Date: April 28, 2008 10:37 am Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
First time reviewer here. I'm loving the story, and loved the huge progress they've made in their relationship lately.
One thing with this latest chapter, though. There are references to Jon/Jonathan and Jake in this chapter, so Jim's brother seems to be a bit inconsistent!
Author's Response: thanks for the review and catching our mistake!
Date: April 28, 2008 08:52 am Title: Prologue
?Tonight? No?I?m still getting settled.? He could see the disappointment in her face almost immediately. If he were here (oh...if wishing made it so) he would have seen the same look on my face.
You made me feel Pam's anxiety!
I hope our Jimmy boy starts tripping all over Pam again soon. Sad Pam makes me sad...
So good! Off to read the next chapter...
Date: April 28, 2008 08:51 am Title: Prologue
?Tonight? No?I?m still getting settled.? He could see the disappointment in her face almost immediately. If he were here (oh...if wishing made it so) he would have seen the same look on my face.
You made me feel Pam's anxiety!
I hope our Jimmy boy starts tripping all over Pam again soon. Sad Pam makes me sad...
So good! Off to read the next chapter...
9 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2008 06:03 am Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
I think this dynamic of Jim's family being skeptical of Pam is very interesting. I get it but at the same time come on, how could you not just love Pam? Anyway, this story is very sweet and one I'm always happy to see. I sense a little angst coming but i'm willing to follow you wherever this story goes. Nice work!
Author's Response: thanks for your review! You'll see how Jim's family reacts next chapter!
Date: April 27, 2008 01:53 am Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
Who won the Super Mario? :P Great chapter - very sweet and intense.
Author's Response: hmm...let's say Pam won! Thanks for the reviewing/reading!
Date: April 26, 2008 07:56 pm Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
Another fantastic chapter, I love this story...you keep me coming back for more!
Author's Response: thanks for reading! We love your story!
Date: April 26, 2008 07:10 pm Title: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
aww soooo goood....loved it all...loved that she expected that he would be like Roy but he is sweet instead...can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: April 13, 2008 06:57 pm Title: Prologue
Just loving this one so much!
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: April 13, 2008 11:47 am Title: A Perfect Day
very good chapter, i get so excited when i see a new chapter to this story. great work!
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2008 11:45 am Title: A Perfect Day
I like the idea of a ferry ride. Nice that Jim and Pam now have a happy memory of a cruise.
Author's Response: Thanks for noticing what we were trying to get across. Glad you liked the chapter!
8 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 11:05 pm Title: Her eyes...That's where hope lies...
Good gravy, that's a wonderfully long chapter!! I'm so glad everything is official now - they have declared themselves!
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! We really appreciate you reading!!
Date: April 06, 2008 02:30 am Title: Her eyes...That's where hope lies...
You absolutely, positively must update this ASAP. Yes, I realize you just posted a new chapter like... yesterday, but I want there to be more. There NEEDS to be more JAM wonderfulness.
So you just get on that, and I'll be waiting patiently in my corner. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We really love reading your comments! Glad you like the story. The next chapter should be up shortly!!
Date: April 06, 2008 02:01 am Title: Should We Take A Chance, and Dance the Last Dance
I'm taking a brief break from reading this to tell you that I own Pam's wedding shoes! And yeah. They're pretty freaking awesome (and cute!)
Okay. I'm going to get back to reading now. And I'll leave a longer review when I finish. :D
Date: April 05, 2008 12:08 pm Title: Her eyes...That's where hope lies...
sooooo goood...can't wait for more jam!!!
Date: April 05, 2008 11:43 am Title: Her eyes...That's where hope lies...
this chapter was great, i am really lovingthis whole story. Well done!
9 [Report This]Date: April 05, 2008 09:58 am Title: Her eyes...That's where hope lies...
Finally! Definitely was a pleasant surprise to wake up and see this posted. Another great chapter.
Date: April 05, 2008 09:03 am Title: Prologue
Given the long road they had in this story you did a perfect job in this chapter. I love reading all the emotions you put into their talk. It was just great. I am looking forward to their Saturday now!!!!
Author's Response: thank you for reading and reviewing. See you on the boards!
Date: April 05, 2008 04:54 am Title: Her eyes...That's where hope lies...
I'm trying to think of different words but all I can come up with is Fantastic and Awesome. And, Finally! Not that I'm complaining because I love how long the story is. I'm also trying to think of something other than I can't wait for more, but I'm sure you'll be hearing all about it.
Date: April 01, 2008 01:09 pm Title: It's Such A Lovely Day...
Finally had time to read this. Loved it, but can he just kiss her already? I know I'm impatient.
8 [Report This]Date: March 31, 2008 12:41 pm Title: It's Such A Lovely Day...
Very sweet! I can't believe they both resisted kissing the other. I also enjoyed your description of the comfortable silences they enjoyed, that really is a good indicator of people's relationships.
Date: March 31, 2008 05:25 am Title: It's Such A Lovely Day...
wow...amazing...so excited when we got to see how they reacted to seeing each other and how jim had to talk himself into knocking but then pam caught him...can't wait for more!!!
Date: March 30, 2008 10:06 pm Title: It's Such A Lovely Day...
i was so excited just now when i saw that this was updated, great story...
8 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 08:21 pm Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
YAY!!! He's so awesome! I hope we get to see the serious talking now...
--Strider
8 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 07:58 pm Title: Someday you'll know that I was the one for you
I agree with her that she should wait before pursuing things with Jim... but it's just coffee! Poor Jim!
--Strider
Date: March 19, 2008 07:48 pm Title: God Bless the Broken Road
I'm glad that Pam is taking just-Pam time with her life. A girl really has to be able to stand on her feet to be able to sustain a good relationship... but that's coming, right? Right?
--Strider