10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 08:56 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.
The only thing bad about this story is I can't imagine you topping it. =/
Date: April 14, 2008 08:42 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Stablergirl...here's the thing. You are somehow able to make me feel SO many different emotions in one chapter of this story, and this chapter was certainly no exception to that. I went from fanning myself to laughing out loud with every other paragraph or sentence even. You have this whole writing thing down to a science. Don't stop.
Date: April 14, 2008 07:42 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Wow. This is funny and torrid and touching all at once. I love these characters you've created.
Oh, and the picture is ABSOLUTELY spot on. Good catch by Wendolf! That is the Jim in this story!
Date: April 14, 2008 07:35 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Sugar Honey Ice Tea! That was good... times like, a thousand!
Date: April 14, 2008 06:40 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Every time I'm on the internet (which is a lot, it has to be said) I literally refresh the Most Recent page on MTT every ten minutes to see if you've updated this story. No joke. I am totally and completely obsessed with it! It has absolutely everything - real feeling and emotion, an amazing plot, engaging characters, humour, angst, wonderful prose, fantastic imagery, and now... JAM smut!!
What more could a girl ask? ;)
Please update soon - you know that both of them have been dreaming about that counter...
Date: April 14, 2008 06:31 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
o my god! this is super fantastic!!!
Date: April 14, 2008 04:46 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Yeah... another fabulous Famous update! Beyond hot! And thank you for the link to the yummy scruffy!Jim picture...made my night :)
Date: April 14, 2008 04:37 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Hallelujah - new chapter! It's not just you - it's definitely getting fun! I adored hearing Pam's POV this chapter and getting some more insight into her brain. She is too funny. I especially like this PamThought: "Either way, she’d thought she was finished. She was somebody else starting right then. Somebody different." Damn.
In other news, I don't know if this is kosher, but another reviewer put it perfectly and this chap really confirms, so I thought I would quote their review which shows your genius: "Pam, a very rational being, is suddenly faced with something that's completely out of her control whereas Jim, who's usually very irrational, for once feels something that makes sense to him."
Thanks for the update - four days really does feel like forever when it comes to this story!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 03:48 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Oh...My...Freaking...God!! I can't write a review right now. I'm just too ahhhhhhhhh! I love this story. Please update soon. I will come back and write a good review soon.
Date: April 14, 2008 02:53 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Beautiful. I LOVE the very end-- Jim possibly overhearing "are you having penis thoughts?" is fab. How would he react to knowing that Pam regularly has Jim-centric "penis thoughts?"
Please don't make us wait so long for another update!
Date: April 14, 2008 02:46 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.
I am with the Nan & Wen-Lord, Beer me Strenght! Thankyou, Thankyou, Thankyou for finally posting a new chapter....You must keep it up-Your fans have spoken!
Date: April 14, 2008 02:46 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
I should have known I was in trouble by the author's notes: This one's lengthy. Enjoy it. Just a big 'ol dangling TWSS, aren't you Stablergirl?
I'm surprised Pam remembered how to dial the phone. And who wouldn't have penis thoughts? I don't know how you managed to write hot and awkwardly funny & embarrassing into the same chapter, but you did. You ROCK.
Date: April 14, 2008 02:25 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
AH!! oh god please give us some hot morning bathroom sex. i love heather.. I'd be rambling just like her..
""Is he standing right there? Is he naked? Are you having penis thoughts? Pam?"Heather fires the questions rapidly"
and this
"All he's wearing is a pair of black boxers"
.. hot. bravo!
Author's Response: right? who wouldn't be rambling?! I'd be like demanding to know every single detail. Also, who doesn't love Jim in black boxers...right? Right. ;-)
Date: April 14, 2008 02:24 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
*Response from pile of ash formerly known as NanReg: Bartender! Start a tab!*
Author's Response: LOL it's alive ;-)
Date: April 14, 2008 02:17 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
I'm loving every second of this!
Author's Response: thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 02:01 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
I suppose this doesn't belong in the review area but . . . I'll take a beer, Nan! My mouth has suddenly become awfully dry upon reading about Jim in his black boxers and saying stuff like, "I need this off." Yowza.
Author's Response: since I can respond and Nan can't, I will take it upon myself to say: Beer me.
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 01:53 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
This one's lengthy. Enjoy it. TWSS!!!
Author's Response:
LOL you said it, not me ;-)
Date: April 14, 2008 01:43 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Holy Moses! All this talk of peni and baguettes. This, on top of wendolf's numbers story. I'm feeling a wee bit faint. Must read again. Now. Oh, and by the way, that is one of my favorite photos. Man, you and wendolf, stablergirl--the two of you are trying to kill me. I wish I could buy you each a beer right now. I need a beer right now. Since I'm virtually incoherent right now--AT WORK BY GOD--I think you may have a bit of an idea of how much I'm loving this update without my even telling you. Proceed...SOON, damnit! Like NOW, TONIGHT. *NanReg has spontaneously combusted*
Author's Response:
oh shit, sorry about that. I'll call the paramedics in the form of another chapter asap. I'll also talk to wendolf and see what I can do...
And who doesn't need a beer? I mean, really?
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 01:41 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Wow. Just awesome.
Author's Response: thank you!!!
Date: April 14, 2008 01:39 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.
I have to say, I think this may go down in history as like the best story ever? Just thought you should know. Don't forget us when you're famous!
P.S. - Are you actually an author? Because you should be.
Author's Response: Wow no I'm not, but I'm thinking about it. I'd just have to decide what exactly I want to write about that isn't Jim and Pam. lol. Thank you so much for this review!!! ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 01:38 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Oh, Stablergirl. What you do to me with this story. Seriously. I loved how you kind of faked me out in the beginning and I thought, "She did NOT just skip over the naughty bits, did she?" But then it was all there in glorious flashback. Fantastic. Heather cracked me up. And then just little things like the shout out to the treehouse gang and the baguette and the flash of the muscles of his arms stretched taut against her headboard. Guh. More please. Much, much more of this.
Author's Response: right? a little, hey look over there! action? Kind of fun. anyway glad you liked this one and hopefully there will be a hot and steamy update really soon. Although that depends on when you post an update to something, so, we'll see. it's in your hands, really. ;-)
Date: April 14, 2008 01:31 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
WOW! HOT!
That is really all I can say.....
Author's Response: I think that is wonderfully put!
Date: April 14, 2008 01:23 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
I blurted my tea when I saw this title! And I don't think I've mentioned how much I love all of them. It's so much fun to come here and see each one and this one is so great. I'll be laughing at Pam barking out "Two loaves!" for the rest of the night.
Author's Response:
lol I know!! That's my favorite part, I think. I'm still laughing at it.
Best beta dundie. stat. stat means now.
Date: April 14, 2008 01:17 pm Title: Do you have hot cross buns fresh out of the oven, at all? Or no?
Oh it's most def not just you! I saw an update and got super excited. sad I know, but still. I love it, Jim's "baguette" I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next!! Please don't make me wait forever again!
Author's Response: lol I'll try to make the next update come sooner than four days from now ;-) glad you liked this chapter.
Date: April 14, 2008 08:13 am Title: Some people say I look like Bette Davis.
wow. you're evil. but you're SO good at it.
hot...
ok, i'm done swooning. i love this line: "...because she's never felt quite this brand of good before." seriously? you're just great at this and this story makes me SO happy.
and i definitely can't wait for that next chapter!