Date: March 18, 2008 07:38 am Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
when i got to the end of this chapter and jim was standing at the door, my face couldn't help but break out into a smile :) this is what this story does to me! can't wait for the next installment!
10 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2008 07:32 am Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
YAY!! I was hoping he would show up in New York. I loved how Jim and Pam are slowly easing into a relationship and not just jumping into it. But fell free to have them jump at any time. :)
I can't wait to see what happens next.
I'm guessing that Karen left for good because she took a box?
9 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2008 05:48 am Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
Yay! Really enjoyed this chapter.
Date: March 18, 2008 05:41 am Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
WOOHOO! And I was just about to ask when Jim was going to get his ass to NYC!?! Update ASAP...
Author's Response: Thanks for the enthusiasm agd300! We should update monday of next week! Thanks for your review!
9 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2008 01:33 am Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
Yahoo! Finally some happy stuff! And you resolved my peeve with the last chapter so quickly! Can't wait for Jim and Pam NYC adventures - fun stuff! :)
Date: March 17, 2008 11:22 pm Title: Prologue
hey jinxcoke/skeber, and elly! i'm so terribly sorry i didn't get back to you in the chatroom tonight (my sn there is icaladenel)! i was pulled away from my computer for a while, but just finished the story now. you guys did such a great job portraying the characters realistically, and not forcing the pace of their reconciliation. and wow, the ending? definitely one that took my breath away!! what a wonderful collaborative work on both of your parts! congrats!
Author's Response: Ical!!!!! No worries :)Thank you for your opinion and review. Hope to see you in teh chat room soon!
Date: March 17, 2008 11:19 pm Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
I really liked this chapter, so much honesty and communication! I love communication, and I love that Kate nudged things along a bit. Thanks for the chapter, and I'm definitely looking forward to the next.
Date: March 17, 2008 10:45 pm Title: Why We Stay Instead of Leaving
Great chapter. I was worried for Pam at first and I can't believe you guys left me hanging with Jim showing up.
Date: March 17, 2008 07:19 am Title: Should We Take A Chance, and Dance the Last Dance
AHHHH!!! OMG... what a freakin' AWESOME chapter. I mean, I knew the wedding would be good, but DAMN! You've got to update this stat! Will there be another run-in with Aiden?
Date: March 16, 2008 05:15 pm Title: Should We Take A Chance, and Dance the Last Dance
Loved the feeling involved in that Jim/Pam dance.... can't wait for an update!
M
9 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2008 01:48 pm Title: Someday you'll know that I was the one for you
Pam, Pam, Pam, come to your senses!
BTW, the link for the Fancy New Beesly .jpg didn't work.
Author's Response: Try this....http://i247.photobucket.com/albums/gg148/jinxcoke/FNB2.jpgrn
9 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2008 01:27 pm Title: Should We Take A Chance, and Dance the Last Dance
I really like this fic and great chap, but OMG. Pam should have said during her confession that Aidan was NOT her bf. They would still have plenty of obstacles, but I don't like it when they lie to each other. Being deliberately false is different than just being too shy/scared to do something.
I love Aidan's description's of Jim's reaction to him - sharp instrument indeed!
10 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2008 01:01 pm Title: Should We Take A Chance, and Dance the Last Dance
Ok I don't know if I've ever review for this story before, but I just wanted to let you know that it’s one of my favorite stories on this website. The story keeps me on my toes and you write soooo well!! This was another amazing chapter. Pam's confession was subtle, but at the same time said so much. I can't wait to see where you go with this from here.
Also like in the show I feel bad from Karen, but she really can't be that dense. Jim has always loved Pam and it’s clear to see. Why would you even want to be with a guy that's in love with someone else? It's not fair to anyone. It's sad, but I hope they break up soon.
Truly I get so excited when I see that you've updated. Thanks for posting!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. It means a lot to us!! The next chapter should be up soon...hopefully by tomorrow. Thank you again! Glad you like it!
Date: March 16, 2008 12:12 pm Title: Should We Take A Chance, and Dance the Last Dance
You guys are trying to break my heart. It was worth it though, even if it was just one dance.
Date: March 12, 2008 10:48 pm Title: Someday you'll know that I was the one for you
Love sexy professional Pam! Love, love Jim's reaction to Pam, and that he didn't know she was coming. But you guys broke my heart when she turned down coffee. A sad Jim, makes me very sad. I'm definitely looking forward to the wedding, although Jim's response to seeing Pam with Aidan might break my heart.
p.s. I really like that this is done from both sides and we get to know how both the characters are feeling.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Glad you are enjoying the story! We really appreciate you taking the time to tell us what you think! BTW...a sad Jim makes me very sad too!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2008 09:25 pm Title: Someday you'll know that I was the one for you
Hurray for this wonderfully long chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next at the wedding!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: March 09, 2008 07:31 pm Title: God Bless the Broken Road
looking forward to this wedding showdown. :) keep up the great story!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: March 09, 2008 11:40 am Title: God Bless the Broken Road
The suspense is going to strangle me!!!
Loved the update!!
M
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: March 08, 2008 06:26 pm Title: God Bless the Broken Road
please hurry with the next chapter! Its a great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: March 04, 2008 10:08 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....
Umm...are there updates coming? I REALLY want some...
--Strider (who can now actually go to bed)
Author's Response: Updates soon! Thanks so much for your reviews!!!! We REALLY appreciate them!!
Date: March 04, 2008 10:07 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....
I loved the brother-to-brother talk; I think it was really important for Jim to understand what he'd put Pam through (though I still want her to understand the same thing!). I lov ehow Pam's becoming more confident, learning more about herself, but still loves Jim.
--Strider
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews!!!
8 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 09:54 pm Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
I'm glad that Jim finally broke some of the ice between them. I can't wait to see what happens!
--Strider
8 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 09:54 pm Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
I'm glad that Jim finally broke some of the ice between them. I can't wait to see what happens!
--Strider
8 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 09:53 pm Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
I'm glad that Jim finally broke some of the ice between them. I can't wait to see what happens!
--Strider
Date: March 04, 2008 09:47 pm Title: Better This Way
Great parellels between Jim's and Pam's unsent messages!
--Strider