Date: February 21, 2008 03:41 am Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this story since you posted the first chapter, but I've only just registered, so haven't been able to review until now. I absolutely adore this story - when AU fics are done well they are some of my favourite things to read, and this is hands down the best AU I've ever read - everyone is so in character and it's a really interesting setting to put them all in. It's not too different from an office environment to jar them too much, but (most of them) are a lot younger and that adds a nice dimension to it. I love how you've been building up the relationship between Jim and Pam, and also how you're dealing with Pam and Roy's relationship - it's a really interesting take, and great to see Pam growing as a character.
Can't wait for the next chapter - oh and kudos on how quick you update!!
Ruby
Date: February 20, 2008 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
I just love this story, another great chapter!
Date: February 20, 2008 04:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am liking this story more and more with each update.
Date: February 20, 2008 11:20 am Title: Chapter 12
I think your characterization of Josh is hilarious and spot on. Yet another great chapter. Looking forward to the next installment! I keep checking this story in between studying for updates!
Date: February 20, 2008 08:41 am Title: Chapter 12
OoOoOoOoOoOo I wonder who Pam was going to drunk dial?!? Perhaps a late night visit? She finally took the picture down. That should hopefully light a fire under one of their a$$. I love Pam's inner thoughts about Josh. lol, hilarious!!I am LOVING this story!! So well written, can't wait for more!!
Date: February 20, 2008 08:15 am Title: Chapter 12
Another good instalment. I was hoping you would do a college party chapter because everyone goes to one... and they do get drunk.
I was hoping for some kind of drunk dial or drunk confrontation between Jim and Pam when everyone got back.
I can't wait for another chapter...please be soon.
Date: February 20, 2008 06:39 am Title: Chapter 12
aww...it was a good chapter kinda awkward cause people kept just showing up and such...can't wait for more!!
Date: February 20, 2008 12:20 am Title: Chapter 12
Wow. Okay... so I'm a junior in college right now... and this is almost a cliched college story... but those cliches are sooooo true!
This story is the best!
Rock on! I'm waiting for another chapter to read between classes!
Author's Response: "I just really want you to be happy. And I know tht sounds cliche, and I know saying it sounds cliche sounds cliche. Maybe I'm being cliche. I don't care because I am what I am. That's Popeye."
Date: February 19, 2008 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
So close to happy Jam! Glad Roy is out of the picture. Stupid Katy for ruining things!
Date: February 19, 2008 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 11
aww...so close yet so far away...hope for more soon!!
Date: February 19, 2008 05:27 am Title: Chapter 11
I am tres interested. I really like this story. I think it's pretty unique. Keep going! (P.S. - I love your quick updates!!)
Date: February 19, 2008 02:25 am Title: Chapter 11
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Stupid Katy!!! Stupid lack of communication! Well I hope Jim runs into Ryan and finds out what happened and then goes to see Pam notice the picture, wild hot studio sex occurs. lol............couln't help myself with the last part. Still so good! Keep the chapters comming, Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next.
Date: February 19, 2008 12:20 am Title: Chapter 11
I wish I had a boytoy like Jim to hang out with in the wee hours of the morning while I do schoolwork, like right now. *sigh* But honestly, I would never get anything done if that were the case. I admire Pam for having so much willpower.
Damn that Katy, and her bouncy red hair for deceiving Pam and thus postponing the happiness of Jim, Pam, and myself. But on the plus side that means there will be more chapters, yeee!
Thanks for writing this story, I really like it and I love that you update it so often. These past two days whenever I needed a break from my schoolwork there has been another chapter added. Thanks for being my Jim. ;)
Date: February 18, 2008 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
I'm still trying to decide if the image of young Pam nestled up in a twin bed with young Jim is reward enough to compensate for all this frustration. I'm thinking yes, but you're killing me! Katy... WHY?! But the more angst and confusion, the better the pay-off, right? I'm hoping!
Date: February 18, 2008 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
So perfect. This was just amazing. The sleeping together and then the whole Katy thing.
I give you multiple Dundies for this story. Please I need more... This story is a nice break from all my school readings.
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ah, sexiled. I know that well. Except, with me, it would be an IM from my roommate while I was in the room. "Hey, can you leave for a little while, I want to screw my boyfriend." My roommate? She was direct.
Can't wait to read more. You're doing a really good job of transferring in all the characters in a believable way.
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
oooh! katy is catty! also, i really love your take on what the office characters could have been like in college.
if reviews keep you motivated, then i will continue to shower you with it, because this is a really good story!
Date: February 18, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please put up the next chapter! Your characterizations are fantastic and really entertaining! This is a pretty addictive story....
Date: February 18, 2008 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! I hope we're rid of Roy for good!
10 [Report This]Date: February 18, 2008 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
i love it!!
Date: February 18, 2008 08:36 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh Italianfood you slay me every time. Just when I think at the end we are going to get some PB&J you change it up. I love how you have Jim and Pam stepping around their feelings instead of just coming out and admitting them.
The was more brilliant writing by you. I can't wait for the next chapters of the story. I was wondering how long is this going to be? Is it going to play out like season 3 with Jim and Karen together?
Please don't leave me hanging for too long.
Date: February 18, 2008 07:09 am Title: Chapter 10
This is my absolute favorite story right now. I love that you update daily! You do make me nervous with Karen though...you're introducing her right as Pam gets rid of Roy! Eek
Date: February 18, 2008 05:21 am Title: Chapter 10
aww...yay...maybe now they have a chance!!
Date: February 17, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 10
I just found this story and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! I was so excited when you posted a new chapter already. You're very in character with Jim and Pam's relationship. I'm just waiting fof Fancy New Beesly to make an apperance or two. Perchance at a college party?!?!Seriously devoted to this story! Can't wait for the next installment! Hurry back!
10 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2008 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
this chapter was great! i love that pam told roy she wasn't in love with him! great job!