10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2008 07:14 am Title: The Dilemma
Swedge, this is a wonderfully horrifying premise for a story, and while Lindsey Fünke and the members of H.O.O.P. might be against it, I personally applaud you for tackling it.
Seriously, though, this is hilarious, and I'll be following this one for sure.
Author's Response: Thanks. The delay in both responding to these reviews and in finishing the next chapter is because the main and subplots both got completely outdated by the events on the series. I'd never had that happen before in the middle of a story and am weighing what to do. We'll see but thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: April 07, 2008 01:19 am Title: The Dilemma
I got the biggest kick out of Dwight calling Jim Pepe Le Peu. So many images were conjured of Jim turning into Pepe and Pam the little cat - totally cracked me up!
And then I had images of an uncircumcised Michael, which was far less pleasant.
I think I shall go back to the images of Jim as Pepe, less harmful to the brain.
Author's Response: There's probably a whole different story that could be done about Jim as Pepe. Maybe some day. :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 11:01 pm Title: The Dilemma
I am HIGHLY disturbed. That is to say, GOOD JOB. :)
Author's Response: I know. It's the last thing I wanted to visualize too. Thanks.
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 09:11 pm Title: The Dilemma
OMG! I just about died when I read what Jan wants him to do. I kinda wish that he would have e-mailed Darrly too because his reaction would have been priceless. I can't wait till all of the guys sit down with Micheal to give him advice. I can't wait to see where this goes. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Well I didn't update soon but I did appreciate your response. :)
Date: April 06, 2008 09:00 pm Title: The Dilemma
There are so many things to enjoy about this story -- the spot-on Michael, the great Jim/Dwight, the romance and banter with Jim and Pam...
But I think one of my favorite things is just to see you posting this one. It's been a long time coming. (TWSS) Congrats. :)
Also, Jan has some nerve. Brass balls, one might say. Well, someone not as classy as I am. ;)