Date: June 05, 2008 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great and unique way to write a proposal fic! I loved it more than the others, honestly! The ending was great with MIchael interjecting his own, absurd commentary. Another awesome piece of work, I assure you.
Date: January 27, 2008 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I agree with NanReg... the spelling errors interrupted the flow and made me stumble through some sentences. Other than that, a very cute idea.
Author's Response: There are some things my eyes and microsoft word can't really pick up. If you know where I can find a beta please let me know.rnThank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: January 27, 2008 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
I love proposal stories! Micheal loosing the ring - classic. Loved it!
Author's Response: :) Thanks. For some reason it didn't seem like there could be a Jim and Pam proposal without Michael being involved somehow.
8 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2008 05:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Adorable idea for a proposal. I hate to be critical, but it could use some proofing. Otherwise, I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on that whole editing thing.