9 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2008 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Two
Hahaha! I realy enjoy this story! Another great chapter...can't wait for more!
Date: March 12, 2008 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ok, so you know how MTT logs you out after a few weeks or so automatically? Well for the past week I've been too lazy to log in to review stories, but your reference to Sweet Valley High just undid that. So congratulations. Great story, great chapter. Looking forward to more!
Date: March 12, 2008 11:55 am Title: Chapter One
Very entertaining and an interesteing way to view Jim and Pam's story....but, that finger in the mouth thing...where'd that come from...stuff like that would never happen in real life, right? (wink, wink!)
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2008 10:22 am Title: Chapter Two
haha this had me laughing the whole time. i am really enjoying this so far, nice incorporation of the finger in mouth story LOL
this line (actually, lines):
"Or sit there and pine for a girl who's getting married whenever her fiancée learns how to read a calendar."
"I really, really wish you were adopted."
my fave in the whole chapter.
cant wait for more :)
Date: March 12, 2008 09:55 am Title: Chapter Two
That is too, too funny. Their interactions are hysterical!
8 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 04:10 pm Title: Chapter One
HA! I love it. I do think an essential MTT Jon issue is who you think he looks like, though, so please share!
"a little touched or something..." I literally laughed out loud at this and "You are the fisherman" HEE!
8 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 02:23 pm Title: Chapter One
I really like this. Very interesting idea! Are you gonna go all the way up to the present?? You definitly should!
Date: March 11, 2008 01:48 pm Title: Chapter One
I love this idea. You're off to a great start. Can't wait to see what other conversations you come up with.
Date: March 11, 2008 12:21 pm Title: Chapter One
This is a GREAT new idea for a story! Awesome start!
Date: March 11, 2008 10:47 am Title: Chapter One
That was super cute! I
Author's Response: Thank you! It's goign to be alot of dialogue but I'm going to try to keep it up!
9 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 10:47 am Title: Chapter One
Fun idea, Binx! Great dialog, very natural.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Seeing as I'm a girl with no brothers... I'm going to try to keep it like to brothers talking. Let's see how that works...lol!