Date: May 27, 2008 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
The sad part is, I can very clearly picture Roy doing that.
Author's Response: I could too! Some people might say I'm being too harsh with him but I can just so visibly see that happening. Thank you for the review! I have the next chapter written - I'm just waiting for it to be betaed!
Date: March 31, 2008 11:05 am Title: Chapter 8
I loved the food fight! It was so adorable :) Totally Jim and Pam. I'm really looking forward to find out how they're going to spend their day! Thanks for another great chapter!
Author's Response: thank you so much 09imagine09! that made me smile! how sweet of you! i'll hopefully have this next one up soon! thanks again for your support and feedback!
Date: March 30, 2008 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
aww...soo good...so sad that you had writers block, but glad you are over it now (hopefully!!) can't wait for more...and of course reviews are like Michael and Dwight going into the pond!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad i'm over it too! i have some ideas on where to take this story it's just taking me a bit longer than in interpreted to get there. so please stay with me! thank you for all of your reviews!
5 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love seeing them sleeping in each others' arms. That's so gentle and intimate.
--Strider
Author's Response: Thank you so much for ALL of your reviews on each chapter! When I saw that I freaked out (in a good way). THANK YOU!! Keep 'em comin'!
Date: March 10, 2008 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
That's sweet...I love how JIm rescued her and stayed with her.
--Strider
5 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
YES!!!! That's MUCH better!
--Strider
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad to hear that! Fluff always makes things better : )
Date: March 10, 2008 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
Okay, now...she's got support, why does she feel like she's trapped with Roy? I guess I'll just have to read on...
--Strider
6 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ooh, I wonder what will happen. But still, Jim won't let that stop him from being there for her. Good cliffie!
--Strider
6 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good job...very scary and intense. You might double check some of your spelling, or have someone read it over...
--Strider
7 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Uh oh. Scary. Good start!
--Strider
Date: March 10, 2008 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
another great chapter... i'm liking the fact that Jim and Pam are cozy.
I can't wait for more... how many more chapters until the conclusion?
Author's Response:
haha thank you! your reviews are awesome, man. (:
and to tell you the truth i'm not sure... haha!
Date: March 09, 2008 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
amazing...can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: thank you! i love receiving your reviews! (:
Date: March 09, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yay! I love happiness and Jim and Pam cuddling! I'm so happy all that Roy drama is gone and we get to meet Jim's brother...phew!
Author's Response: Well - it may not ALL be gone (; thank you for your review! i'm glad you enjoy this (: please keep up the kind reviews!
Date: March 01, 2008 08:48 am Title: Chapter 6
Im loving this story! I just got caught up and cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, bootyz30! I'm so happy you are now reading this story AND enjoying it! I'll try and get the next chapter up soon! Thanks for the review - Keep 'em comin'!
Date: February 23, 2008 01:08 am Title: Chapter 6
Aw, Jim to the rescue! The conversation with Dwight was painfully slow...just give Jim her address!! LOL! I'm so glad he found her in time. Also, I don't mean to be nitpicky, but Pam should be taken to the hospital immediately...especially after all those injuries. And why would they leave her on the couch if they thought she was dead?
Author's Response:
That's a good thought! I'll have to think over that.. thank you for pointing it out! But thank you for your reviews! they are always awesome!
Date: February 23, 2008 01:02 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow. That was frighteningly graphic and really hard to read. I'm glad Jim found her. *sigh*
Author's Response: Wow, I never knew it was "frighteningly graphic!" Luckily, things are starting to look up for our favorite couple!
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2008 08:40 am Title: Chapter 6
I was so excited when I saw that this story had been updated. The beginning pf the chapter with all the explanation about how Jim heard everything was good.
The convo with Dwight was perfect. I could so see Dwight asking those questions and then getting suspicious about Jim burning down Pam's house.
The end was beautiful and I can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: thank you! and thank you again! and.. thank you AGAIN! (: haha! i love your reviews, they brighten my day! I'm so glad to know you are enjoying this!
Date: February 22, 2008 06:43 am Title: Chapter 6
aww...i couldn't figure out how jim know to come over, so i am glad you explained that...can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you! i always love getting reviews from you! they are always so sweet! (:
10 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2008 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow! I really hope that the "angel" was Jim coming to save her. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
You'll just have to wait and seeeeeee!!! (;
I'm glad to hear you are enjoying this! I love writing it and it only makes me happier to know that people like you find it enjoyable to read!
Date: February 21, 2008 09:16 am Title: Chapter 5
aww...so sad, but i think it finally mad pam realize what was happening and not to go back again at least i hope so...can't wait for more
Author's Response: Aww, it's so good to hear you are enjoying it! Thank you so much for your kind words! (:
Date: February 21, 2008 09:06 am Title: Chapter 5
That was intense! I was so scaredforPam in this chapter and it was so well written. I'm very happy for the ending. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! That means a lot. I'm so glad you are enjoying it! Thank you for your gracious support!!!
Date: February 21, 2008 08:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Ok this really scared me how violent Roy was. It was so well written that I could actually see the image of what Roy was doing in my head.
This was great. Please update soon. And tell me the "angel" is Jim because he heard what was going on over the phone because Pam never hung up after she dialed.
Author's Response:
Oh, that's so good to hear! I'm very glad it worked out that way! I was a little scared to post it, but I'm glad you find it well written!
And you'll just have to wait and seeeeeee!!! (;
Date: February 21, 2008 07:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Such a heartbreaking story! I can't wait to see how this plays out...
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it! (:
7 [Report This]Date: February 06, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hope you update this soon. My second review for this story, but so wanting to know how it goes.
Author's Response:
Well, reviews are good (:
I'm going to finish up this chapter and hopefully have it to my beta ASAP!
Date: February 05, 2008 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is really good! Please continue!
I'm scared for Pam. Is Jim going to save Pam from the evil Roy?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's so sweet of you!
And I guess you will just have to wait and see. (;