1 [Report This]Date: April 05, 2022 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
"This was who he loved. Someone that didn’t even love herself. Why would you love someone like that? Especially when the alternative was available. This is the thought that haunted him. This is what he had been asking himself for a week. And the only answer he could come to, the only thing that made sense, was that Jim was the same way. That he didn’t love himself."
Holy fuck. This was good, but WILDLY dark.
Date: July 02, 2008 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Depressing, but extremely well written. Something not many people have explored, which is the darker side of the attraction. It's not all sunshine and roses. Very true to life. I love it.
Date: February 24, 2008 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1
This is very well-written, but I disagree with the sentiment. I think Jim fell in love with Pam for all the reasons he stated in "Booze Cruise." It depresses me to think that he only loves her because he's a glutton for punishment.
Also, is this set before or after "Beach Games?" I'm a bit unsure.