Date: April 11, 2008 04:30 pm Title: Seven
love it...goog story, keep going. I am really enjoying, and good fluff this chapter.
Author's Response: thank you so much for another kind review! you're the best! i'm so so happy you like this story. keep 'em comin'!
Date: April 11, 2008 04:13 pm Title: One
This is a great, fun story. It's also great to have our favorite show back! Keep up the excellent work.
Author's Response: I'm so happy the shows back! Last night's episode was great! And thank you for the review and the compliments! It means a lot; truly!
7 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 10:24 am Title: Seven
This is really a great story- sorry I haven't really reviewed before now. This was a great chapter, I loved the parasailing and sharing ice cream. Keep it up!-- (that's what she said)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you've been reading and that you reviewed. I'm also glad that all of the fun I'm having writing this is showing. (: Reviews like yours are the best and they mean so much to an author! Keep 'em comin'!
Date: April 11, 2008 10:21 am Title: Seven
What I really loved about this chapter is that he's really long but it never felt long. There was no plain filler or anything that dragged on longer than it should. I had a lot of fun talking to you while you were writing it especially seeing you hit double your usual goal. I'm also a giant sucker for fluff so all smiles here. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You really are my best supporter on here and it's so great! (: Thanks so much for your review; I'm glad you ended up enjoying it! I'll be sure to write the next chapter and talk to you and the same time again; it kept me awake AND it was fun. (:
Date: April 11, 2008 08:46 am Title: Seven
This was all kinds of amazing. I have never been parasailing and yet the way you described it I was able to get the image in my mind.
T he way you described their whole day was just cute. The ending was touching and heartfelt. Please say the next chapter will be up soon.
Author's Response:
Awwww! Thank you so so so much x 129384719287!! You're the best ever!
Your reviews are the best and I really really mean that! Ahhh! Thank you thank you!
I'll try as hard as I can to get the next chapter up soon!
Date: April 10, 2008 11:21 pm Title: Six
HAHAHAHA! I can actually picture Andy singing off-key on a stage...too funny. And Michael would watch Hannah Montana...also too funny.
I'm glad Jim and Pam made up, but I'm also eager to know if Karen has any other tricks up her sleeve. She can be such a mean girl. I'm glad Jim saw right through her.
Viva la JAM!
Author's Response:
Viva la JAM! I like that! Very clever!
And I'm glad I wrote something that was believable! And you'll have to just wait and see what's in store for our favorite couple and the girl we love to hate. : )
I just finished up the next chapter and let me tell ya; it's pretty long and i REALLY like it's result. So hopefully you'll all be satisfied as well!
Thanks so much for your review! It means a lot! I can't say that enough, but seriously! Keep 'em comin'!
And hope you saw the premier for our show! It was GREAT!
9 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2008 04:00 pm Title: Six
This was such a cute chapter.
Loved the song choice, every time i hear that song on Love Song play list i think of Jim and Pam, especially the clown line.
What can we expect next? Pam pushing Karen over board (Please say yes)?
Author's Response:
It always reminds me of them hence one of the reasons I used it in two of my fics! Haha!
And wow, PokerChips, what's up with you and Karen dying? Are you like, homicidal or something?I'm just playin'. But I'll give you a little spoiler. In future chapters, you'll see another major even with Karen. Don't worry, it won't be causing any problems with our favorite couple, but it will hopefully cause a few laughs!
Thanks so much for your review. You're the best!
Date: April 09, 2008 04:00 pm Title: Six
so sweet, yep, Karen, eat your heart out!
Author's Response: You won't be seeing the end of Karen, but what you may see in further chapters may humor you. All I'm going to say is that it wont mess anything up for our favorite couple. : ) Thanks for the review! You're the best!
Date: April 09, 2008 03:56 pm Title: Six
That was great. Totally made Pam seem less childish in my opinion. Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! You need a Dundie for how fantastic you are, man. You're the best!
10 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2008 03:53 pm Title: Six
SQUEE! How I love my fluff ;).
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so so much! I'm happy you're enjoying it. God, I really really need some new thank you line. I repeat the same thing over and over! Anywho, your review means a lot and I can't thank you enough!
Date: April 08, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Five
i really hope that writing this story has helped to bulldoze down the wall that is writer's block for you! i've read your other stories, and have hoped you'd update/finish them, and same goes for this one! i can't wait to find out what happens next!
and seriously, what is wrong with jim?? hand spasm? i don't know if you've seen the deleted scenes from "branch wars," but there's one where pam admits she's a little jealous that jim is still going along with michael and dwight to see karen! anyways, i ramble. looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response:
I think it has and I'll jump onto finishing those once I'm done with this one! (Oh, that's SO what she said.)
And I saw that and surprisingly, it helped me get this idea for Pam's extreme envy and anxiousness when Karen is within boundaries.
Thank you so so much for your kind review. It brightened my dull and rainy morning! I'll work hard and update this and my other stories soon! Thanks a ton (again)!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 09:18 pm Title: Five
I really hope Pam rips Jim a new one over this....he really shouldn't have done that after he was reassuring Pam that Karen wasn't a threat. I personally love it when Pam is mad at Jim in fics and I hope that you update this story soon!
Author's Response: Then I hope you'll like where I decide to take this next chapter! : ) Thanks for the review; it means so much! Geez, I say that too much, don't I? I need some new kind of 'thank you' line.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 08:36 pm Title: Five
OOOOH! I hope Pam lets Karen and Jim both have it! Karen is obviously going to do that on purpose, but Jim is just... being annoying? I thought he would know better than to even bother doing something like that - he knows Pam is going to go nuts about it!
Author's Response: Well then, hopefully you will like where I end up take this next chapter! Haha! Thank you so so much for another kind review - you're the best! Naw, that is an understatement. How about... you're bomb.com! Oh, I like that!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Five
NOOOOOOO!!!! STUPID IDIOTIC SLUTTY DUMBO KAREN HAD TO RUIN EVERYTHING!!!!!! GRRRRR IF I COULD GET MY HANDS ON THAT BEOTCH...
Echem, sorry about that, but, seriously, way to leave a cliffhanger! Anyway, the way that you wrote that last little interaction seemed real, and now we will get a chance (I hope *hint hint*) to see Jim work a little of his comforting magic. Btw, I totally cracked up at Michael's first joke, about the muffins. And I am such a loser for doing that. But wtvr, this chapter was great, blah blah blah, I NEED MORE!! :)
Author's Response:
You have such a way with words, Jamgela! Haha! All of your reviews make me laugh and smile! They are so sweet and witty! I love that muffin joke. I cracked up the first time and I immediately saw an image of Michael sharing it with the office. It's almost as good as the joke, "THE FISH IS DROWNING!" Oh, I know. I'm just such a comedian. (; Just playin'.
Anyway, thank you so much for every review you have given me! They are the best, really!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:18 pm Title: Five
Sorry I haven't reviewed the other chapters, but I have to say they are all good. I am really enjoying this story. By putting everyone on a boat and giving them no escape is just brilliant.
Oh and I love how you can always make me hate a character (Karen in this one, Roy in your other).
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Oh, PokerChips, how much your reviews brighten my day. ( :
I love you you said 'they have no escape'. It made me laugh and it is so true! I, personally, wouldn't enjoy being imprisoned in a boat with Karen either. I love your reviews so much and each one of them are so kind. Thank you so much!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:15 pm Title: Five
I think this chapter was written really well even though I'm not sure what to think of Pam at the moment. I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this next.
Author's Response: Well thank you so much! And hopefully you'll warm back up to her soon! Thanks for sticking with me and giving me so many helpful suggestions! You're the best!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:07 pm Title: Five
Ok, Karen seriously needs to go overboard! Great story!
Author's Response:
how come i'm getting so many reviews suggesting that? that always makes me laugh. : )
thank you so much for your review! i'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying it!
Date: April 08, 2008 06:00 pm Title: Five
you just had to go there didn't you? ;). karen suX..good chapter.
Author's Response: oh yes, i went there alright. ; ) haha! and I'm glad to hear the chapter turned out well! thanks for the review!
Date: April 08, 2008 05:41 pm Title: Four
Bring on more chapters! The fun is about to begin! I'm looking forward to inappropriate Michael. Keep up the good work (and finish some of your old stories, dang it!) :P
Author's Response:
I was kind of chuckling when I saw your review. I just added a new chapter! Haha! Thank you so much for reviewing; it means a lot! I'm so pumped to know you're looking for updates! Wahoo! I'm glad you're enjoying it! And I'll get on those stories ASAP! Thanks so much again!
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 08:48 am Title: Four
Ooooh.. the confrontation! Hopefully Karen's supposed to be meeting someone else there... like Ryan :P
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. You'll just have to stick with me and see where this turns out! ; ) Haha - oooh the suspense. Anyway, thank you so much for reading! I love getting your reviews!
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 07:39 pm Title: Four
EEEEEE, GAH! I CURSE YOU KAREN!!!!!! If she ruins Jam's vacation, I blame you, because you made her. Lol, jk, I can't wait to see where this story goes. And as long as Jim and Pam are happy in the end, Karen can just go drown herself. Actually, that would make the story 100 times better! :D Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: hahaha! well i myself wish that karen would commit suicide or get pregnant or something but then the story wouldn't be as focused on Jam now, would it? ; ) but you'll just have to wait and see what happens!! haha, i love putting people in suspense. but on a brighter note, i'm so happy to hear you're still enjoying this! it means a lot!
Date: April 07, 2008 06:53 pm Title: Four
Really cute! Although I really hope Karen falls overboard.
Author's Response:
haha, way to make me laugh! i wish sharks would grow legs, go on the cruise, and eat her up, but we wouldn't have much of a story then, would we? unless i were to right fantasy and i'm not to good in that department! haha ; )
Anyway, thanks so much for your review! It means a lot and I'm glad to hear that you are enjoying it!
Date: April 07, 2008 06:17 pm Title: Four
very nice so far, i am enjoying
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad to hear it's enjoyable! : )
Date: April 07, 2008 05:54 pm Title: Four
Why do these chapters keep ending? Are you trying to kill me?
Author's Response:
Wow, you are just too cool, man. Thank you so much! I'll make the next one longer just for you ; ) haha!
Thank you so much again! You're reviews mean so much!
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 02:06 pm Title: Three
Aw, how could you now get many reviews, the story's so good! Man oh man, am I ready for a slap fest between Pam and Karen, I'm not even kidding. Of course, as long as there's JAM fluff, I'm not complaining. Please update soon, and keep up the good work! God, I sound like my teacher. Eh, what can you do?
THREE MORE DAYS!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so so much! That was such a sweet review and it caused a smile to sneak up on my face! Reviews like yours are the best and I can't thank you enough! I'm thrilled to know that you are enjoying this! I have the next chapter written and just waiting for my beta to get back to me. It should be up soon! Thank you so much again!