Date: February 25, 2008 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gorgeous job as usual, unfold. I could really feel the tension in Jim as he realizes time is running out, how he tries to hide it from everyone, including the cameras. Nice AU ending as well.
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2008 05:40 am Title: Chapter 1
This is beautiful. So painful until the very end. i wasn't really expecting a happy ending, but I'm so happy for it. :o) And I love that at the end, it was her laughter that made him feel lighter.
10 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2008 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Love your work, unfold, and this is no exception. Pleasantly surprised by the ending.
Date: February 24, 2008 07:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely! I love the contrast of Jim's bitter, pained, coping laughter throughout versus her happy laughter in the very last line. And I love your AU ending - her simple slightly awkward, "Um, before? I was wrong," and no big explanations or declarations of love, that's just so Pam.
Date: February 23, 2008 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
He lets it out sometimes just to relieve the pressure. It makes him feel lighter for a moment.
I like that.