Date: May 30, 2008 06:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice finish, MA. Proposal stories never get old. This version of 'stealing thunder' is much more palatable than the one we got served a few weeks ago.
Date: March 09, 2008 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's not your fault, BA. I blame Jim.
Date: March 08, 2008 06:15 am Title: Chapter 2
*thud* That is one hell of a breakfast in bed.
Author's Response: I don't know what's wrong with me....I can't get my mind out of the gutter where Jim and Pam are concerned. I try and think dialogue and story development but my fingers betray me and type smut instead!
Date: March 07, 2008 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
I have to admit that was pretty hot. Great writing!
Author's Response: It was a tad steamy...it's fine when you are in the middle of writing the smut but then when you finish and read it back cold, it's a little disconcerting. Still, my mind wandered there and as I am a slave to instinct, I wrote it all down. ;)
Date: March 07, 2008 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
total awesomeness :) Great job!
Author's Response: Hey Kerber1920, thanks for your review. Chapter 3 is in the pipeline and I hope to be finished sometime next week. If only I didn't have to earn a living I could stay at home and write 'Jim and Pam speak' all day. Hmmpff
Date: March 07, 2008 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review bootyz30. Chapter 2 is up now and I have also posted part one of my first story, 'Defining Moments' if you're intersted. :)
8 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2008 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL...I hope he came over to her house!
--Strider
Author's Response: Hey Strider, chapter 2 is up now and of course he came to her house! Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the next instalment.
Date: March 06, 2008 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story! You are doing a great job, and I think how you portray the awkwardness between Jim and Pam regarding the status of their relationship is a realistic approach. I would love to read another chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks apend. It was hard to imagine how to have Pam and Jim start the story apart given the way that the season 3 finale played out and so I borrowed from some of that episode and then altered the end to try and set a foundation on which to build. I'm kind of blundering through this story and so plan to write a total of three chapters. Hope you enjoy the rest of it.
10 [Report This]Date: March 06, 2008 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so far, especially the last few lines. Can't wait for an update. There will be updates, right?
Author's Response: Hey Annika - thanks for the review. Chapter 2 is up now. It's kind of racy and so please be warned. GULP!
Date: March 06, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this, totally seems like them to second guess themselves. You are very talented and update soon! Unless this is a one shot??
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review JamLover101 - I had intended that the story span 3 chapters and so chapter 2 is up now. Would be great to know what you think?
Date: March 06, 2008 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Don't leave up hanging to long. This is really good!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing khand3stooges. Hope you like the next chapter. :)
Date: March 06, 2008 08:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Jim had better have sobered up enough to be getting into his Saab right this minute and driving to Pam's.
BTW -- love your username. I adore Margaret Atwood!
Author's Response: Thanks so much lisahoo for reviewing my little story. You put your words out there and are never sure if people are going to come back and tell you to take a hike. Thankfully, people have been kind and so I felt brave enough to post a second chapter. Be warned, smut ensues... Re the username - I also love Margaret Atwood (I guess that was somewhat obvious though!)I'm reading Cat's Eye at the moment and I keep asking myself why it has taken me so long to get round to it.rnrnThanks again.
Date: March 06, 2008 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow this is a great story! I loved the email technique you used. And the bit with Pam imagining her "date" as Jim was really effective and cool. Are you going to continue this, or is it meant as a one-shot type thing?
Author's Response: Thanks nandance - you are officially my first reviewer! I really appreciate you taking the time to respond to my story. I had intended that the story would span three chapters and so Chapter 2 is up now. I hope you like it. Smut ensues and so be warned.