8 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2008 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 3 "Dessert"
I love this story it's really great! But just an FYI you might want to do a bit better research into the area, because I'm from the Northeastern PA area and Carbondale doesn't really have good schools at all. But other than that which really has nothing to do with the story (just a little something that bothers me since I'm from there)but the actual writing is great! =)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I admit I took some literary licence using Carbondale because it was a location readers might be familiar with since Oscar has stated that he lives there and Ryan has also mentioned it on the show. I did a bit of research and that's how I came up with Jefferson Heights and Clarks Summit. I'm glad you liked the story, overalll.
Date: January 28, 2008 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 4 "More Dessert"
Oh, that was really sweet! I can really see this happening on the show :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I struggled a bit with a reason why Jan and Michael would throw the dinner party in the aftermath of The Deposition, but I thought my scenario had some plausibility. Glad to learn that you, and maybe some others think it could be possile, too. I'm obviously anxious to see the actaul episode play out when the show returns. Thanks again for your kind words.