10 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2008 05:38 am Title: Here Comes the Bride
Wow, I think the question is: How did you get to be so awesome? I love all of your stories and this one is starting out to be just as great as your previous work.
Author's Response: kcpcr -- gee, thanks! So glad you're enjoying it! I really appreciate your taking the time to comment!
9 [Report This]Date: March 25, 2008 05:14 am Title: Here Comes the Bride
Oooooh... cliffhanger! You'd better update soon - I'll be back from studying later and I'll be hoping to read the next installment... it's a good story!
Date: March 25, 2008 02:43 am Title: Here Comes the Bride
Omigosh, I LOVE THIS. The premise is just great and it's really well-executed. I have to say, I really related to Pam in this chapter. Unfortunately, I too sometimes keep suppressing things until the very last minute when I just burst. So when I was reading this chapter, I gasped right along with Pam and totally had tears in my eyes. I also liked that Pam was kind of relying on Jim not being there, so she could keep herself in denial that this was really changing anything. I hope the next chapter has some of Jim's perspective because I'm dying to know how he's coping with all this! Great work, I can't wait for an update! ...Hopefully soon? :)
Author's Response: Your wish is my command. Kind of alternating POVs in this one ;-) Glad you can relate to Pam (really, who can't, right?). Thanks so much for your comments!
Date: March 24, 2008 11:40 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
Oh lord, oh lord, oh lord. Wendolf, Wendolf, Wendolf -- you just finish one story and then get us all hooked up on another like, the NEXT DAY?! You guys are my favorite kind of pushers. I love it!!
Author's Response: I'd tell you to just say no but . . . that doesn't really work for me. So yes, yes, yes, please keep reading! Thanks for all of your comments!
Date: March 24, 2008 10:39 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
Oh, I really like this premise! You'ce captured Pam's voice very well. I like these little descriptive bits:
"She could follow directions. She’d always been good at that – following what she was supposed to do."
"...the entire office of Dunder Mifflin-Scranton and God."
"She wondered if she had EVER thought for herself."
9 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2008 10:35 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
I really like the premise and the beginning you've written. Can't wait to read the rest!
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2008 10:27 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
Ahhhhhhhh! I love your Season 2 AU fics, and this is no different. Can't wait to see what happens next (though I have an idea). Great stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jordon. Yes, I'm a Season 2 whore -- love that whole year of Jammy goodness, even with the angst. Glad you're enjoying this! Thanks for your comments.
Date: March 24, 2008 10:19 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
This is great. I love how you write, and I love the end.
Author's Response: Thanks, JamLover! Enjoy!
Date: March 24, 2008 10:17 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
I'm excited to see what happens next. Don't take too long.
10 [Report This]Date: March 24, 2008 09:45 pm Title: Here Comes the Bride
Hells Yes! Another Wendolf story! Sorry this wasn't constructive or praising at all. Just needed to get that off my chest!
Author's Response: Hey, always glad to see someone excited about one of my stories! Thanks!