6 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2008 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your first story. Nice but sad take on the 55 word challenge. You really are living in the moment if you haven't seen S3 yet. Buckle up, it's going to be a bumpy ride!
PS I added the MTT disclaimer
Author's Response: Thanks for adding that-- I'll try to make sure I get it from now on. I've gotten Season 3, and I'm up to Phyllis' wedding...rnrn--Strider
Date: March 18, 2008 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good job, Strider! You captured it!
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate that! Thanks for reviewing!rnrn--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2008 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Heart wrenching, and so well written for 55 words. Excellent work!
Author's Response: Thanks, it felt like a heart-wrenching moment. I'm glad I got that across! Thanks for reviewing! --Strider
Date: March 12, 2008 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hey, you posted! I'm glad you got it all figured out, because this is really good! And I love that you're still in this moment. That's a really unique perspective for a fic writer, since most of us came into the story at different points, and generally it was after this. Anyway, nicely done! I hope you keep writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am working on a longer fic, but I never post my fics until I'm within sight of being done--I learned the hard way that if the muse leaves me, I'll leave people hanging! I've done a lot of fanfic, but this is my first foray into the Office world--I'm so excited! Thanks for reviewing!rnrn--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2008 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
55 words packed with punch! You did a great job describing what Jim must have been feeling. I love 55-word fics!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's a great writing discipline, but hard! Thanks for reviewing! --Strider