1 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2018 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! These “getting in their head” pieces are so enjoyable especially when written as thoroughly as you have!
1 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2018 05:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this! These “getting in their head” pieces are so enjoyable especially when written as thoroughly as you have!
Date: October 17, 2011 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Different from what you write but still very great. And actually each section follows with the next one chronologically and logically if you know what I meant. I love Creed's thought most. That's why Ryan invited Toby :)
8 [Report This]Date: March 15, 2008 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
So funny, especially Creed's section - you did a great job with him! I loved his thoughts that Jim had done Karen in and that he may have met Pam before in Honduras!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so imporessed at how you've gotten inside the minds of these peripheral characters! Excellent job.
--Strider
Date: March 07, 2008 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was awesome. And Ryan is a jerk. :)
Date: March 05, 2008 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is fantastic. especially the creed section. spot on!
8 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this, pure and simple. I think it's so easy to get some of the beloved eccentric Office characters so wrong. Often times, authors can totally get one but then will be way off with another and turn them into a caricature. Not this story. As I was reading on, I kept waiting for the next character's voice to be just wrong (imo), whether it was that Meredith seemed to drink for no reason, Creed was crazy for the sake of crazy or Kelly, Dwight or Angela was just plain unreasonably impossible. Instead, what I found was that each of them were carefully crafted and slightly understated. I was able to feel empathy for them and they felt human. There was a reason that Meredith drank. Creed seems crazy, but there's a odd logic behind what he says. There's an underlying sympathy and kindness to Kelly. And Dwight and Angela also have their tender and vulnerable sides.
Very well done.
10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2008 10:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Steph, absolutely loved this story. You made me laugh out loud more than once. Great job.