10 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2008 01:24 pm Title: Just let me fall in love with you.
Ah. I need a cigarette! Thanks for that Stablergirl!
Date: March 17, 2008 08:51 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
Simply lovely. I love that Jim has this special place and he reveals it to Pam. Can't wait for more as usual.
Date: March 17, 2008 07:55 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
Oh, this is wonderful. I love that she finally got her raincoat, and from him :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2008 07:25 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
awwww yay! such love! this story is all kinds of awesomenesss. can't wait for more cabin fever.:)
Date: March 17, 2008 11:05 am Title: Don't be afraid.
What would you have to apologize for? That was lovely!
Date: March 17, 2008 10:58 am Title: Don't breathe.
How could she not indeed?
Man, Ryan's such a douche! Though honestly I bet he wouldn't have cared enough to say anything if Jim hadn't mentioned it first.
Date: March 17, 2008 05:56 am Title: Don't be afraid.
Sweet sassy molassey! I LOVED this! I love the raincoat incident...especially the way Pam looks at him like she doesn't understand what he's doing. And, I guess in a since she doesn't. Roy didn't do things like that for her, and I love the way the words I'm in love with you just sort of fell from her lips. Because she knows how she feels...I don't think that's ever really been the problem with these two. So it seems so natural and so right that she'd show him her hand, all her cards (well, not ALL her cards...but we are going to get that, right? Right?!), at such a small gesture. Awesome job!
Date: March 16, 2008 07:15 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
Love this line, very sweet:
Now he was certain there was something fated in the name Jim and the way it sat so beautifully beside the name Pam.
And the fact that giving her a raincoat frees her finally to express how she feels was just a brilliant throwback to the first line of this story. Nice. Looking forward to more romance as the night progresses.
Date: March 16, 2008 07:01 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
Too much? Not at all. Reading this chapter brought a smile to my face. I can picture the cabin perfectly from your description. So cute how Jim's nervous (needlessly) that Pam won't like it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2008 06:03 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
Ha! The Ghost and Mrs. Muir came on as I was reading this! Not even kidding!
This chapter was so sweet! Can't wait for more.
Date: March 16, 2008 05:19 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
Awwww JAM at its finest! yay! more soon please??
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2008 04:29 pm Title: Don't be afraid.
Apologize for what? I am a shameless romantic, and this really spun my beanie ; ) It has such a great feel. Just the mention of The Ghost and Mrs. Muir took me back decades. Lovely. Now get crackin' on that next chapter, sister. I'll be sitting here waiting...watching the peeling floral wallpaper...
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2008 10:46 pm Title: Don't breathe.
Wow That elevator scene was so hot. I can't wait till you get to the smut. I read both versions of this chapter and I like this one better. I like that he asks her to come and not just sending her directions to the cabin. I mean who could say no to Jim.
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2008 09:48 pm Title: Don't breathe.
As many of your other faithful readers have mentioned, you have got to stop apologizing at the end of your chapters because the only thing you might possibly have to apologize for is the fact that you are way more awesome than us. Or something like that. :-)
How hot was that elevator scene? I think my mouse started to melt there was so much heat going on there! Un-frakking-real. You had a plethora of great lines in this chapter that so perfectly, beautifully conveyed their need for one another -- just ... Guh. Here are my faves:
"She wasn’t sure she’d ever been kissed this soundly, ever had this much lust pumping through her veins, ever wanted to dress someone in her kisses the way that she did him." Oh how I loved that -- dress him in her kisses.
"His mouth owned her, all of a sudden." Damn. Just...DAMN. You've robbed me of my ability to be coherent. That one line has made my mind just wander into some dark and dirty places.... :-p
"...the way it was the same thing he had said to her when he’d asked her to go with him to the baseball game, this habit he had of saving her over and over again." And that's just lovely -- the idea that he saves her, just by inviting her to a ballgame or his uncle's cabin. J'adore!
I'm waiting with baited breath for the romance, cabins and candlelight b/c I know you won't disappoint!
Date: March 14, 2008 04:28 am Title: Don't breathe.
It absolutely astonishes me that you feel compelled to apologize at the end of some of your chapters -- I mean, seriously, you just have no idea how talented you are. And this chapter? Pure hot, unadulterated perfection, my friend.
I love the way you've so seamlessly made the transition from the angsty longing to now the full-on heat now that there's nothing stopping them. You do an excellent job, too, of capturing how utterly intoxicated Pam must feel after all those years with Roy to THIS.
And your Jim....sigh. You write overheated, out of control Jim like no other. (And dear god is he sexy.)
So once again...thanks for an absolutely amazing chapter. And uh, the next one? With the candlelight and cabins and romance?
...Yeah, that sounds a little bit awesome. Okay, a lot awesome. :o)
Date: March 13, 2008 11:05 pm Title: Don't tease.
this was something he'd been warned to avoid by the poets and prophets he'd been forced to read in high school. This was some kind of flowing hair and hooded eyes, some kind of curves and slopes and hunger, and he found his gaze straying to her constantly when he should've been focused entirely on other things.
Completely and totally fabulous.
Date: March 13, 2008 08:16 pm Title: Don't breathe.
Opposite of hate -- awesomeness abound! A great chapter, can't wait to see what happens in the cabin :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Don't breathe.
Hated it?!?!? Absolutely NOT!! I thought it was rather sizzling, myself! Can't wait for the cabin!
Date: March 13, 2008 06:43 pm Title: Don't breathe.
Nope. Didn't hate it. Hate Ryan though. Am looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: March 13, 2008 06:40 pm Title: Don't breathe.
Dude, who could hate it?? Such smoldering tension?? Un-fetered lust? Sign me up!! Looking forward to the next installment of heat!!
Date: March 13, 2008 06:40 pm Title: Don't breathe.
I swear I didn't take a breath the whole time I was reading this! Good grief, that was hotter than the hinges on the gates of Hell. I need a cigarette and everybody kept their clothes on! I may have a stroke when they get to the cabin!
I love that Jim tells her "come with me" instead of asking. I love that the only button he doesn't push is the elevator button.
Whew! I didn't see your original chapter (I must have looked away for a minute - considering you whip out entire chapters in the time it takes me to nap on the couch) but I can't imagine anything hotter than this. HOT. And so full of their desire for each other.
I have two Pam-quotes for you:
"Right, I need a boyfriend!"
"I hate you!"
Date: March 13, 2008 06:31 pm Title: Don't breathe.
The fact that the end notes include "romance", "cabins" and "candlelight" really only turns me into everyone else, which is to say that I am another one of your demanding readers. The new chapter has to be here, like, yesterday. Or, in Jim's words, "You're killing me".
In a good way.
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 06:26 pm Title: Don't breathe.
Stablergirl, you are a goddess, and you are sending me to bed with happy thoughts. Thank you. This was delicious.
Date: March 13, 2008 06:14 pm Title: Don't breathe.
Personally I liked the email thing better, but this is nice, too :)
Date: March 13, 2008 06:07 pm Title: Don't breathe.
how could she not? Indeed!
After all the sex eyes going back in that office, it's a wonder they lasted until after lunch to sneak off to the elevator. Good god, girl, this is smoking hot. There is something about those illicit thoughts under the fluorescent lights of DM-Scranton. *melts*