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Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2008 05:19 am Title: Chapter 36

so good...so funny that he locked them in the closet...can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: malcolm lake Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2008 03:10 am Title: Chapter 36

This story has been a lot of fun.  I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to the next bit

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2008 02:25 am Title: Chapter 36

i love every chapter...good going...

Reviewer: iwantphillyjim Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2008 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

i have been reading this sice you posted the first chapter, and i love it, also your other story, you ROCK my world! i'm a total fanfic nut, and this story, is my fave, seriously...you have a fan!

Reviewer: Tiktaalik Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2008 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 33

I'm really enjoying this story, but I feel like I have to clarify something - the morning after pill won't actually make you not pregnant if you already are, it just keeps sperm from fertilizing the egg. You're thinking of the abortion pill, which isn't sold in the US. The morning after pill does not kill anything. Sorry to nitpick, but I actually teach classes on this sort of thing to incoming college freshmen, and it's a dangerous misunderstanding that keeps a lot of girls from taking the morning after pill.

Seriously though - great story, I'm really enjoying it! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for clarifying and thanks for reading! Clearly I've gone through 3 1/2 years of college without knowing that, and I was a bio major for two of those. lol(sad really). But I do know a few girls that have thought the same thing that Pam thought, mainly because the clinics didn't really explain anything, just handed the box of pills over and told them how to take them. Thanks again, I might work that into next chapter or the one after so Pam can throw that back in Angela's face.

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2008 07:25 am Title: Chapter 35

This chapter was worth the wait. Also loved the chapter when Jim went home. I love the way his parents treat him. Just so you know, I anxiously await each new chapter to both of your stories!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2008 05:53 am Title: Chapter 35

Mmm... now almost everything is right with the world. (BTW -- it is ten kinds of adorable that Jim gave her a 'promise ring'.)

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2008 04:23 am Title: Chapter 35

yay...i am glad they had a real fight, but so glad they are back...can't wait fcr dwight and angela to get back together!!

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2008 09:47 am Title: Chapter 34

but I don't want to wait for more....
I actually can see why Pam would be mad at Jim. He can make her be ready to talk when she's not. I'm very interested to see how the next chapter plays out.

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2008 07:35 am Title: Chapter 34

Aw, I love Jim's dad! Sweet, and understanding, and giving useful advice.
Just one request: Please make the next chapter end happy.
Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I promise there'll be a happy ending.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2008 06:25 am Title: Chapter 1

Jims dad was great. I'm looking forward to them talking again. I hope they can get it all out and be back on the right track.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2008 05:21 am Title: Chapter 34

Love Michael's man-crush on Ryan.  Please don't write the sad!


Author's Response: Just a little bit of sad before the happy.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2008 04:36 am Title: Chapter 34

loved it...awesome that his dad was so cool about it all and told jim the way life is...can't wait for them to see each other!!!

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2008 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 33

I look forward to this story more than any other and I don't usually like alternate universe stories. I hope you post more really soon. I'm still confused over if she threw up the pills or not. I read it again and all it says is that it made her sick. Does that mean they came back up or they already dissolved in her system before she started throwing up? Or does she even know and she's just assuming?

Author's Response: sorry if that it wasn't clear. They were already dissolved and in her system. Throwing up is a side effect of the pill so it doesn't affect the pills at all. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2008 10:21 am Title: Chapter 33

great job...love that she turned to Angela cause she was the only semi normal person to ask...gotta love them all and all their quirks...can't wait for more

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 22, 2008 10:09 am Title: Chapter 33

Wow. Just wow.

I really liked the Jan and Pam interaction. I loved how you made it believable and sincere.
I hope that you don't keep Jim and Pam apart to long though, even though I am really enjoying the angst right now.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2008 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 32

Oh crap, did the throwing up screw up the medication?  And Pam, let Jim hold your hair while you throw up.  

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2008 11:16 am Title: Chapter 32

Uh oh.  I hope she didn't throw up THE PILLS!

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2008 09:39 am Title: Chapter 32

This chapter was so sad. Poor Pam. But I do love that Jim seemed to know exactly what to do. I hope they get through this! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Cheeb Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2008 09:10 am Title: Chapter 32

Oh, this chapter was so good and so believable. It brought tears to my eyes. I just love the way you've written these two. Can't wait to read how they work through their "stuff".

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2008 08:22 am Title: Chapter 1

I hope they can sit down and talk this out.  I'm optimistic with that being done everything will be o.k.

Reviewer: PokerChips Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2008 07:08 am Title: Chapter 32

Read this in class and OMG i just loved it. Heartbreaking. I can't wait for the next chapter and hopefully a resolution between Pam and Jim.

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20, 2008 04:27 am Title: Chapter 32

aww...sooo good...can't wait for it!!

Reviewer: abrighterdiscontent Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2008 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 31

go pam for getting back at katy! i can't wait to find out what happens next...please don't break them up!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2008 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

NOOOOOOO, I can't handle it if something happens to them.  They are so perfect in this story.  Please hurry back with an update.

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