Date: March 22, 2008 06:06 am Title: Peeping Pam
So very, verrrry well done! You did such a wonderful job of capturing the underlying sexual tension that permeated their journey to finding one another. And I agree with SeluciaV about what the experience of finding her way to Jim meant to Pam on her own, personal level. Again, such a thoroughly enjoying story to read.
Author's Response: Thanks Mr Bill! Glad you enjoyed it and thanks so much for your review!
8 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2008 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
Steamy and sweet and fabulous -- just the perfect sort of ending for your lovely story! I think what I love the most is how being with Jim has liberated Pam, not just sexually (although who could blame the girl) but emotionally as well. It's made her more demanding and demonstrative and that is absolutely wonderful.
Closing the tale with the "up in Jim's room" line was a really nice touch. Bravo!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I think we all need to be "liberated" by Jim ;-) Sexually, emotionally -- whatever it takes! Anyway, thanks for your comments -- I really appreciate you taking the time!
Date: March 21, 2008 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 14
Aww, I was wondering if Pam would fess up. Also loved the callback to "The Fight".
Nice way to wrap up this steamy little journey, wendolf!
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought maybe Jim would like that naughty peeping side of Pam ;-) Thanks for the review -- glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2008 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Loved this story, wendolf, from start to finish. Fun and sexy and awesome. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for all your comments!
Date: March 21, 2008 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, yum. (How very articulate ;-) For me, there's smut - nothing wrong with that; and there's smut with heart and intimacy. That's a whole 'nother thing. And this was redolent with that. Really like how you described their incidental comfort with each other at the beginning of this chapter and Pam's sense of How did I get here? Exactly, I think, how she'd feel. Also, liked how you came full circle to end up in Jim's room. Lovely and warm and sexy and full of feeling - sustaining that for so many chapters is impressive (more than I'd attempt, lol.) Well done.
Author's Response: Ah, Colette. I always love a review from you. Not only do I respect your opinion so much (because I love, love, LOVE all of your writing), but you give specifics that really help and build confidence. Thanks so much, as always!
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2008 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 14
oh wendolf, this was fantastic! Sweet and steamy and just wonderful. And a perfect ending! This story was a absolute pleasure to read, and I'm looking forward to any future stories you may write!
Author's Response: Thanks so much ISB! I'm glad you enjoyed it ;-) We'll see if I can come up with any other ideas . . .
Date: March 18, 2008 06:05 am Title: Chapter 13
He's such a sweet boyfriend to buy her a bed. Wow
Author's Response: Yeah, isn't he? My husband (then boyfriend) bought me a bed once and I thought it was sweet . . . so . . . Thanks for your comments!
Date: March 18, 2008 05:24 am Title: Chapter 13
I swear that this is the story that keeps on giving. You've fulfilled my steam needs on a regular basis, wendolf..thank you!
Okay..that sounds bad. You know what I mean. More steam, please.
Author's Response: I know what you mean ;-) Thanks for your comments -- I'm glad I've been able to fill you with steam!
Date: March 17, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh man, you write so well. Your details and metaphors, especially in the beginning, are excellent. Hah, I only wish sex was actually like that.
Author's Response: Thanks Tiny! Your comments are much appreciated! Yeah . . . that's the benefit of reading smut vs. actual sex -- smut is always satisfying ;-)
Date: March 17, 2008 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
I need a new bed. ;-)
Author's Response: Nah, you just need a Jim ;-) Don't we all?! Thanks for your comments!
Date: March 17, 2008 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 13
This just made Monday bearable.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad I could help...
Date: March 17, 2008 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 13
This story is like MY crack, so it would seem we are at an impasse! =) Update soon!
Author's Response: You realize we are each other's enablers, then. ;-) Ah, well. If it ain't broke...rnrnThanks for your comments!
Date: March 17, 2008 11:51 am Title: Chapter 13
Mmm... the sequel "Up in Pam's Room" is quite nice, too. This does help ease the sting of a Monday.
Author's Response: I thought about that, too, lisa! The two of them in any room is hot, no? ;-) Thanks for the comments!
Date: March 17, 2008 11:43 am Title: Chapter 13
Yowza...note to self...do not read at work while in a long sleeve shirt and drinking coffee. That DEFINITELY brightened my Monday!
Author's Response: Hope I didn't stain your shirt! ;-) Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2008 11:19 am Title: Chapter 13
What a delightful post-lunch treat! Keep going, girl!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! I'll try.... Thanks for your comments!
Date: March 17, 2008 11:17 am Title: Chapter 13
Ohhh this totally made my Monday -- awesome job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!!!
Date: March 16, 2008 07:44 pm Title: Peeping Pam
Wow. I intended to read this eventually, but hadn't gotten to it. Then I happened to be looking at the 'most recent' page, and saw the interesting summary again, and thought "well, I'll just take a peek." Yowza. ;)
You've done a really good job capturing everyone. I also really like stories that show a different way things could have gone, if only there had been a change. I think it would have been very interesting if the actual show had gone this way, with Jim sticking with the relationship with Katy. It's typical for people to hang on for a while, even if it's not the right relationship, and I think that would have been more likely with Jim and Katy than the way it went on the show.
Anyway (I ramble) -- really good job. I enjoyed it quite a bit.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your comments... always, always welcome.
Date: March 15, 2008 08:01 am Title: Peeping Pam
Absolutely love everything about this story!!!!!
Author's Response: Gee, thanks! So glad you liked it ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2008 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yay! There is a shortage of JIm/Pam steam that takes place in a kitchen. I don't know why this bothers me...anyways, I LOVE this ! Another brilliant chapter my dear. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, why is that? Don't people do it in the kitchen anymore ;-) Thanks for your comments!
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2008 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 12
Very cute chapter!
Date: March 14, 2008 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
Sqqqqqqqqquuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Keep going! Keep going! (TWSS)
Date: March 14, 2008 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 12
“Pam, I’ve been doing it for three years. I’ve got the normal act down.” Don't we know it!
Mark had better invest in some ear plugs.
Author's Response: Thanks lisahoo (I used your ear plug suggestion in the story ;-)! As always, I appreciate all your comments!
Date: March 14, 2008 02:00 pm Title: Peeping Pam
Argghhhh! Okay, so I'm just now starting this story, and it's so freaking hot and awesome...BUT my husband's gonna be home any minute, and we're going out to dinner.... (You know you've written a damn good first chapter when your readers want to put real life on hold...indefinitely.) :o)
Seriously -- love the premise of this, because it's so true. And you're really capturing all their voices -- love bemused!Jim and drunk!Katy. The booty call line made me laugh right out loud.
Sorry for the Kelly-esque review. :o) I'm just thrilled at the prospect of reading the rest of the chapters....
Author's Response: Thanks girl! That's quite a compliment (although I feel like I put my life on hold every time I sit down at the computer ;-). Hope you enjoy the next chapters . . . your husband might benefit from the end ones, if you know what I mean. Thanks for your comments!
Date: March 14, 2008 11:31 am Title: Chapter 11
fjhbjdhsbjh!!!! I love this story. You're scarily good at writing smut.
Author's Response: Don't know what fjhbjdhsbjh means, but thanks! I'm glad I have a talent in that department ;-)
Date: March 14, 2008 09:26 am Title: Chapter 9
AHHH!!! I'm scared to press next!! Wait .. no I'm not ... why am I stalling?!!