10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2008 04:55 am Title: Chapter 11
Good GOOD morning to you, wendolf! You are starting my day on such a happy note. This was simply perfect. I agree wtih your thoughts on their morning-after conversation, but, the way you wrote this, I actually COULD envision this taking place. It had that perfect touch of awkward.
If I were a cat, she thought, I’d be purring. Yeah, Pam--me, too : )
Author's Response: Glad I could start your day off right ;-) Thanks so much for your comments . . . I'm glad you thought the post-sex conversation worked okay -- I was torn between writing believable and writing what's more fun to read. So glad it was successful!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
Sooo ummm...those were some amazing chapters there!!! I am totally ok with suspending reality for that!!
Author's Response: Thanks Pamma! Suspended reality can be good sometimes. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 10:14 pm Title: Peeping Pam
ITA w/ Vampiric Blood. No WAY can there just be one more chapter. It is too good and way too hot to stop now. Whew. Why is DH out of town when I need him....
Author's Response: Thanks, Bros! I'm just getting around to catching up on reviews, and I appreciate your taking the time!
Date: March 13, 2008 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 10
That was hot! Update soon!
Author's Response: THANKS! Glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 11
No, no, no! There MUST be more than one more chapter! (Unless you have the next story started already, and then it's ok! I love your stories! Your characterizations & plots are so good!)
Author's Response: Thanks VB! I hope to wrap this one up soon and get a new one going . . . we'll see! Thanks so much for your comments!
Date: March 13, 2008 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh sweet jeebus. That ought to give me some sweet dreams.
And Pam was a little embarrassed, but come ON! She'd get over whatever her hangups were with Jim in the bed beside her.
Thanks for blowing off work today to entertain me ;o)
Author's Response: I think we'd all get over our hangups to be in bed with Jim. ;-) Glad I could entertain you (I was happy to blow off work, truth be told). You rock!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
Did I mention this story made me cry?
and THAT'S when i know this is a WONDERFUL story. bravo. <3
Author's Response: Really? Well, that's a bonus! LOVE making people cry ;-) Glad you enjoyed this, MelissaKras. Sorry I'm so slow with my response...
Date: March 13, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 10
another oh wow yay! :)
Author's Response: oh wow thanks! Really appreciate your reading!
Date: March 13, 2008 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 11
oh...my...wow...fantastically wonderfully yummy!
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks, kerber! Glad you liked it!
Date: March 13, 2008 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
wow just wow...........................I need a cold shower.
more more more!!!
Author's Response: Yay! Love it when people have to go cool off after reading. Quite a compliment. Thanks, bee sly! Sorry I've been remiss in my responding. Just way behind, lately...
8 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 07:07 pm Title: Peeping Pam
I was going to wait till this was finished to read it, but after seeing the number of reviews climb, I figured I'd better read it now! Awesome beginning. Giving Katy more of a presence is a great idea, especially when it leads to jealous Pam.
Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar! I'm very slow on responding to reviews, but I really appreciate them and read them all as they come in. So thanks so much!
Date: March 13, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow, I'm fanning myself here. Great stuff!
Author's Response: That's my goal, Cathy! Have 'em get the fans out ;-) Glad you enjoyed this. (Sorry I'm so slow to respond...)
Date: March 13, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
you are seriously my new favorite person in the world. If I had read this pre-steam I could have given you some coherant thoughts about the story, but alas, broken brain.
I'll try again later :o)
Author's Response: Thanks PamPong! That's so nice! If your brain gets unbroke, more comments are always welcome ;-)
Date: March 13, 2008 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yayyyyy!!!! The smut finally! Haha well I shouldn't really say finally, because you've been an awesomely fast updater and I liked the build of the chapters up to this point. Really, really great writing. I was so happy when he told her he loved her :)
Author's Response: Thanks nandance! Glad you enjoyed this! Sorry I'm so slow in responding, but I truly appreciate you review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
“Is this . . . are you sure . . .” he whispered, looking at her.
She nodded.
“Because I’m in love with you.” His voice was so low, not quite a whisper. “And if we do this . . . I can’t go back.”
This just killed me. Oh Wendolf.
Author's Response: Thanks Annika ;-) You've always been my biggest flan!
Date: March 13, 2008 04:11 pm Title: Peeping Pam
O.....kay....that was....nice. I mean verrry nice! Whew...just catching my breath a bit. Do you think that's what Jim really meant by "a happy place"? Makes me hope that someday we'll actually get to see some of the real fiery passion we all know these two have for one another...that would be such a gift! Thanks for giving us this glimpse.
Author's Response: Mr Bill, I am so with you on wanting to see a little passion, let me tell you. Glad I could help in the meantime... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 13, 2008 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
You are so awesome. And I'd probably feel dirty if I was writing this stuff with kids in the next room too. But it was totally worth it, so I thank you for muddling through the awkward!
Author's Response: Ah, they had no idea. Kids are oblivious like that . . . Thanks for reading and reviewing -- sorry I was so slow to respond -- I'm a bit behind!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh......................god.
Author's Response: Great review! ;-) Thanks for reading -- really appreciate it!
Date: March 13, 2008 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 10
On the fly here, but had to tell you - these three words: “Now stop talking” coming from Jim, then, was sexier than ten lines of contrived sexy-talk. Love their candor about how long they've wanted each other, their humor even in this situation...very them and hot as a very hot thing. You have a knack, my friend ;-)
Author's Response: Okay, I'm not one to usually like my own writing, but I am particularly proud of that bit. I like . . . intense? forceful? Casino-Night-kiss Jim ;-) Glad you liked it, too. Thanks, as always, for your comments Colette! Means a ton!
Date: March 13, 2008 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
aw ): so clueless you are, pam!
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 10
PLEASE another chapter or two to wrap things up. I want to hear them reveling in their newfound love. This is my favorite of your stories, which is really saying something. Lovely!
Author's Response: Ah, grapejelly. Glad you liked this one. Thanks so much for your review -- sorry I'm so slow in responding . . . very behind.
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 02:00 pm Title: Peeping Pam
Whew. That was good. So good, and so worth the wait. I loved Jim whispering that he can't go back. I also love that Pam went to him in this fic. He's always chasing her in most stories - it's nice to see her be the aggressor for once.
Great job, wendolf!
Author's Response: Thanks, kells! I agree . . . I'm tired of always seeing Jim as the chaser. It's nice to have Pam do a little pursuing of her own. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Sorry I'm so slow getting back to you...
Date: March 13, 2008 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh, goodness! You wrote this at work! *fans self*
I'm glad that Jim made sure Pam knew what the stakes were. "And if we do this . . . I can’t go back." *thud*
Oh, and I'm glad Pam made the first move. Way to go, girl! It just makes sense with this whole tale being from her POV. Nice job.
Author's Response: Oh, Jim. We can't go back either. You've ruined us. Seriously. Anyhoo, Lisahoo, thanks for your reviews! Sorry I'm so slow in responding. Need to work on that...
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
OH. MY. GOD. SO HOT!!! If I were at home, I think I would need a cold shower. Wow. That was worth the wait, sister. And in the midst of all the hottness (yup, it's now a word) and tension and antici....pation, we get this little gem: “Well . . . yeah. Isn’t it for you?” She tried really hard to keep a straight face, but something gave her away...Jim shook his head. “That was just mean.”
Boy was that ever a satisfying read ; )
Author's Response: Those two kids . . . always pranking. Glad you enjoyed that, Nan! Sorry for the slow response, though. I'm WAY behind...
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
YOU ARE SOOOOOO MEAN!!!!!!