Date: May 25, 2008 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Confessions
Thanks for updating. I've been following this story and enjoying each new chapter.
Author's Response: That's so great to hear! I'm so glad you took the time to review, it really means a lot!
Date: May 22, 2008 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1: Confessions
Very happy for an update from this story. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much khand3stooges!! I'm so glad you're enjoying this!
Date: May 16, 2008 07:35 am Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Hoiiii :D
Wat een vet koel dope leip supervet verhaaltje ! :P
I just cán't wait til the next chapter haha ^^
Ik hoop dat je ook mijn review VERY appreciate muwhahwaha
Groetjes Dé :P HAAH
Author's Response: Ok je bent gek! Maar ja, toch bedankt, ik apprecieer het heel erg ;) Is er niet ook een forum of zo, bij jou rs gebeuren? Lijkt me wel lachen, haha. rnThank you!
Date: April 23, 2008 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
so good...love that they don't move at the end...who were they hiding from??
Author's Response: Aah, maybe you'll find out! I'm so glad you liked it, your reviews are great!
Date: April 23, 2008 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Great job on fixing what i suggested! What i told you about using second person is tough, isn't it? Personally, I hate that rule, but it's only for the better! Haha! I'm looking forward to the next bit!
Author's Response: Yeah, the thing is, in Dutch it's quite common. So whenever i write dutch stories, i can use the second person. So I'm really glad you pointed that out! Thanks again for your help (i really appreciate it, a lot!)and i'll send you the next chapter as soon as possible!
Date: April 23, 2008 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Bring on the next chapter! Great!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll be working on it!
Date: April 23, 2008 07:59 am Title: Chapter 7: Hide and Seek
Hate it???? You kidding?? I love this!! The alone at the zoo thing - really heady, love it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! That's great to hear! I'm really glad you liked it. I'm going to post the next chapter as soon as possible. Should be fun :)rnAnyway, thanks again, your review made me very happy!
Date: March 04, 2008 04:24 am Title: Chapter 5: The tour
This is such a cute story and you're doing a wonderful job. Keep the chapters coming. I can't wait to see where you take Jim and Pam next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It's great! And I finally uploaded the sixth chapter, so I hope you'll enjoy it :D Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2008 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1: Confessions
Hey babez ^^
Erg goed, wnnr ga je je volgende verhaaltje plaatsen ga ik die ook lezen :P
Je gaat zo hard een goed cijfer halen voor dat nl essay :o
Nja nu ga ik ff wis b2 proberen te begrijpen ofzo, heb vlg. week woe. een pw =/
XXX voor de geniale schrijfster :P
Author's Response: Haha, dankjewel! Waarschijnlijk het enige Nederlands wat hier op de site te vinden is :P Ik laat het je wel weten als ik weer een nieuw verhaal heb! rnIn ieder geval leuk dat je het hebt gelezen, en je, al dan niet beloofde reactie!
Date: March 03, 2008 07:18 am Title: Chapter 5: The tour
Very cute!
8 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2008 06:38 am Title: Chapter 5: The tour
Such fun : )
7 [Report This]Date: March 01, 2008 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1: Confessions
"He hated Roy, he hated cruises, he hated how he loved the way her hair was blowing in the wind."
That was an awesome line.
Congrats on your first fanfic! I love that you're a fan from the Netherlands and can work on improving your English while giving us new stories to read. Welcome!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's a really fun way to improve my english :P But I also just love to write and since there's no Dutch fanfic site like this one, I have to adjust a little ;) Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: February 29, 2008 07:16 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
great job...it has gotten better each time...i can't wait for more...love it
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I'll have a beta reader before I upload the next chapter. So I hope there won't be ANY grammar errors next time. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!! :D
8 [Report This]Date: February 29, 2008 06:53 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
So sweet. What a nice surprise.
Date: February 29, 2008 05:24 am Title: Chapter 4: The surprise
Hey! I like this story and where it seems to be going! I have a few suggestions though, they are mostly grammer.
If you would like me to beta for you a bit to where i could point out some suggestions before you post them, then just email me at rawrrxxmattie@aim.com
8 [Report This]Date: February 27, 2008 06:11 am Title: Chapter 3: Pancakes and a deal
You're doing a fine job.
Author's Response: Thank you :) I really appreciate you're reading my story :) Because sometimes I can get a little frustrated if I don't know how to say something in english, you know. Just because I really never speak english except in my english class ;) So, thanks again and I'll do the best I can.
10 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 10:12 am Title: Chapter 2: An unexpected visitor
Great Start. I hope Pam and Roy broke up for good. Can't wait to see where you go with this. :)
Date: February 26, 2008 10:08 am Title: Chapter 2: An unexpected visitor
I like the basis I always wished he had said something at the booze cruise. Can't wait to see where you're gonna take this!!
8 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 09:38 am Title: Chapter 2: An unexpected visitor
What a pleasant surprise! Nice job.
Date: February 26, 2008 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1: Confessions
I really like it. Hope you countinue.
8 [Report This]Date: February 26, 2008 06:14 am Title: Chapter 1: Confessions
Great job! If you didn't mention that you didn't speak English regularly, I never would have known. Looking forward to seeing this story progress.