scarfinski just made me go Squeeeeee! all over my keyboard. Heeheehee. Yeah, Pam, you should definitely wear it to bed.
Will be patiently waiting for the next update gf.
Date: July 29, 2008 09:19 am Title: June
Oh I remember this one! It took a while (hee!) to figure out they were at Pam's house but yay - this is such a fun concept that I'm glad you're continuing. I think all couples go through the we-need-to-stay-in-and-save-money phase so that was a nice touch. And I especially liked how you compared the departure of the film crew to school being out.
Date: July 21, 2008 05:36 am Title: June
I'm so glad to see this back again! I still get lost in Jim's letters. Sooo dreamy.
Can't wait for New Year's Eve!
Date: July 20, 2008 08:31 pm Title: Prologue (or: Jim Has An Idea)
Your stories are amazing and never disappoint. You're a truly gifted writer and I'm so thankful you write for this fandom!
Date: July 20, 2008 07:29 pm Title: June
Mox it's good to have you back! This is a great story ( as usual). Please update soon your loyal readers demand it LOL.
Regards,
B
Date: July 20, 2008 05:50 pm Title: June
Let me guess, you are working on a KICK ASS charm bracelet (for yourself) as we speak, right?
I'm so psyched to see that the "Pam & Jim at a wedding" snapshot helped get the wheels of fanfic moving again.