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Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 06:13 am Title: Chapter 9

aww...he needs to break up with katy cause all she ever wants is sex and i believe that he wants more than that in a girlfriend...can't wait for more

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 9

I forgive you since I got a shout-out ;-)  Anyway, I still love this story!

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 8

Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next.

Reviewer: pam_beesly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 11:07 am Title: Chapter 8

Personally, I'm glad you didn't kill off Roy. I think that would have been an easy "out," so I appreciate you keeping him alive. I love how you made us all think he was dead, though. ;)

Anyway, I really enjoy the way you're building Jim and Pam's relationship.

Reviewer: elly Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 09:20 am Title: Chapter 1

i really like where you are going with this story. Are you registered on the boards?

Author's Response: I'm not registered, I'm pretty new to all of this. But if you want to send me an email feel free to.

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 08:59 am Title: Chapter 8

I really enjoyed this chapter. The beginning was kind of a filler, but that is what I loved about it. Everyone was there and it still progressed the story.

I Love how you have gotten the characters so right and by having a lot of them show up here just reinforces that. I loved the ending BTW. I love me some PB&J. 

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm really enjoying this story!

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15, 2008 06:39 am Title: Chapter 8

aww...are they going to get together cause that would be awesome!!

Reviewer: FictionInReality Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14, 2008 06:11 am Title: Chapter 7

I won't lie, I thought Roy was dead... And is it bad I'm a little disappointed he isn't?

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 7

Oooh, I did think Roy was dead! Tricky, but so good!!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 7

I so thought Roy was a gonner.  Bummer.

Oh well, that would be too easy, wouldn't it?  Nothing has ever been easy for Jim and Pam, why should it be in fanfic?

Great work, once again.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 7

Interesting twist. I love that you update quickly. Please continue that trend :-)

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Damn, I thought that lug head would have turned up dead....Damn... But the story is not over yet?????!?!?!?

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 11:59 am Title: Chapter 7

Wow! I never expected this turn of events where Roy went off and enlisted.
No offence I kind of wish you did kill him off in the war. I know that is harsh, but then Jim could be there to pick up all the pieces (yeah I am all for the sappy stuff like that).

I can't wait for more, just please do not keep PB&J away for too long. 

Reviewer: abrighterdiscontent Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 13, 2008 10:21 am Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait to find out what happens next in your story! Great writing, and great plot!

Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 6

I love this story!  But shouldn't Jim be in studio working on that rendering?  I want hot Jam studio sex.  Jim tired from a double all-nighter, trying to finish rendering a section, everybody else has gone home, Pam comes over with coffee... I can see it.

Reviewer: vodka_rebellion Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

Aw, you've made me sad for Katy.  I've been Katy!  

 Which isn't to say I'm not totally rooting for Pam and Jim, obviously.  I love the concept of the story.  It really works, and I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

OMG!! Jim is having sex with Katy!!!! Meaningless sex, but sex just the same!  What will Pam do when she finds out? And you know she's going to find out. 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 4

This chapter was a riot. Madge being the professor! Creed "call me William" wh hadn't done anything since the 60's! Very creative chapter.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 2

So glad that Kelly is Pam's roomie and not Angela.  Maybe she'll drive Pam so crazy that Pam will seek refuge on the floor above. 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Congrats on your first story here!  It will be fun to see our faves as younger people in a different setting. As long as there's a "floppy haired guy with that lopsided smile" in the upcoming chapters, I'm all in!

Reviewer: hues8 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

Whoa, holy twist! What happened to Roy?! Another awesome chapter.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 5

What?!?!?  TUNA?!?!  Are you kidding me?!?!

Very interesting development.  I just love this story and can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 5

love it...it was way confusing cause i thought pam had called her mom, but i guess it is understandable...so what is up with Roy??? i have an idea that he is dead...am i right??? can't wait for more

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2008 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1

So did Roy die or something? That sucks. I mean, I hate the guy, but it's a little harsh to make him bite the dust, if that is indeed what happened. But then again, it makes it convenient for Jim to suddenly be in the picture :)

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