Reviews For June 10th
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Reviewer: a little teapot Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2023 02:32 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

The premise for this story was great and the execution as well. I would say they jumped into the relationship too quickly, but this is Jim and Pam, so they still took too long to get together. BTW, I love that Jim still went on his trip, even if he didn't have a great time.

Thank you for writing and sharing this!

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2021 06:57 pm Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

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Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2021 02:51 pm Title: Housewarming

You capture them SO perfectly. This could totally have happened. You get their banter, their dynamic. It's just so spot on! d84;a039;

Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2021 01:18 pm Title: Give the Girl a Life Saver

I love it.

Reviewer: Foxesjenna42 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 08, 2021 07:21 pm Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Very nice. Just what I needed (to help me sleep, lol). 😉

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 19, 2020 09:50 am Title: Vacation Time

The image of Pam as a crazy lamp lady has stuck with me for a long time.

Reviewer: Kuri333 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06, 2019 05:20 pm Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

I've loved loved loved this fic! All of it!
Thanks for sharing and I'm off to check more of your stuff, so don't get scared if I start appearing like a stalker.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2009 08:21 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

I loved this story!

Reviewer: moonmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2009 12:35 am Title: Midnight Snack

Hi Wendolf! I would like to share with you an exchange I just had with my mother, a fellow mtt devotee, when she recognised the purple screen on my laptop.

"Whatcha reading?"
"June 10th" (muffled by food)
"What? Fume Tent?"
"WHAT? Yes, Fume Tent. Newly single Pam is having her house fumigated and asks to stay with Jim for the duration. Romance ensues. JUNE 10TH!"
"Ohhh!"
(laughter for 5 minutes)
"Tell Wendolf she should write Fume Tent next"

hahahhahahah :D just wanted to share the funny. This story still rocks by the way.

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2008 01:58 pm Title: Keep on Swimming

OK, I think only a fellow stay home mom could truly appreciate the Nemo mantra...

 Oh, and "Oh, he definitely had a gender. And she was pretty sure she had felt it against her hip when he kissed her." is the second best sentence(s) in the history of language!

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2008 01:05 pm Title: State of Arousal

"You’re still an idiot, his penis assured him." -- I think that might be the best sentence in the history of language.

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2008 12:54 pm Title: The Chocolate Whisperer

"Jim shook his head so slightly, such a small movement that if she had looked away even for a moment she would have missed it, and just continued to stare at her. " -- that was just too easy to visualize. You've really done an amazing job with the tension in this story.

Reviewer: pigeon Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13, 2008 11:58 am Title: Ahem...

You have totally grabbed my attention with this story, and I have no choice but to spend the rest of my day reading...

The Budda or Sting line was priceless, and I thought the analogy of the overflowing toilet in the first chapter was really well crafted.  You've set up some beautiful dramatic tension here, and I'm totally hooked.

Reviewer: moonmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2008 11:09 pm Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Oh my god, I can't believe I've been sitting around waiting for this to be updated when you'd already been posted the epilogue and I just didn't realise! Well this was remarkably fluffy, in a very good way. Ahh... reading new material from both you and girl7 on the same day; could life get better? :)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the fluff, moonmouse! Sorry you didn't know about it sooner ;-) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: apple326 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2008 05:24 pm Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Oh. My. God. Best story I've EVER read. You totally have a way with these characters.

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much apple326! That's quite a compliment. So glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Aurorabee Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2008 12:36 pm Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

I loved it -- I love a story that makes me chuckle AND swoon. So awesome. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks Aurorabee! Who doesn't love to chuckle and swoon ;-) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 01:23 pm Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Aw, thanks so much for jeans-clad-barefoot Jim!  You're shout out beyond made my week.  You rock, this story rocks, it all just rocks!  This story is in my favs and will be read again soon.  A 10 just doesn't do it justice so I'm gonna give it an 11. 


Author's Response: An 11? Wow. I'm completely honored ;-) Glad you enjoyed the shout out. I like to give the people what they want. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TeamPammy Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2008 03:04 pm Title: Give the Girl a Life Saver

This is really great! I'm hooked! This situation actually seems more real than Casino Night, and you just reminded me of how happy I am that Casino Night happened! lol, great story.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm glad Casino Night happened, too. It kills me to think of missing Jim's confession and kiss. But for fics sake . . .it's fun to imagine. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Team Pammy! So appreciated.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 11:45 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Great way to wrap it up, really! I love that Jim just charms the lady and takes control of the situation - cause wow that was SO awkward! Love that the lady was a "Jenny" - I'll take that as a shout out ;) Hee! Can't wait to see what you are working on next!

Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Glad you enjoyed it. Really appreciate your taking time to read and review!

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 08:13 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

awww sad to see it go but i definitely enjoyed ever chapter


Author's Response: So glad, JRAddict. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 07:12 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

A perfect ending to a wonderful story! Even though it was fluffy, it wasn't "unbelievable" fluff, so it really worked. Thanks for writing and sharing this great story with us :)

Author's Response: You're welcome, honey. So glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to read and review!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 06:10 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Who can resist the cuteness in Chair Model?  Nobody, I tell you!  You'd have to be made of stone!

Mattress shopping -- niiiiiice.  Love this: Pam felt a million kinds of awkward. She felt embarrassed to admit that she’d called off her wedding but was out shopping for a mattress (and practically making out on it in the store) with another man just a few weeks later.   Yes, Pam is the office mattress.

I really like how you wrapped this up, wendolf.  Nicely done. 



Author's Response: Who wouldn't want to do a little mattress bouncing with Jim? ;-) Thanks, as always, lisahoo -- for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: dreamscribe70 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 05:35 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Aww... really sweet, nice ending to a great story! Thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: You're so welcome! It was fun! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 05:33 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

What a perfect ending.  Never apologize; cornball is delicious. 

Author's Response: Yeah, who doesn't like a little cornball from time to time ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nan!

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 05:33 am Title: I Do - A Fluffy Epilogue

Oh, that ending was absolutely perfect!  It made me think of Boys and Girls.  All Pam wants is someone who loves her and makes her feel comfortable in her own skin.  Jim is that for her.

This was an amazing story that I enjoyed from beginning to end.  Thanks so much for sharing.

PS I'm still infected by Chair Model too and I don't want to be cured!



Author's Response: You're welcome, beeswax -- thanks to you for reading and reviewing!

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