Date: March 25, 2008 06:12 am Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
Oh, don't worry about me loving the journey. I love the journey. In fact, my love of the journey is verging on stalker-like. The journey is trying to get a restraining order right now. Don't keep me hanging here, SG...
Date: March 25, 2008 06:10 am Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
by the way...that whitney houston video is amaaaaaaaazing. so is the one where she tells bobby brown to "kiss my ass!"
Date: March 25, 2008 06:06 am Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
ahhhhhhhhhhhh! pam! wow, good stuff! i love that they've had their casino night of sorts, that pam is fighting this with everything in her, not because it's wrong but because she doesn't see how this could have happened. and goooooooood, when they finally get it right, wow, the sparks that will fly...
Date: March 25, 2008 06:05 am Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
aww...so sad...i understand why she did that, but i didn't want her to do it...can't wait for more especially how jim treats her now!!!
Date: March 25, 2008 04:51 am Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
If saving lives were this easy, I'd be a GD surgeon!
Just that little, "I'm gonna go" crushed me. Damage control, Pam! Double time, front and center!
Date: March 25, 2008 02:13 am Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
Oh, Jim, you know what? Fuck Pam. Please. :D
I love this story - I don't think I've ever told you, but I adore the basis and where you're taking the whole thing - the way Pam does not fight what is wrong, but rather is fighting what she thinks she immensely dislikes, and the way this whole thing started from acting but really loathing each other to the core - I don't know, I love it. And the sexual tension is about ten thousand times hotter now, so thank you!
I'm really enjoying this. Can't wait for the not-so-angsty things! Pam has so apologising to do. Or something.
Date: March 25, 2008 12:41 am Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
That was incredibly fantastic. And also waaayy too short, which I'll forgive if you post another chapter soon.
I loved that all of Jim's niceness pushes Pam to explode, and also that she recognizes that she doesn't mean the things she said.
I also loved that nice Jim didn't turn into mean Jim when she said those things to him, because well, that would have ruined all his recent beef 'n cheddar-y goodness. (Forgive me if that sounds dirty... it's very, very late.)
Date: March 24, 2008 11:32 pm Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.
I basically just came to the review page to find a way to... extend the story or something. Like, I'm hanging around the review page, wallowing in the angst and feedback, hoping if I'm here long enough, I'll click the Most Recent link, and you'll have put another chapter up, and I can get another fix... 'Cause I can't last too long between hits, and I'm really wishing we just had you and this story, infinitely, in a little paradise where you just write this ALL.THE.TIME.
Dang, Stablergirl. This is amazing.
Date: March 24, 2008 11:23 pm Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
Stablergirl, I don't think I've ever read a fic that made me so angry at Pam. I hope Jim lets her have it when she goes to him to apologize. She is going to him to apologize right? Preferably at his house? I can't tell you enough how much I am enjoying this story.
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2008 10:55 pm Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
Please tell me you are home now and can update this faster! I need to know what's going on with these two!
Date: March 24, 2008 10:54 pm Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
Wow. I can just FEEL this conversation. Hardcore. "She blinks and she focuses on him, like really looks at him, and she stops breathing because he looks totally…" (this is when I held my breath!!) Are you in non-parent land again?? I am loving the journey!
Date: March 24, 2008 10:49 pm Title: Wait a second, I feel like I've seen this movie before.
Okay, first? I knew if I posted something myself (basically just writing to waste time until you posted another chapter), it would do the trick! Imagine my bliss when I found this just seconds before going to bed.
Second, I will not go into full review detail here because I just read this chapter as fast as I possibly could -- like wolfing down a chocolate bunny after a Lent with no sweets. So I'm going to go to bed now and get up in the morning and enjoy every word slowly. Deliberately. Like really good sex. And then I'll be back to review properly. ;-)
Date: March 24, 2008 02:03 pm Title: Let me finish before you defend yourself, because I need a good forty five minutes to rant.
How could she not indeed? Oh that was a wonderful reaction from Miss Pam Beesley. This is such a fantastic story. I can't say it enough. What a fun thing to catch up on!
Date: March 24, 2008 01:44 pm Title: Earlier, when I was reading Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance, I thought of you.
*squee!* Oh man. Love this Dwight. Love this story. Love "30 percent sure". BWAH!
Date: March 24, 2008 01:16 pm Title: Did you want fries with that?
It's hard to exist. "Situation". Beef - n - cheddar single entendres. Wow. Just wow.
Date: March 24, 2008 01:08 pm Title: It's only awkward if you make it awkward...
Saved and doomed. That's so lovely.
Date: March 24, 2008 12:50 pm Title: Just when I've figured out how to pretend you're out of my system, you show up and I forget.
Penis penis penis penis penis.
HEE!!!
Date: March 24, 2008 12:34 pm Title: So, how many more ways do you think there are for me to screw this up?
How genius is it that Jim called Roy for advice? Man, I love this madness. It's totally compelling.
Date: March 24, 2008 12:08 pm Title: Stand over here, so I don't mix you up with that girl over there.
BWAAHAHAHAA!!! That's awesome. I find it completely believable that a guy like that, just looking to get laid to distract himself, would find in that moment of supreme distraction the truth he's been hiding from.
Date: March 24, 2008 11:47 am Title: Talking is cool, just promise you'll keep it clean.
Ooh I love the fan interactions! The confusion continues...
Date: March 24, 2008 11:24 am Title: Nobody likes a liar, so maybe tomorrow I'll tell you the truth.
Ooh, I love the Omarosa comparison! But even better is the idea of a soap star referring to themselves as a "celebrity". Hee!
Date: March 24, 2008 11:18 am Title: I know I look pale but, seriously, I'm fine.
The interesting thing about this chapter is that it allows you to understand this character with absolutely zero previous show knowledge. In fact, with just the barest reworking, you could probably submit this as unrelated to the show at all.
Date: March 24, 2008 09:04 am Title: Pour me another one cause I'm feeling kind of sick.
Ooh, I love how you're subverting so many of the show's relationships - like having Ryan hero-worshipping Jim. And tantalizing glimpse of Michael Scott! Woo!
Date: March 24, 2008 08:50 am Title: It's not that I hate you, it's just that I hate everything about you.
What a fascinating premise! I love it, too! It's so interesting that Real Pam likes Fake Jim, too. I think you'll be able to do a lot with this one!
Date: March 23, 2008 11:44 pm Title: Let me finish before you defend yourself, because I need a good forty five minutes to rant.
"Like what? Are you ok, Pam?" he asks, and it's genuine. It's a genuine question. She's going to explode with hatred.
So you know you could just go write chick lit. right now, right? You could make actual money doing this. This is just so wonderfully funny. The inner monologues read great and the dialogue is fantastic too. Just great!