10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 02:51 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore
great chapter! your dialogue was spot on. If only tv!jam had realized it was this simple *sigh*. Write more soon please!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much!
Date: February 05, 2008 02:45 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore
Yes! I loved this! I can see Jim sending out like a thousand emails to Pam waiting impatiently for her to respond. And no Karen screwing up the works? Yes!
Yes!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I decided to keep Karen out of this. hehe.
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 01:31 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore
Sigh. I was having a bad afternoon, and this made my heart so happy. The voices are so true. Really can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I'm glad it made your heart happy. :o)
Date: February 05, 2008 01:29 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Huge Police fan and a huge fan of this story! Chapter 4 is fantastic!
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10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 01:28 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore
I like this 10 times better than what really happened in season 3! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: February 05, 2008 01:24 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore
I am loving this story, but still hoping for maybe just a tiny bit more angst. You can take this so much further, hope you do! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! But sorry, I just wasn't feeling the angst so much in this story.
10 [Report This]Date: February 05, 2008 01:14 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore
I was so giddy with excitement when I found an update~!! I just started reading this fic last night and am totally hooked.
Author's Response:
Aww, yay! Thank you!
Date: February 05, 2008 01:07 pm Title: Hundred Billion Bottles Washed Up On The Shore
aww love it...can't believe they found each other!! i am such a sap for JAM
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! :o)
Date: February 05, 2008 11:33 am Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
I *loved* this line:
His fingers flew like lightning as he typed a response, and then another when she didn't answer back within three minutes.
It just seems to be so *Jim* in this moment.
And I like The Police, so really this story is a win-win-win for me.
Date: February 05, 2008 11:25 am Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
ugh I'm dying for more of this. So great.
Date: February 04, 2008 04:37 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
So good. Update soon! Can't wait to see what she says.
Date: February 04, 2008 04:19 pm Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
love it!
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2008 02:35 pm Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
Oh! Please update soon! I need to know what she says! Or what he says for that matter, lol. This story is great so far!
Date: February 04, 2008 10:08 am Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
aww...sooo cute...so jim and pam...can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2008 09:49 am Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
Aww... curse you bulk mail filter! CURSE YOU!!!!!
I'm enjoying this quite a bit, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: February 04, 2008 09:27 am Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
Oh God. Hurry and post the next chapter. Please. Terrific idea for a way for them to re-connect. It seems very possible. Pam would have needed a few drinks to email him and I really can see her doing that. So true to character. Yikes. Write more. Write faster. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm glad you are enjoying it! I'm working on the next two chapters right now, so they should be up soon.
Date: February 04, 2008 09:01 am Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
Six months ago, his dreams became a reality, and he didn't even know it. OMG, OMG, OMG!!!
See, this is what technology does. A machine told me to drive my car into a lake.
Author's Response: LOL! I love that you compared it to the whole driving-into-the-lake-because-of-technology thing. Thanks!
Date: February 04, 2008 07:32 am Title: A Year Has Passed Since I Wrote My Note
Are you kidding me?!? Technology sucks. But you definitely don't! Please update soon! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm kneading the next two chapters, so they'll be up soon.
Date: February 01, 2008 07:58 am Title: Rescue Me Before I Fall Into Despair
Niiiiiiiice.
Author's Response: Thaaaaaanks.
Date: February 01, 2008 06:29 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Very sad so far but I am enjoying it. Hopefully there is an explanation why Jim hasn't answered.
Author's Response: Thank you! I never thought about the fact that releasing it as separate chapters would add more drama to it. I was surprised to see that you thought it was "sad", and then I realized that I wrote it all at once, so I already knew what is going to happen. So it makes sense that the story is still in a sad place at this point for the readers. Don't worry- things will work out for Jim and Pam. :o) Thanks again!
8 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 08:17 pm Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
I love this take on Jim going to Stanford - instead of the anger of Pam finding that he left, we got to see the utter sadness and despair over the situation causing him to leave. Very well done. I'm anxious to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoy the different take on that situation.
Date: January 31, 2008 10:39 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Oh, PuffingNoise, I'm loving this (as you know). Keep up the great work, and I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's always awesome when your betas review your published work even though they've alrready read it. :oD
I am still working on the last chapter and will definitely have you take another look at that when it's ready. But for now, I'm posting the first few chapoters which I am happy with. :o)
9 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 10:06 am Title: Just a Castaway, An Island Lost At Sea
Awww... poor Pam! (but I have a sneaking suspicion that things will eventually turn out right for her... right? yes? Puff? You're not going to leave us in the lurch, are you?) :)
I'm so happy to see this story beginning to be posted! I think you've made some fantastic improvements to it, and it's really much stronger as a result. Excellent work!
Author's Response:
Hehe how did you know? Are you psychic?
LOL thanks for reviewing even though you've already read the whole thing. :o)