Date: March 04, 2008 09:39 pm Title: A New Day is Dawning
You Jim scene was absolutely perfect. So intense, so heartbroken, just perfect. You should send it to NBC and see if they can use you on the writing crew...
--Strider
Date: March 04, 2008 09:33 pm Title: Goodbye to all my yesterdays
I know how hard it is for Pam to do something huge like this...it's probably expecting way too much from her to ask her to talk to Jim about it, too. You really do her character well.
--Strider
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments! I am really glad you like the story! Updates coming soon!! Thanks again!!
Date: March 04, 2008 09:28 pm Title: Time For A Fresh Start...
Poor Pam...the tables have really turned, haven't they? She's in exactly the same position Jim used to be in, having to watch her with Roy.
Strider
Date: March 04, 2008 09:25 pm Title: Prologue
Great beginning...tension, angst, disappointment...it gives us something to hope for!
Strider
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 09:46 am Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....
“Yup…I am a regular Matt Foley…living in a van down by the river.” A+ for the Chris Farley reference--love it : ) Really good chapter.
Date: March 03, 2008 11:18 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....
This story continues to draw me in! I get super excited when I see an update! Is Jim going to come to New York to see Fancy New New York-Style Pam? Maybe her new sophistication will surpass Karen's?
Date: March 03, 2008 10:56 pm Title: The one thing that I tried to hold on to.....
I'm just going to take some time to say...I love this story! It is great how Pam is going out and doing things on her own and I love how Jim emailed her...I can't wait till you update with Jim's response.
Date: February 29, 2008 01:57 pm Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
I just discovered your story today and read it all in one sitting. I'm really enjoying it! I love seeing Pam with mousse in her hair, developing some new confidence. I also like the idea of maybe she and Jim being honest with each other, even if it is by e-mail. Sometimes it's easier to be honest and open when there's some distance between you. I see this chapter as a possible turning point for Jim & Pam -- if Pam decides to write back and say something meaningful, that is!
Long story short, I think it is better than decent, and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: February 29, 2008 05:13 am Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
aww...soo good...glad he finally emailed her...can't wait for more!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 11:07 pm Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
This is one of my favorite stories on here! I'm hooked. I can't wait for the next installment.
Date: February 28, 2008 07:44 pm Title: Prologue
Hopefully this will open up the lines of communication and at the very least they can be best friends again. Great update!
Date: February 28, 2008 07:19 pm Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
I love that Jim is taking some initiative.
8 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 05:29 pm Title: Prologue
Still along with the ride and having a good time : )
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2008 05:23 pm Title: So lonely inside, so busy out there
That is such a cute picture of Pam! I am really loving this story and can't wait to read what Pam writes back.
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2008 01:54 pm Title: Better This Way
Please don't leave it like that... to depressing.. maybe a happy ending is in the cards? I like this story so far. Pam in NY and pining jim are always fun.
Author's Response: maybe they'll end up together, maybe they won't! Thanks for the review!
Date: February 24, 2008 09:23 am Title: Better This Way
More, please! I really enjoyed this chapter. I have a soft spot for makeovers : ) Natalee is an interesting character, and Pam's New York story has a lot of potential.
10 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2008 08:10 pm Title: Better This Way
Please, please, please continue! I am loving this story!!
Date: February 23, 2008 07:45 pm Title: Better This Way
a little communication between them would be great. Love the story so far!
Author's Response: The latest chapter was posted and we have communication- a little bit, at least! :) Thanks for your review!
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2008 05:52 pm Title: A New Day is Dawning
Oh, Jim. That's really all I can say about Jim's actions here. But seriously? I love this story. I love Pam going out for the internship and i just...I love it! This is really awesomely written and was the perfect reward for cleaning my room. Keep it up, please! I must know what happens next!
Date: February 20, 2008 05:40 pm Title: A New Day is Dawning
yay for nice digs for Pam - can't wait until she next runs into Jim.... :)
Date: February 20, 2008 05:22 pm Title: A New Day is Dawning
Jims reaction was awesome. And I'm really excited for Pams continuted growth!
Date: February 19, 2008 06:26 am Title: Goodbye to all my yesterdays
Looking forward to Pam's new adventures in the City (all while not forgetting Jim, of course!) :-)
Date: February 18, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Goodbye to all my yesterdays
I love where you are going with this story so much! I'm so excited to see Pam mature and grow into herself without Jim being a heavy factor in the equation. Please put up another chapter!!!!
Date: February 18, 2008 07:29 pm Title: Goodbye to all my yesterdays
I love Pam family stories. I am anxious to see if Pam pulls a Jim and just leaves and how he reacts!
Date: February 18, 2008 05:00 pm Title: Prologue
So good! I can't wait to see how Jim reacts to her leaving.