Date: March 23, 2008 09:47 pm Title: some people might call us a family
I'm loving this story. I like the way it's only Franny who captured Jim's heart first. And that Pam isn't the perfect mother.
I hope Jim doesn't pull away from them when he realises he forgot his wife's birthday...
Can't wait until the next chapter!!
Date: March 23, 2008 09:43 pm Title: some people might call us a family
aww...so cute...can't wait to see them with the rest of the fam...
Date: March 23, 2008 07:12 pm Title: some people might call us a family
I am SO GLAD you added a chapter. I have been checking this site like 10 times a day to see when this story is updated. I love it!!!! Please post more chapters soon!
10 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2008 06:07 pm Title: some people might call us a family
Yay! I was hoping you'd update soon. I'm so loving this story. Watching Jim opening up and letting himself feel again is amazing. I'm really glad the date with Toby didn't go well! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: March 23, 2008 05:31 pm Title: some people might call us a family
Another great chapter. I love this story because it's so different. Looking forward (I think) to hearing more about Jim's past.
Date: March 23, 2008 05:27 pm Title: some people might call us a family
Oh, JIM. I'm happy for him in a way, though. It means that he is letting himself move on. I love all the ways that they are casually domestic already.
8 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 08:41 pm Title: stains of our past
I like how the chapter title related to the stain on Pam's shirt and also to their pasts. This is a great idea for a story and I enjoyed reading about them meeting each other. How sad that poor Jim is missing his wife so and not being able to move on yet.
8 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 10:50 am Title: she has your hair
I really enjoyed this chapter- more Jim and Franny(aka Frank) it was sooooo adorable- and very Jim. I like that he is relating to both of them not just Pam, and it seems like you are heading toward having him admit his love for Franny first. At least that's my hope! I'm really curious to see what happens next and if he will give himself permission to move on.
8 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 10:50 am Title: she has your hair
I really enjoyed this chapter- more Jim and Franny(aka Frank) it was sooooo adorable- and very Jim. I like that he is relating to both of them not just Pam, and it seems like you are heading toward having him admit his love for Franny first. At least that's my hope! I'm really curious to see what happens next and if he will give himself permission to move on.
Date: March 19, 2008 10:29 am Title: stains of our past
I get very excited when I see you have updated this one. I really like the slow progression of their friendship. Really great!
9 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 09:54 am Title: she has your hair
I'm loving this..Keep in coming..
10 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 07:02 am Title: stains of our past
I love this. You're letting us get to know the characters without making it too melodramatic. I love the way they're cautiously unfolding for each other. Can't wait for more.
Date: March 19, 2008 06:35 am Title: she has your hair
I love this. I'm so invested in it. You're tugging at my heartstrings, italianfood.
Date: March 19, 2008 04:34 am Title: she has your hair
aww...they finally are starting to open up...can't wait for more (especially a date!!)
10 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2008 02:19 am Title: she has your hair
This story is amazing. Franny sounds so cute! I want to hold her! lol, ok wow I'm such a girl...
Date: March 19, 2008 01:09 am Title: she has your hair
This is very well written - I was a bit weary of the premise of this story at first, but I'm on board for thr ride now. Keep em' coming!
Date: March 18, 2008 11:25 pm Title: she has your hair
I just slow this slow-going blossoming romance. It is really lovely to read about. Great descriptive work!
Date: March 18, 2008 11:03 pm Title: she has your hair
italianfood, I've read this one since the beginning (not that it's that long, but got excited to see a new story from you because I like your other one). This chapter brought tears to my eyes. I've been on the verge with the other chapters. Am glad to hear that a date is on the horizon and that they'll both find some happiness. Can't wait for more.
Date: March 18, 2008 05:49 am Title: Little Beesly
"that was so sweet of Jim. He's such a gentleman.
Date: March 17, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Little Beesly
Oh, I liked Jim meeting Little Beesly! Can't wait to see what happens next ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2008 04:51 pm Title: Little Beesly
This story is really cute. I love Francesca, the way you described her she sounded adorable. I can't wait until the next chapter!
Date: March 17, 2008 01:14 pm Title: Little Beesly
Oh, the stuff with Megan makes me so sad :( But I do liek their growing friendship!
Date: March 17, 2008 01:13 pm Title: Little Beesly
Aw, I really like this story. It's nice to see an alternate reality and that Pam & Jim are always drawn to each other.
Date: March 17, 2008 07:11 am Title: Little Beesly
I have this feeling that you're going to wind up making me cry, italianfood. Despite that, I'm really enjoying this : )
Date: March 17, 2008 06:03 am Title: Little Beesly
aww...loved it and glad that he finally asked her if she wants a ride...and of course the baby sounds sooo cute!! can't wait for more